Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you like going to parks as a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like I like going to parks with my friend.
Giám khảo
Do you still like going to parks now?
Thí sinh
Yes, I still like going to parks now I finished my homework camping with my friends.
Giám khảo
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like to see more parks in my city.
Giám khảo
Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
Thí sinh
Yes, there are many parks in my future.
Did you like going to parks as a child?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答重复、时态与语法不准确,信息量少。应直接以主题句回答并用一两句具体细节支持。注意时态(过去式)和避免重复词。可以加入地点、活动或感受的细节来丰富内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went with my friends to play on the swings and have picnics, which made those afternoons really memorable.
Do you still like going to parks now?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 句子结构混乱,时态和逻辑不清。应用一个主句回答当前喜好,再用连词和具体细节解释频率、原因或典型活动。避免把不相关的信息混在一起。
Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks now. After I finish my homework, I often go there to relax or meet friends for a short picnic because it helps me unwind.
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短且有措辞问题(应使用 would like 或 prefer 表达愿望)。建议给出原因并举例说明希望增加哪类公园或带来的好处,使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city, especially small green spaces near residential areas, because they provide places for exercise and for children to play safely.
Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 句子不自然且含义模糊。应直接表示是否有特定公园想去,并说明原因或具体的目标(地点、特色或活动)。使用将来时或想去的表达更合适。
Ví dụ: Yes, I want to visit the new riverside park next summer because it has cycling paths and a botanical garden that I've heard a lot about.
× Yes, I like I like going to parks with my friend.
✓ Yes, I liked going to parks with my friend.
学生在回答过去是否喜欢去公园时,应使用过去时。原句重复了“I like I like”,且时态不符合问题(Did you like...)的过去时要求。建议删除重复并将动词改为过去式“liked”。
× Yes, I still like going to parks now I finished my homework camping with my friends.
✓ Yes, I still like going to parks now. I have finished my homework and am going camping with my friends.
原句包含多个独立信息但缺少恰当的连接或标点,且时态混乱。问题问现在是否还喜欢,应用现在时“still like”。后半句描述已完成作业并去露营,应使用现在完成时或现在进行时以表明时间关系。建议分成两句或用连词,并调整时态为“have finished”和“am going camping”。
× Yes, I like to see more parks in my city.
✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city.
原句虽能被理解,但与询问愿望的上下文(Would you like...)更自然的回答是使用情态结构“would like”,表示愿望或请求。建议使用“would like”来更符合语境。
× Yes, there are many parks in my future.
✓ Yes, I would like to visit many parks in the future.
原句把“in the future”与“there are”结合,导致含义不清。“in the future”通常与愿望或计划连用,而不是用来说明存在。因此应改为表达愿望的结构,比如“I would like to visit...”或“I want to visit...”,以清晰表达将来的意图。