Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は意味が分かりにくく、語彙や文法の誤りが多くあります。まず主題文で直接答え（Yes, I did/Yes, I loved going to parks）を述べ、その後で具体的な活動（遊んだ遊具、見たもの、誰と行ったか）を2文以内で補足してください。つなぎ言葉（for example, often, usually, especially）を使うと論理的になります。発音や語順に注意して、不要な語句や繰り返しを省きましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child. For example, I often played on swings and climbed on low trees with my friends. I especially enjoyed picking cherries and exploring small corners of the park.

Gợi ý: 内容は伝わりますが文法ミスや不自然な表現が目立ちます。主文で直接答えた後に、誰と行くのかやどんな活動をするのかを明確に述べてください。時間表現や目的（to relax, to play with children）を入れると具体性が増します。接続詞（so, because, in fact）を正しく使い、冗長な語句は削除しましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I usually go to the park with my family—my husband and our two children—and we often have picnics there. It is a great way for me to relax and spend quality time with my kids on weekends.

Gợi ý: 意味が不明瞭な部分があり、質問に対する直接的な答えが弱いです。まずYes/Noで答えてから理由を述べ、具体例（混雑、設備の不足、安全面）を挙げて説明してください。接続語（because, however, for example）を使って論理的につなげ、あいまいな表現を避けましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because the existing ones are often overcrowded. For example, playgrounds are full on weekends, so it would be great to have more green spaces to spread out and relax.

Gợi ý: 回答は比較的明確ですが話し方が繰り返しになっており、語順や時制に混乱があります。まず簡潔に目的を述べ（I plan to study abroad next year and would like to visit Hyde Park in London）、その理由（famous, large, activities）や具体的な計画（walk, picnic, boat on the Serpentine）を1〜2文で補足してください。

Ví dụ: Yes. I plan to study abroad next year and I would love to visit Hyde Park in London with my family. It is famous and very large, so we could have a picnic and take a walk by the Serpentine.

× Yes, I love to go to the park.

✓ Yes, I loved going to the park.

The question asks about childhood preferences (past), so the verb should be in the past tense to match the time frame. Use 'loved' and the gerund 'going' to express habitual past action: 'I loved going to the park.'

× When I was a child, I would usually pray on sea sauce and some cherries and other obstacles like that.

✓ When I was a child, I would usually play on seesaws, on swings, and on other playground equipment.

The original sentence has multiple word choice and sentence structure errors: 'pray' should be 'play'; 'sea sauce' is a mishearing of 'seesaw'; 'cherries' and 'obstacles' are incorrect words for playground equipment. Replacing with 'seesaws', 'swings', and 'playground equipment' corrects meaning and grammar and keeps the past habitual sense using 'would usually play'.

× I really loved going to the corner and spending time getting things and things I would love to you know too.

✓ I really loved going to the playground and spending time playing games with my friends.

The original is unclear and uses awkward phrases ('corner', 'getting things and things', 'love to you know too'). Clarify intended meaning: use 'playground' instead of 'corner' and 'spending time playing games with my friends' to express habitual childhood activities. Keep past tense 'loved'.

× Yes I do. I like to go to the park as my family.

✓ Yes, I do. I like to go to the park with my family.

Incorrect preposition 'as' should be 'with' to indicate accompanying someone. Use present tense 'like' because this question asks about current preference. Add a comma after 'Yes' for natural pacing.

× I have a son and a daughter so and a family of four, so we all go together, in fact a picnic and spend tonight.

✓ I have a son and a daughter, so we are a family of four and we all go together; in fact, we often have picnics and spend time together.

Multiple problems: repetition ('so and a family of four'), wrong tense/wording ('spend tonight' unclear). Correct by clarifying family size and habitual action using present simple 'we often have picnics and spend time together'. Punctuation adjusted for clarity.

× I think it is the best way for me to have a peaceful time in wax nowadays.

✓ I think it is the best way for me to have peaceful time nowadays.

Remove 'wax' which is meaningless here; 'peaceful time' is better without definite article 'a' depending on nuance, but 'a peaceful time' is also acceptable. 'Nowadays' fits present tense. Ensure vocabulary matches intended meaning.

× I guess I think the talks are coming tomorrow these days.

✓ I guess, these days the parks are becoming more popular.

Original sentence is nonsensical: 'talks are coming tomorrow' doesn't fit context. Interpret intent as parks becoming busier or more popular. Use present progressive 'are becoming' or present simple 'are' to describe current trend. Keep 'these days' for present timeframe.

× And also very crowded.

✓ They are also very crowded.

Sentence fragment lacks subject and verb. Add subject 'They' (referring to parks) and verb 'are' to form a complete sentence. Keeps present tense description.

× I go to the park like every weekend with my family and my kids, but usually the obstacles are always crowded so it takes time to close them.

✓ I go to the park almost every weekend with my family, but the playground equipment is usually crowded so it takes time to use them.

Improve adverb ('like' -> 'almost' or remove), correct 'obstacles' to 'playground equipment', and fix 'close them' to 'use them'. Keep present habitual tense 'go' and 'is/are'.

× Yes, I'm planning to study abroad like next from last summer.

✓ Yes, I'm planning to study abroad next summer.

Remove confusing phrase 'like next from last summer'. Use clear future plan 'next summer' with present continuous 'I'm planning' to indicate arrangement.

× So I, I wish to go to London.

✓ So I wish to go to London.

Remove repeated filler 'I, I'. Use simple present 'wish to go' to express desire. The sentence is otherwise acceptable.

× So I, I would like, I would really love to go to Hyde Park, which is very famous and spend time there with my family.

✓ So I would really love to go to Hyde Park, which is very famous, and spend time there with my family.

Remove repeated filler 'I, I' and redundant 'would like' when using 'would really love'. Add comma before 'and' and keep infinitive 'spend' parallel to 'go'. Maintain conditional/polite desire 'would love'.