Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Use past tense consistently and avoid redundancy. For example, change “I always went… because my father and my mother usually went to exercise” to “I often went to the park with my parents because they exercised there.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I often went to the park with my parents because they exercised there every morning, and I enjoyed playing on the swings while they worked out.

Gợi ý: Correct verb forms and clarity. Begin with a clear statement, use correct present tense, and give one specific reason with a linking phrase. Avoid unclear phrases like “keep in mind on when I would like to clear a stairs.”

Ví dụ: Absolutely. I usually go to the park to run because the trails are quiet and help me relax after work.

Gợi ý: Clarify main idea and use correct noun forms. State your opinion, give one clear reason with a linking word (for example, “because”), and include a specific suggestion. Avoid confusing phrases like “puppy park” unless you mean dog parks, and use correct plural/singular forms.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. My hometown needs more parks, especially dog-friendly areas, because many people have pets and currently there are few places where dogs can exercise safely.

Gợi ý: Make a direct, grammatically correct topic sentence and add one specific reason. Use correct pronouns (“its” not “his”) and finish your supporting detail. Avoid vague endings like “People enjoyed doing things that they.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit Central Park in New York City because it is large and peaceful; I am especially excited to see the lakes and walk the tree-lined paths where people jog and relax.

× I always went to the park when I was young because my father and my mother usually went to exercise at the public park so that why I follow them to go to the park too.

✓ I always went to the park when I was young because my father and mother usually went to exercise at the public park, so I followed them to the park too.

Errors: unnecessary repetition 'my father and my mother' (use plural 'parents' or 'father and mother') and tense/agreement 'so that why I follow' is incorrect. Correction changes 'so that why I follow them to go to the park too' to 'so I followed them to the park too' to match past tense. Suggestion: use concise noun phrases and keep verb tenses consistent (past simple for past habits).

× Absolutely, I usually going to the park for running nowaday.

✓ Absolutely, I usually go to the park for running nowadays.

Error: 'usually going' is wrong because 'usually' requires base verb with do-support in present simple: 'usually go'. Also spelling 'nowaday' → 'nowadays'. Suggestion: use 'usually' + base form (I usually go) and correct adverb spelling; or use 'I am usually going' if emphasizing ongoing habit with present continuous but 'for running' is acceptable.

× I'm think that in Clouded city public park is the one that can help me relax and also keep in mind on when I would like to clear a stairs.

✓ I think that Clouded City public park is the one that can help me relax and also clear my mind when I want to unwind on the stairs.

Errors: 'I'm think' mixes present continuous with stative verb; use 'I think'. 'in Clouded city public park' needs article/capitalization and word order: 'Clouded City public park'. 'keep in mind on' is incorrect; intended 'clear my mind'. 'clear a stairs' incorrect article and noun form; use 'the stairs' or 'my mind when I want to sit on the stairs'. Suggestion: use stative verbs in simple present ('I think'), correct noun phrases and idiomatic expressions ('clear my mind').

× I think nowadays my hometown is not have enough of puppy park in the city, so it would be good if that if they have more park tourists or variants of tree to sea and see the happy.

✓ I think nowadays my hometown does not have enough dog parks in the city, so it would be good if they had more parks, more variety of trees to see, and places where people can be happy.

Errors: 'is not have' incorrect verb construction; use 'does not have'. 'puppy park' is wrong collocation; use 'dog parks'. 'more park tourists or variants of tree to sea and see the happy' is ungrammatical and unclear. Correction uses quantifiers and plural nouns appropriately ('more parks', 'variety of trees') and changes tense to conditional 'would be good if they had' to match hypothetical. Suggestion: use correct auxiliary for negation with 'have' (does not have) and appropriate nouns and quantifiers ('more parks', 'variety of trees').

× I would like to go to Central Park with his leave in which is located in New York City, America.

✓ I would like to go to Central Park, which is located in New York City, USA.

Errors: 'with his leave in which' is ungrammatical; unclear phrase likely intended 'which is located'. 'America' better 'the USA' or 'the United States'. Suggestion: remove the unnecessary phrase and use a relative clause correctly: 'Central Park, which is located in New York City, USA.'

× I think it's peaceful and also a huge park that fascinates me to visit. People enjoyed doing things that they.

✓ I think it's peaceful and also a huge park that fascinates me to visit. People enjoy doing many activities there.

Errors: 'People enjoyed' uses past tense incorrectly when describing general present activities; use present simple 'enjoy'. The fragment 'doing things that they.' is incomplete. Suggestion: use present simple for general facts and complete the sentence with a clear object/place ('there').