Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (past tense) and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. For example, the local park had swings and a pond where I played with friends, and being there felt peaceful compared with the noisy streets, so I spent many afternoons outdoors.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence and use correct tense and vocabulary. Avoid fillers like “uh” and unclear phrases. Explain briefly why parks appeal to you now with a specific example or feeling and use linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. They remind me of my childhood memories, and when I visit I relax on a bench and watch people exercising or children playing, which helps me feel refreshed.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use clearer reasons with linking words. Fix grammar and be specific about benefits of parks (exercise, safety, community). Avoid vague statements about ‘following their own path.’

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they give children safe places to play and encourage a healthier lifestyle. For instance, additional parks could reduce street play and provide space for sports and community events.

Gợi ý: Make the response concise and specific: name a famous park or describe what you want to see. Use correct prepositions and compare clearly. Keep to 1–2 supporting sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I hope to visit parks in the United States in the future, especially Central Park in New York. I’ve heard US parks are well maintained, and I’d like to see the landscaping and recreational facilities in person.

× Yes, I like to go at park when I was at my childhood time because a park is a very clean and separate area from the city and village and it shows us happiness and clean surrounding with water swings where children can enjoy with their emotions and physical.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks when I was a child because parks are clean, separate areas away from the city and village that give us happiness and have clean surroundings with swings where children can enjoy themselves physically and emotionally.

The sentence mixes present and past tense and has several article and word choice errors. Use past tense 'liked' for a past habit. Use plural 'parks' to match general statement or keep singular with article. Use 'when I was a child' (natural expression). Replace 'at park' with 'going to parks' and 'water swings' with 'swings' or 'water features' depending on meaning. Use 'enjoy themselves physically and emotionally' for correct pronoun and adverb/adjective forms. Suggestions: keep tense consistent, use correct articles and plural forms, and choose appropriate nouns and pronouns.

× Well ma'am, uh, I am no younger and I am 18 years old, but I still like to going to a park because it is my when I go to the park, it recovered my whole memory of childhood time and I still like to point to the park.

✓ Well ma'am, I am not very young; I am 18 years old, but I still like going to parks because when I go to a park it restores all my childhood memories and I still enjoy visiting parks.

Errors include incorrect negation 'I am no younger' (use 'I am not very young' or 'I am no longer a child'), incorrect verb form 'to going' (should be 'going'), and awkward phrasing 'it recovered my whole memory' (use 'it restores my memories'). Use plural 'parks' or consistently use 'a park'. Maintain present tense for current habits. Suggestions: fix negation, use correct gerund 'going', use 'restore' for memory recall, and simplify phrases.

× Well, I want to see more parks in our city and I want to request my old government members who running our city and I want to see more park because if parks there and children will not follow their own path and they will join a good and healthy lifestyle.

✓ I want to see more parks in our city, and I want to ask our local government officials who run the city to build more parks because if there are parks, children will be less likely to go astray and will adopt a healthier lifestyle.

Problems: 'request my old government members who running our city' uses incorrect pronouns and word forms; use 'ask our local government officials who run the city'. 'I want to see more park' should be 'more parks'. 'if parks there' is ungrammatical; use 'if there are parks'. 'will not follow their own path' is unclear; replace with 'be less likely to go astray'. Suggestions: use correct nouns for officials, correct verb forms, and clear conditional structure 'if there are parks'.

× Well, ma'am, I want you planning to go abroad and I want to visit a park at US because I have listened that in the US country there are very good surrounding and very clean parks as compared to a country. So I want to visit park at the US.

✓ Well, ma'am, I am planning to go abroad and I would like to visit a park in the US because I have heard that parks in the United States have very good surroundings and are much cleaner than in my country. So I want to visit a park in the US.

Errors: 'I want you planning' is incorrect; use 'I am planning'. Use modal 'would like' for polite desire. 'visit a park at US' should be 'visit a park in the US'. 'I have listened' is wrong; use 'I have heard'. 'as compared to a country' unclear; say 'than in my country'. Maintain consistent tense and prepositions. Suggestions: use proper progressive form for plans, correct preposition 'in the US', and use 'heard' for information received.