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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course I can ride bikes here.

Giám khảo

Do you still like going to parks now?

Thí sinh

Yes, but now I don't ride bikes sometimes. After dinner I went to the for a walk.

Giám khảo

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Thí sinh

Yes, there are more parks in our city.

Giám khảo

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Thí sinh

Yeah, I want to go to the Beehive Park in Beijing because many. Feminist people, Asia.

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Part 1

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答需要直接回应问题并用正确时态。现在学生回答使用现在时且信息不完整,应说明过去的感受并给出具体细节(如什么时候、和谁、做什么)。避免语法错误和多余词。建议使用一句主题句表明喜不喜欢,再用一两句具体描述支持观点,注意时态一致。

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often rode my bike there with my friends every weekend, and we played games and had picnics under the trees.

Do you still like going to parks now?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答时要保持时态一致,并提供清晰的现在习惯描述。学生混用现在时和过去时且句子不完整(如'the'后缺名词)。建议用一到两句说明现在是否喜欢并给出常见活动和频率,使用连词(for example, because)使表达连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, but I don't ride a bike as often as before. For example, I usually take a walk there after dinner a few times a week because it helps me relax.

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 回答没有真正表明观点或原因,只是重复信息。应直接回答是否希望看到更多公园,并给出理由(例如健康环境、休闲场所或城市美化),使用连接词(because, so)解释原因。保持句子简洁不超过五句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide green space for exercise and relaxation, and they improve air quality and community life.

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: 回答不连贯且内容不相关('Feminist people, Asia'无意义)。应给出具体想去的公园并说明原因(景点、活动、名声或位置),用连贯完整的句子并避免无关词汇。建议一到两句说明目的地和具体吸引点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit Beehive Park in Beijing because I have heard it has beautiful gardens and interesting sculptures, and it would be a great place to take photos and relax.

Ngữ pháp

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× Yes, of course I can ride bikes here.

Yes, of course I could ride bikes here.

原句中学生想表达“我小时候喜欢去公园吗?”的回答,时态应与提问(过去)一致。原句使用现在时态“can ride”与过去背景不一致,需用情态动词的过去形式“could”或直接用过去时“could ride/was able to ride”。建议在谈论过去的能力或习惯时使用“could”或过去时。

5: Past tense issue

× Yes, but now I don't ride bikes sometimes. After dinner I went to the for a walk.

Yes, but now I don't ride bikes sometimes. After dinner I went out for a walk.

第一句“There is a tense/content mismatch: 'now' + 'don't ride... sometimes'” — 句子逻辑上虽可接受但更自然表达应为“I don't ride bikes much now”或“I sometimes don't ride bikes now”。但按规则只修正列出的问题类型:第二句缺少地点副词“out”,常见搭配为“went out for a walk”。此外原句中有多余的冠词“the”在“the for a walk”位置不正确。建议使用“went out for a walk”或“If describing a past routine, use past tense consistently: 'After dinner I would go for a walk'。”},{

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