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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Thí sinh

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Giám khảo

Do you still like going to parks now?

Thí sinh

Do you still like going to parks now?

Giám khảo

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Thí sinh

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Giám khảo

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Thí sinh

Are there any parks want to go to in the future?

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Part 1

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: Your response repeats the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct topic sentence stating whether you liked parks, then add one or two brief supporting details (specific memories or reasons) using linking words like 'because' or 'for example.' Keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they were places where I could run around and play with friends. For example, I used to spend entire afternoons on the swings and playing hide-and-seek, which made weekends very exciting.

Do you still like going to parks now?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: Again, you repeated the question instead of answering. Respond directly (yes/no or sometimes), then explain briefly why and give a specific detail or example. Use a linking word such as 'because' or 'however' to make the answer coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they offer a peaceful escape from the city. For instance, I often go for a jog in the morning and like sitting by the pond to read.

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: The answer should state your opinion rather than echo the question. Say whether you would like more parks and give reasons with at least one specific consequence or example, using linking words like 'so' or 'therefore.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because green spaces improve air quality and provide places for families to relax. Therefore, adding small neighborhood parks would make it easier for residents to exercise and meet outdoors.

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: You need to answer directly and include specifics: name or type of park and why you want to visit. Use linking words such as 'for example' or 'because' and keep your response concise and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the national botanical gardens next year because I enjoy seeing rare plants. For example, I especially want to see the orchid collection and take photographs of the landscapes.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Are there any parks want to go to in the future?

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

The sentence is missing the pronoun 'you' as the subject of the clause 'want to go to.' Without it, the relative clause is ungrammatical. Add 'you' to indicate who wants to go. Suggestion: include the appropriate subject pronoun in subordinate clauses (e.g., 'parks you want to visit').

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