Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện ngữ pháp (thì quá khứ: 'liked', 'went'), chia động từ và danh từ số nhiều/số ít ('parks'), loại bỏ tiếng tặc lưỡi (uh) và lặp từ thừa. Cấu trúc câu nên rõ ràng: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó đưa thêm 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể về hoạt động hoặc một kỷ niệm. Giữ tối đa 5 câu.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. Every weekend my parents would take me to a nearby park where we played games and had picnics. I particularly remember flying kites with my father, which was one of my favorite activities. Those outings gave me many happy memories.

Gợi ý: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng: dùng 'nowadays' không cần 'in', 'I have too much studying' -> 'I have too much study' is wrong; better: 'I have too much schoolwork' or 'I have many deadlines'. Dùng thì hiện tại đơn/hiện tại hoàn thành phù hợp. Tránh filler (uh) và câu không rõ nghĩa ('I usually go this to entertainment'). Trình bày câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó nêu tần suất và mục đích.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy parks, but nowadays I am very busy with schoolwork and deadlines, so I don't have much time to visit them. However, I try to go during breaks or at weekends for relaxation and fresh air. When I do go, I usually walk or read under a tree to unwind.

Gợi ý: Chú ý ngữ pháp (plural: 'parks', 'houses', 'cars'), cấu trúc nguyên nhân rõ ràng ('because...'), và dùng từ chính xác ('historic tall buildings' or 'high-rise buildings', 'crowded with houses and cars'). Nên đưa ví dụ cụ thể về lợi ích của công viên và dùng liên từ để mạch lạc.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because it is full of high-rise buildings and busy streets, so there are few peaceful places to relax. More parks would provide green space for families to gather and for people to exercise. For example, a riverside park with walking paths would be very welcome.

Gợi ý: Làm rõ ý định (nói tên loại công viên hoặc vị trí cụ thể), sửa ngữ pháp ('there are not many parks in my city', 'I have to go to the city centre or another town'), và tránh filler. Nên nêu lí do muốn đến công viên đó và khi nào dự định đi.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would love to visit the large botanical garden near the coast in the future. There aren’t many parks in my city, so I usually have to travel to the city centre or my hometown to find a nice green area. I hope to go there next summer to see the flower collections and relax by the pond.

× When I was a student, I really like going to park because every weekend my parents usually go to the park with me to hang out, uh, play or picnic.

✓ When I was a student, I really liked going to parks because every weekend my parents usually took me to the park to hang out, play, or have a picnic.

The sentence mixes past context with present tense verbs; use past tense 'liked' and 'took'. Use plural 'parks' or 'the park' consistently; here 'going to parks' or 'going to the park' works. Replace 'play or picnic' with 'play, or have a picnic' for natural verb forms.

× So I have many memories in this in there.

✓ So I have many memories from those times.

The original phrase is ungrammatical and redundant ('in this in there'). Use 'memories from those times' to express past recollections clearly.

× Yes, actually, uh, in nowadays I have too much uh studies or deadline work, so I have not enough time to go park, but it varies the break time.

✓ Yes, actually, nowadays I have too much study and many deadlines, so I do not have enough time to go to the park, but it depends on the break times.

Use 'nowadays' without 'in'. Use noun 'study' (or 'schoolwork') and 'deadlines' plural. Use auxiliary 'do not have' for negative present tense. Include preposition 'to' with 'go to the park'. Replace 'varies the break time' with 'depends on the break times'.

× I usually go this to entertainment.

✓ I usually go there for entertainment.

The phrase 'go this' is incorrect; use 'go there'. Use preposition 'for' with 'entertainment' rather than 'to' here. Correct word order: 'go there for entertainment'.

× Yes I would like to see more park in my city cause in my city it has many tall building history or many a house car so it not the place to relax and hang out.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because my city has many tall buildings and houses and cars, so it is not a place to relax and hang out.

Use plural 'parks'. Use 'because' instead of 'cause'. Correct subject-verb order: 'my city has'. Use plural nouns 'buildings' and include 'and' between items. Use 'it is not a place' instead of 'so it not the place' and include article 'a'.

× Yes, of course I want to go some park in my field in the future.

✓ Yes, of course I want to go to some parks in the countryside in the future.

Include preposition 'to' with 'go to'. 'Some park' is unnatural; use 'some parks' or 'a park'. 'In my field' is unclear; likely 'in the countryside' or 'near my hometown' fits better for places outside the city.

× Umm in my city is not have many park, so if I want go to the park I must go to the urban and all my hometown.

✓ Umm, my city does not have many parks, so if I want to go to a park I must go to the urban area or to my hometown.

Use 'does not have' for negative 'have' with singular subject 'my city' (there-be construction). Use plural 'parks'. Include articles 'a park' and 'the urban area'. 'All my hometown' is incorrect; use 'my hometown'.