Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you like going to parks as a child?
Thí sinh
No, I don't like to go to parks because I have lots of thing to do so I so I mean I don't have much time to go to parks so it's so pretty, but I really don't like to do 2 parts.
Giám khảo
Do you still like going to parks now?
Thí sinh
No, actually I don't like like going to the park because I was I I'm very busy with my work and other things, so I really ha have time to go to pass. It's so pretty.
Giám khảo
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
Thí sinh
Yes, I denied too because parts are most beautiful and have lots of not how interesting people. So I think uh there will have lots of park pass is so beautiful for us.
Giám khảo
Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
Thí sinh
No, I don't want to go to the pass in the future because I'm very busy with work and other commitments so I really don't have time to visit the park. I do think parks are beautiful zone and I try to go when I have a free weekend, but I.
Did you like going to parks as a child?
Điểm: 32.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰、有语法和表达错误,且冗长重复。建议:1) 直接用一句话回答问题(肯定或否定);2) 用1-2句简短具体的原因支持(使用正确时态和单数/复数形式);3) 避免重复和无意义的填充词。示例句型:"No, I didn't. I was very busy with school and chores, so I rarely had time to visit parks. They were pretty, but I preferred staying at home to help my family."
Ví dụ: No, I didn’t. I was very busy with school and household chores, so I rarely had time to visit parks. They were pretty, but I usually preferred staying home to help my family.
Do you still like going to parks now?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答反复且语法混乱。建议:1) 简洁直接回答;2) 使用正确现在时或现在进行时表达当前情况;3) 给出具体理由并可提及偶尔的例外情况。避免重复词(如"like like")。
Ví dụ: Not really. I’m very busy with work and other commitments at the moment, so I don’t have much time to go to parks. I do visit sometimes when I have a free afternoon.
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
Điểm: 28.0Gợi ý: 内容混乱且与问题不完全对应。建议:1) 明确表达意愿(想或不想);2) 提供清晰具体的理由(比如健康、环境、美观或社交);3) 用连接词(because, so, therefore)组织句子,避免模糊词和口头禅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I would. More parks would improve air quality and give people more places to exercise and relax, which would make our city a nicer place to live.
Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
Điểm: 34.0Gợi ý: 回答自相矛盾且未完成。建议:1) 回答要一致(如果偶尔想去可说sometimes或occasionally);2) 说明具体哪类公园或什么时候会去(例如周末或假期);3) 结尾要完整,不要中断。
Ví dụ: Not really, because I’m usually busy with work, but I do try to visit a nearby park on a free weekend for a walk and to relax.
× No, I don't like to go to parks because I have lots of thing to do so I so I mean I don't have much time to go to parks so it's so pretty, but I really don't like to do 2 parts.
✓ No, I don't like going to parks because I have lots of things to do, so I don't have much time to go to parks. They are pretty, but I really don't like to go to parks.
问题类型:名词单复数错误(Singular and plural issue)。原句中的 "lots of thing" 应为复数 "lots of things";另外句中多处 "parks/parts/pass" 的使用混乱,需统一为 "parks"。建议:遇到表示许多的短语(lots of, many, a lot of)时,后面的可数名词应使用复数形式;注意拼写并保持同一名词的一致使用。
× No, actually I don't like like going to the park because I was I I'm very busy with my work and other things, so I really ha have time to go to pass. It's so pretty.
✓ No, actually I don't like going to the park because I'm very busy with my work and other things, so I really don't have time to go to parks. They're very pretty.
问题类型:现在时态错误(Present tense issue)。原句混用了过去式和现在时("I was I I'm")以及非完成的助动词片段("ha have"),正确表达应使用现在时态 "I'm very busy" 和 "don't have time"。建议:描述当前状况时使用现在时(I am / I don't have),删除多余或重复的词。
× Yes, I denied too because parts are most beautiful and have lots of not how interesting people. So I think uh there will have lots of park pass is so beautiful for us.
✓ Yes, I do too because parks are very beautiful and have lots of interesting people. So I think there will be many parks; parks are so beautiful for us.
问题类型:名词单复数错误(Singular and plural issue)。原句 "parts/park pass" 拼写错误且单复数混用,应为复数 "parks" 或复合表达 "many parks";"lots of not how interesting people" 语序和单复数错误,改为 "lots of interesting people"。建议:注意单词拼写,使用复数形式描述复数概念,并把修饰语放在名词前(interesting people)。
× No, I don't want to go to the pass in the future because I'm very busy with work and other commitments so I really don't have time to visit the park. I do think parks are beautiful zone and I try to go when I have a free weekend, but I.
✓ No, I don't want to go to the parks in the future because I'm very busy with work and other commitments, so I really don't have time to visit the park. I do think parks are beautiful places and I will try to go when I have a free weekend.
问题类型:现在时态错误(Present tense issue)。原句结尾不完整且时态不一致("I try to go" 与前文将来/计划冲突),改为更自然的将来表达 "I will try to go" 或保持现在进行的计划语气。另外 "beautiful zone" 不是常用搭配,改为 "beautiful places"。建议:表达未来意图时可用 "will" 或 "try to",并使用常见名词搭配(place/area)。