Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and direct: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetitions, correct tense and prepositions, and add one or two specific details. Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., “and,” “so,” “because”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went with my grandmother because she took a morning walk every day, and I enjoyed feeding the ducks and playing on the swings with other children.

Gợi ý: Use correct grammar (present simple: “I still go”) and expand slightly with a reason or brief detail to make the answer natural and complete. Use a linking word like “because” or “so.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I still go to the park regularly. I usually go for a morning walk because I like the fresh air and the peaceful atmosphere to start my day.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure: give a clear opinion first, then one or two specific reasons or examples. Use linking phrases like “for example” or “because.” Check plural and article use (“parks,” “there are”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because they are useful for exercise and family outings. For example, current parks are often crowded in the mornings and evenings, so additional parks would reduce congestion.

Gợi ý: Be clear about the type of place (Disneyland is more a theme park) and use correct tense and clearer linking. Start with a topic sentence, then give a specific reason and one detail. Avoid fragmented sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit Disneyland in the future. It holds many childhood memories for me, and I still enjoy Disney cartoons, so I would love to experience the rides and shows there.

× Yes, then I was a child.

✓ Yes, when I was a child.

The sentence uses 'then' awkwardly to indicate past time; 'when' is the correct subordinating conjunction to introduce a time clause referring to being a child. Also use past tense 'was' which is correct. Suggestion: use 'when I was a child' for clarity.

× I love to go in park.

✓ I loved going to the park.

Preposition 'in' is incorrect here; use 'to' with 'go' and include the definite article 'the' for a specific kind of place: 'go to the park'. Also the context refers to childhood, so past tense 'loved' and gerund 'going' sound natural.

× Uh, I remember clearly when I was a child, I went to park with my grandmother.

✓ I remember clearly that when I was a child, I went to the park with my grandmother.

Missing article 'the' before 'park' and missing connector 'that' to link 'remember' with the subordinate clause. Use 'the park' for a specific place. Keep past tense 'went' since the memory is about childhood.

× My grandmother did morning, morning walk.

✓ My grandmother used to go for a morning walk.

Original is ungrammatical. Use 'used to' to express habitual action in the past and the phrasing 'go for a morning walk' is natural. This fixes verb choice and word order.

× Yes, I still going to park.

✓ Yes, I still go to the park.

Present simple is required for habitual present actions: 'I still go'. Also add preposition 'to' and article 'the' before 'park'.

× Now I go there for morning walk and take some fresh air.

✓ Now I go there for a morning walk and to get some fresh air.

Add article 'a' before 'morning walk' and use 'to get' or 'to take' with 'fresh air' is unnatural—'get some fresh air' is idiomatic. This corrects preposition/verb choice.

× Yes, in my city there is there are so many park in areas, different areas different park and people go there for morning walk, evening walk and children play there with other kids.

✓ Yes, in my city there are so many parks in different areas, and people go there for morning walks, evening walks, and children play there with other kids.

Fix 'there is there are' redundancy and subject-verb agreement: plural 'parks' requires 'there are'. Use plural 'areas' and add commas and conjunctions for clarity. Make 'morning walks' and 'evening walks' plural to match habitual activities.

× So there are so many park in my city.

✓ So there are so many parks in my city.

Use plural 'parks' with 'there are'. Also include article if singular, but here plural is intended.

× I wish I will go to Disneyland.

✓ I wish I could/go to Disneyland in the future.

After 'I wish' we do not use 'will' for future wishes about real plans; use 'I hope I will' or 'I wish I could' depending on nuance. If expressing desire/plan, 'I hope I will go to Disneyland' or 'I want to go to Disneyland' is better. Suggest 'I hope I will go to Disneyland.'

× There's so much childhood memories.

✓ There are so many childhood memories.

'Memories' is plural, so use 'are' not 'is' or 'there's'. Also use 'many' with countable plural nouns. This fixes 'there be' and number agreement.

× Belong to Disneyland when I was kid I really enjoy still now I enjoy Disney cartoon so I really want to see Disneyland.

✓ I belonged to Disneyland when I was a kid; I really enjoyed it and still enjoy Disney cartoons, so I really want to visit Disneyland.

Multiple issues: 'Belong to Disneyland' is incorrect—use 'I used to visit Disneyland' or 'I belonged to' is wrong. Use past tense 'belonged' is still odd; better 'I used to go to Disneyland when I was a kid' or 'I visited Disneyland when I was a kid.' Use 'a kid' with article. Maintain past tense 'enjoyed' for childhood, and present 'still enjoy' for current liking. Use 'Disney cartoons' plural. Finally use 'visit Disneyland' for going there.