Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer grammatically correct, more concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 supporting details with correct tense and linking words. Avoid filler sounds and unclear phrases (e.g., 'they are to').

Ví dụ: Yes. I loved going to parks as a child. I often went with my parents on weekends, and I usually played games like hide-and-seek with my friends. We always met near a large, special tree that became our meeting spot.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence and correct grammar (present simple or present continuous). Remove vague or filler words and add linking words to connect ideas. Be specific about activities and frequency.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. In Japan there are many parks nearby, so I often visit one close to my house to do my workouts. I usually exercise there three or four times a week and sometimes relax or take photos afterward.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and support it with clear reasons. Avoid rhetorical questions and fix sentence structure. Use linking words to explain advantages of more parks and be specific about what you enjoy.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like more parks, although our city already has many. More parks would mean easier access to green spaces, which would allow me to visit more often and enjoy wildlife and fresh air. For example, I enjoy photographing birds and plants when I walk in parks.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, fix grammar and name usage, and give specific reasons why you want to visit. Replace awkward phrases ('park name called', 'beautiful rainfall', 'calm scenario') with natural descriptions and link ideas coherently.

Ví dụ: Yes. A friend of mine who lives in Osaka recommended a park near her house called Sumi Park. She said the scenery is very peaceful, with beautiful gardens and gentle streams, so I would like to visit to relax and take photos.

× Yes, I love to go in park when I was a child, uh, sometimes I go there with my parents on weekends.

✓ Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child. Sometimes I went there with my parents on weekends.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses. The question asks about childhood (past), so use past tense: 'loved' and 'went'. Also use plural 'parks' or 'the park' and the gerund 'going' after 'loved'. Use 'to' with 'go to the park' or simply 'going to parks' for natural phrasing.

× I often play games with my friends, especially hide and seek.

✓ I often played games with my friends, especially hide-and-seek.

The time frame is past, so change 'play' to 'played'. Also the game name is conventionally hyphenated as 'hide-and-seek'. Ensure verb tense matches the context.

× We have a special big tree in that park we choose they are to.

✓ There was a big special tree in that park that we used to meet by.

The original has incorrect structure and agreement. Use past 'was' for childhood, and a clearer clause 'that we used to meet by' or 'that we used to play around'. Avoid 'we choose they are to' which is ungrammatical.

× Yes, obviously in Japan there are so many parks available in UMM everywhere so I can go when I have a free time, especially I doing my workouts in the park nearby my house and also sometimes.

✓ Yes, obviously in Japan there are many parks everywhere, so I can go when I have free time. I especially do my workouts in the park near my house sometimes.

Use 'there are' correctly but remove 'available' and 'UMM' which is unclear. Use 'many parks' not 'so many parks available in UMM everywhere'. 'a free time' should be 'free time' (no article). 'I doing' is incorrect; use 'I do' or 'I especially do my workouts'. Keep present simple for current habits.

× Yes, I like, but already there's so many parks. Is that OK? Having many parks in my city so I can visit there and enjoy the environment and animals in there.

✓ Yes, I like that, but there are already so many parks. Having many parks in my city means I can visit them and enjoy the environment and the animals.

'There's so many parks' is incorrect; use 'there are so many parks' for plural. 'Visit there' should be 'visit them' or 'visit the parks'. 'Animals in there' should be 'the animals' or 'animals there'. Improve sentence flow and use correct pronouns for plural nouns.

× I love to take photos, uh, so I can enjoy.

✓ I love to take photos, so I can enjoy the scenery.

The original 'so I can enjoy' is vague and incomplete. Add an object like 'the scenery' to complete the idea. Keep present tense 'love to take' for a current preference.

× Yes, I have one. One of my friend lives in Osaka.

✓ Yes, I have one. One of my friends lives in Osaka.

Use plural 'friends' after 'one of' because the structure requires a plural noun: 'one of my friends'. Also keep 'lives' for third person singular.

× She has told me about the park name called Surmi Park nearby her house.

✓ She told me about a park called Surmi Park near her house.

Use 'told' (past) for reported past action; 'about the park name called' is awkward—use 'about a park called'. Use 'near her house' rather than 'nearby her house'.

× Uh, she has told me there's very beautiful rainfall and very calm scenario.

✓ She told me it has very beautiful scenery and a very calm atmosphere.

'Rainfall' is incorrect in this context; likely meant 'scenery'. 'Scenario' is wrong; use 'atmosphere' or 'scene'. Use 'it has' to refer to the park. Use past 'told' to match reported speech. 'Very beautiful' and 'very calm' are fine but pair with appropriate nouns.