Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cố gắng trả lời trực tiếp hơn bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, chỉnh ngữ pháp (thì, dạng động từ), rút ngắn và dùng liên từ hợp lý. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ hoạt động yêu thích, một kỷ niệm) để làm câu trả lời phong phú nhưng vẫn ngắn gọn (dưới 5 câu).

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often ran, walked and chatted with my family there, and my favorite activity was flying kites with my brother on windy afternoons. Those outings were exciting because we could play freely and enjoy nature together.

Gợi ý: Trả lời trực tiếp và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (thì, cấu trúc), tránh lặp từ ‘now’. Giải thích ngắn gọn lý do cụ thể và có thể so sánh với quá khứ. Giữ dưới 5 câu và sử dụng liên từ để mượt mà hơn.

Ví dụ: Not really — I find parks less interesting now because my interests have changed as I grew up. These days I prefer staying at home to relax and read, whereas I used to enjoy active outdoor games as a child.

Gợi ý: Trình bày rõ ràng bằng câu chủ đề, sửa từ vựng sai (park, not pot/part), dùng lý do cụ thể và kết quả (ví dụ lợi ích môi trường, sức khỏe). Dùng liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh câu dài lủng củng.

Ví dụ: Even though I don't visit parks much, I would like to see more of them in my city because they indicate urban development and provide green spaces. More parks would mean cleaner air, more trees and places where people can relax and exercise.

Gợi ý: Nói rõ tên công viên bằng một câu chủ đề, sửa ngữ pháp và từ vựng (it’s, historical, parks), nêu một hoặc hai lý do cụ thể (kiến trúc, cảnh đẹp, sự kiện) và mục đích cá nhân. Giữ câu ngắn, dùng liên từ khi cần.

Ví dụ: I would like to visit Home Park in the future because it is very beautiful and has a long historical tradition. I want to see its architecture and scenic views, and share Vietnam's beauty with people from other countries.

× I actually went to park when I was a child.

✓ I actually went to the park when I was a child.

Missing definite article 'the' before a specific noun 'park'. Use 'the park' to refer to parks in general contexts or a known park. Suggestion: use 'the' with singular countable places when both speaker and listener understand the reference.

× I usually running, walking or talking with my family when I was a child at park and it's very funny and exciting.

✓ I usually ran, walked, or talked with my family when I was a child at the park, and it was very fun and exciting.

Mixed tenses and incorrect use of -ing form. 'Usually' with past time 'when I was a child' requires past simple verbs (ran, walked, talked), not 'running'. Also 'at park' needs article 'the park'. 'It's' should be past 'it was' to match past context. 'Funny' is awkward for enjoyable experience; 'fun' is more natural. Suggestion: keep past tense consistent and use correct verb forms.

× No, it a little bit boring with me now.

✓ No, it is a little bit boring for me now.

Missing linking verb 'is' and incorrect preposition. 'It a little bit' needs 'it is a little bit'. Use 'for me' to express opinion, not 'with me'. Suggestion: include 'is' and use 'for' when stating personal feelings.

× Now I'm grow up and my hobby will change so now I just want to stay at home and relax with myself.

✓ Now I'm grown up and my hobbies have changed, so now I just want to stay at home and relax by myself.

Incorrect verb form 'grow up' used for a completed state; use adjective 'grown up'. 'Hobby' should be plural if referring to general habits: 'hobbies have changed' and present perfect fits change up to now. 'Relax with myself' is incorrect collocation; use 'relax by myself' or 'relax on my own'. Suggestion: use correct adjective 'grown up', pluralize 'hobbies' if appropriate, and use 'by myself'.

× And though I don't like pot now but I still want to see more part in my city because it show the city grow up and I want to more tree more people in my city.

✓ Although I don't like parks much now, I still want to see more parks in my city because they show the city's growth, and I want more trees and more people in my city.

Incorrect conjunction use: 'And though...but' is redundant; use 'Although' or 'Even though' or 'But'. Many word choice errors: 'pot' should be 'parks', 'part' -> 'parks'. Subject-verb agreement: 'it show' should be 'they show' (plural 'parks') or 'it shows' for singular. 'grow up' used incorrectly; use 'growth' or 'growing'. 'I want to more tree' should be 'I want more trees'. Suggestion: use a single correct conjunction, correct plurals, and appropriate nouns/verbs.

× I want to go Home Park in the future because it very beautiful and has long history traditional and I want to share my people in the world the beautiful of Vietnam parts and communicate with people in the world.

✓ I want to go to Home Park in the future because it is very beautiful and has a long traditional history, and I want to share with people around the world the beauty of Vietnam's parks and communicate with people worldwide.

Missing preposition 'to' after 'go'. Missing 'is' after 'it'. Word order and noun phrases incorrect: 'long history traditional' should be 'long traditional history'. 'Share my people in the world the beautiful of Vietnam parts' is ungrammatical: use 'share with people around the world the beauty of Vietnam's parks'. Also 'communicate with people in the world' -> 'communicate with people worldwide'. Suggestion: add necessary verbs and prepositions, fix adjective order, and use natural collocations like 'the beauty of' and 'around the world'.