Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Chú ý sử dụng từ vựng chính xác (park thay vì pub), dùng thì và dạng từ đúng (liked, played), sửa ngữ pháp (possessive, articles), và làm câu ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn. Thêm một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó dùng 1–2 câu bổ trợ với liên từ thích hợp và chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ tần suất, ai, hoạt động).

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child because they were safe and fun places. For example, I often played football with my friends there and sometimes had picnics with my family. Those visits are a very happy memory for me.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời đã rõ ràng nhưng hãy tránh dùng các mảnh câu và lặp từ; chỉnh ngữ pháp (on weekends, go for a run) và dùng một liên từ để nối ý, giữ tổng số câu không quá 5 và cụ thể hơn về hoạt động.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they are peaceful places where I can relax and exercise. I usually visit on weekends to go for a walk or a run, and sometimes I read a book on a bench.

Gợi ý: Sắp xếp ý rõ ràng: bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó nêu lý do cụ thể với liên từ thích hợp. Sửa ngữ pháp (relaxing → relaxing places/relaxing, good for health, make → make the city look nicer), mạo từ (a small park), động từ (jog, meet). Thêm chi tiết cụ thể về lợi ích để tăng tính thuyết phục.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because they promote health and make urban areas more attractive. For example, a small park near my house is where I go jogging and meet friends on weekends, which improves my mood and fitness.

Gợi ý: Trình bày rõ ràng điểm đến và lý do; sửa từ vựng (City Park → the city park, by the river, walking paths), ngữ pháp (on weekends, work → relax or study?), và cấu trúc câu để tránh mơ hồ. Nêu hoạt động cụ thể hơn và sử dụng liên từ để nối ý.

Ví dụ: Yes, I plan to visit the big city park by the river in the future because it looks peaceful and has pleasant walking paths. For example, I would like to spend a weekend there with friends to walk, take photos, and relax.

× Yes, I really like going to pubs when I was a child because they were fun and safe places to find.

✓ Yes, I really liked going to parks when I was a child because they were fun and safe places to find.

The sentence mixes present tense 'like' with the past time reference 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'liked' to match the time frame. Also 'pubs' is likely a word choice error; context requires 'parks'. Suggestion: use consistent past tense for childhood habits and use correct noun 'parks'.

× For example, I often play football with my friends theirs and we sometimes had picnics with my family.

✓ For example, I often played football with my friends, and we sometimes had picnics with my family.

The phrase 'I often play' uses present tense but refers to past habitual actions; change to past habitual 'played'. 'theirs' is incorrect and unnecessary; remove it and add a comma before 'and'. Suggestion: ensure verbs match past context and remove extraneous words.

× It's very memory for me.

✓ It is a very memorable time for me.

'It's very memory' is ungrammatical: 'memory' is a noun and cannot be modified by 'very' in this way. Use adjective 'memorable' and add a noun like 'time' to express the idea. Suggestion: use appropriate adjective forms (memorable) and include a noun to complete the phrase.

× Well yes, I still like going to parks.

✓ Well, yes, I still like going to parks.

This sentence is grammatically fine in tense but needs a comma after 'Well' for natural speech punctuation. Suggestion: add comma for clarity; tense is present and appropriate.

× I enjoy them because they are peaceful and I can relax or do some exercise.

✓ I enjoy them because they are peaceful and I can relax or do some exercise.

This sentence is correct. 'Relax' and 'do some exercise' are parallel and properly used. No change needed.

× And I usually go there at weekends for a walk or running.

✓ And I usually go there on weekends for a walk or for a run.

Use 'on weekends' (not 'at weekends' is acceptable in British English but instruction expects 'on weekends') and maintain parallel structure: 'for a walk' and 'for a run' rather than mixing noun and gerund. Suggestion: keep parallel forms and correct preposition 'on' for weekends in this context.

× Well I actually would like to see more parks in my city because they are relaxing and good for health and then some make the city look nicer.

✓ Well, I actually would like to see more parks in my city because they are relaxing, good for health, and they make the city look nicer.

Sentence needs commas and a subject 'they' before 'make' to connect clauses. 'Good for health' should be 'good for people's health' or 'good for health' with article; add appropriate subject. Suggestion: add commas, include 'they' for clarity and consider 'people's health' for precision.

× For example, I often go to small park near my house to jogs and miss friends on weekends.

✓ For example, I often go to a small park near my house to jog and meet friends on weekends.

Use the article 'a' before 'small park' and singular 'park'. 'Jogs' is wrong form after 'to'—use base verb 'jog'. 'Miss friends' is incorrect meaning; use 'meet friends'. Suggestion: include articles, use correct verb forms after 'to', and choose correct verbs for intended meaning.

× Well, of course I want to go to the big City Park near my river in the future because it looks peaceful and has nice walking past.

✓ Well, of course I want to go to the big City Park near my river in the future because it looks peaceful and has nice walking paths.

Use plural 'paths' not 'past' (typo). 'Near my river' is odd but may be acceptable; keep 'in the future' which matches the future intention. Suggestion: correct the noun to 'walking paths' and check prepositional phrase 'near my river' for naturalness (e.g., 'near the river').

× For example, I would like to go there on weekend to work and take photo with my friends.

✓ For example, I would like to go there on the weekend to relax and take photos with my friends.

Use 'on the weekend' or 'on weekends' and 'take photos' (plural) is more natural. 'To work' conflicts with recreational context; likely meant 'to relax'. Also add plural 'photos' and 'with my friends'. Suggestion: include definite article 'the', use plural 'photos', and use verbs matching intended activity.