Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, ngắn gọn theo cấu trúc: câu chủ đề + 1–2 câu bổ trợ cụ thể. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp, dùng thì đúng (past tense cho quá khứ), và loại bỏ tiếng lặp/tiếng lắp (uh, umm). Thêm chi tiết cụ thể về hoạt động trong công viên (ví dụ: chơi xích đu, cho chim ăn) để tăng tính thuyết phục. Sử dụng liên từ đơn giản (and, so, because) để kết nối ý.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. My parents often took me there every weekend; my mother would feed me snacks while my father bought me small toys. We enjoyed playing on the swings and watching ducks, which made those visits very fun.

Gợi ý: Cần sử dụng thì hiện tại phù hợp và cấu trúc rõ ràng: nêu ý chính rồi giải thích lý do với các chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh từ sai nghĩa (“give my happy death”) và tiếng lặp. Nên nói lý do vì công viên giúp thư giãn, tập thể dục hoặc gặp bạn bè, và nêu tần suất (e.g. sometimes, often).

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks now. I often visit a nearby park after work because it helps me relax and get some fresh air. Walking there for 20–30 minutes clears my mind and reduces stress.

Gợi ý: Ý đáp khá ngắn; cần mở rộng bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và giải thích vì sao muốn thêm công viên (như thiếu không gian xanh, nhu cầu giải trí, lợi ích sức khỏe). Dùng cấu trúc mệnh đề điều kiện ngắn gọn (if) và liên từ để kết nối ý.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city. More green spaces would give people places to exercise and relax, and they would improve air quality, especially in crowded areas. If the city plans new parks near residential neighborhoods, I would definitely visit them more often.

Gợi ý: Cần trả lời trực tiếp về công viên cụ thể hoặc địa điểm và cung cấp lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: hoa anh đào, vườn truyền thống). Tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp; dùng cấu trúc 'I would like to visit...' hoặc 'I want to visit...' và nêu thông tin tham khảo (social media) ngắn gọn.

Ví dụ: I would like to visit parks in Japan in the future. I have seen many photos of Japanese gardens and cherry blossom parks on social media, and I want to experience their beautiful cherry trees, tranquil ponds, and traditional landscaping in person.

× Yes, I usually go to the bus and I try with my parent, my mom and my dad.

✓ Yes, I usually went to the park with my parents, my mom and my dad.

The speaker is describing a past habitual activity as a child, so the past tense should be used (went) rather than present (go). Also use the plural 'parents' instead of singular 'parent'. Suggestion: use past simple for habits in the past and plural for two parents.

× Uh my mom will umm feeding me and my dad will buy me a toys and we working together so funny.

✓ My mom would feed me and my dad would buy me toys, and we would work together; it was so fun.

When talking about past habitual actions, use 'would' + base verb or past simple. 'Will feeding' is incorrect; use 'would feed' or 'fed'. 'Buy me a toys' has an article and plural error; use 'buy me toys' or 'buy me a toy'. 'We working' needs auxiliary 'would work' or 'we worked'. Use 'so fun' or 'it was so fun'. Suggestion: use 'would' for repeated past actions and correct verb forms.

× Yes, when I grow I still give my happy death uh we can every day.

✓ Yes, when I grew up I was still happy; we could go every day.

Talking about past vs present: 'grow' should be past 'grew up'. 'Give my happy death' is unclear; likely intended 'I was still happy'. 'We can every day' should be past ability 'we could go every day'. Suggestion: use clear past expressions for childhood and proper verbs like 'go' with modal 'could' for past ability.

× It's help me a lot and make me feel comfortable after hard working day.

✓ It helped me a lot and made me feel comfortable after a hard day's work.

Tense should be past 'helped' and 'made'. 'Hard working day' is unnatural; use 'a hard day's work' or 'a hard working day' is adjective-noun order issue. Also include indefinite article 'a'. Suggestion: use past tense consistently and natural noun phrases.

× Mm-hmm. Yes, I will go into a new park if I have enough time.

✓ Yes, I will go to a new park if I have enough time.

Use 'go to' rather than 'go into' for visiting parks in general. The future conditional 'will' with 'if I have enough time' is acceptable. Suggestion: replace 'into' with 'to' for common collocation.

× I want go to Japan.

✓ I want to go to Japan.

After 'want' use the full infinitive with 'to' (want to go). Suggestion: always use 'to' before the verb after 'want'.

× I see on social media that Japan have a lot of beautiful parks, parks.

✓ I saw on social media that Japan has a lot of beautiful parks.

Tense should match context: 'saw' or 'I have seen'. Use third person singular verb 'has' for 'Japan'. Duplicate 'parks, parks' is redundant. Suggestion: use correct subject-verb agreement and avoid repetition.

× So I want go to Japanese Japan.

✓ So I want to go to Japan.

'Japanese Japan' is incorrect repetition; 'Japanese' is an adjective and not needed before the country name. Also remember infinitive 'to go'. Suggestion: use 'I want to go to Japan' or 'I want to visit Japan'.