Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Speak in a complete, grammatically correct sentence and reduce fillers (umm, uh). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Use past tense consistently when talking about childhood.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. For example, I often went with my brother to play among the trees and look at the flowers, which made our weekends relaxing.

Gợi ý: Begin with a direct statement in present tense and avoid repeating fillers. Use one or two coherent reasons linked with a connector (because/so) and give a brief specific example of how parks help you (activity or feeling).

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they help me relax and reduce stress. For instance, I like to take a 30-minute walk in the park and practice deep breathing, which clears my mind.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and avoid repetition. Use a clear reason introduced by 'because' and provide a specific benefit or result. Avoid unclear words ('white') and fill pauses.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide green space for relaxation and exercise. For example, additional parks would give people more places to walk, cycle, and meet friends.

Gợi ý: Give a specific park or type of park you want to visit and state one clear reason. Use future tense correctly and provide a short example of an activity you would do there. Keep to 2–3 sentences without fillers.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the new riverside park next summer because it looks peaceful and ideal for thinking. I plan to sit by the water and read, which helps me stop overthinking.

× Yes, umm, I like, uh, went to green places during my childhood, umm, usually, uh, especially with my brother because uh, we both like this uh, green space and flowers and the environment.

✓ Yes, I liked going to green places during my childhood, usually with my brother, because we both liked green spaces, flowers, and nature.

The sentence mixes present tense 'I like' with past action 'went' which is inconsistent. Use past tense 'liked' and 'went' (or 'liked going') when referring to childhood. Also plural forms 'spaces' and the noun 'nature' sound natural. Remove filler words for clarity. (Grammar problem type ID: 6)

× Umm, yes, I still like going to parks now because, uh, when I go a park, I feel more uh, calm and umm umm, umm, convenient because umm, it's, it helps to reduce stress and the breath, deep breath and they help reduce depression.

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks now because when I go to a park, I feel calmer and more relaxed; it helps me reduce stress, take deep breaths, and it can help reduce depression.

Incorrect phrase 'when I go a park' requires preposition 'to': 'go to a park'. 'Convenient' is not appropriate for feelings; use 'more relaxed' or 'calmer'. Pronoun 'they' was unclear for singular 'a park', so use 'it'. Clean up redundancy and fillers. (Grammar problem type ID: 3 and 11)

× Of course I would like to see more parks in my city because umm, because umm, it's, it's helped me umm, reduce stress and uh, feel more, uh, calm and white.

✓ Of course I would like to see more parks in my city because they have helped me reduce stress and feel calmer and more at ease.

The original uses 'it's' (singular) but refers to 'parks' (plural), so use 'they' or 'parks have'. Also 'white' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'quiet' or 'at ease'—use 'more at ease' or 'calmer'. Remove repeated fillers. (Grammar problem type ID: 12)

× Absolutely, I want to go to in the future, uh, to park, uh, because umm, with any situation, parks help me, umm, think clearly and uh, uh, reduce my overthinking.

✓ Absolutely, I want to go to parks in the future because parks help me think clearly and reduce my overthinking in any situation.

Unclear and fragmented phrasing 'I want to go to in the future, to park' should be restructured to 'I want to go to parks in the future'. Remove filler words and place modifiers ('in any situation') in a clearer position. Keep subject consistent and avoid repetition. (Grammar problem type ID: 26)