Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., "really good" twice) and correct tense/number (use "there were", "on weekends").

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was a child there were many entertainment facilities in our Central Park, so I often invited friends to play there. For example, we enjoyed the playground and small rides, which made weekends fun and relaxing.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, use correct grammar and provide a brief reason with one linking word. Use correct verb forms ("were dismantled") and more natural phrasing ("a waste of time"). Keep to two or three sentences maximum.

Ví dụ: Not really. The facilities in our Central Park were dismantled, and I also have less free time now, so visiting parks feels like a waste of time. If I had more time or better facilities, I might go more often.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and two specific benefits with linking words. Use natural collocations ("improve the city's appearance", "release pleasant scents", "improve air quality") and avoid awkward phrases like "smell fragrance, flavor".

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. More parks would improve the city's appearance and provide pleasant scents from flowers and trees. In addition, they would help improve air quality and offer pleasant outdoor spaces for residents.

Gợi ý: Be fluent and avoid filler words ("uh", "umm"). Start with a clear sentence naming the park, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Use correct phrases ("take photos of it" or "take photos there").

Ví dụ: Yes. In Macau, I would like to visit Crystal Park because it has attractive facilities and a beautiful central tower. For example, I would love to take photos of the tower and explore the gardens there.

× Actually, yes, because when I was young there are several kinds of entertainment facilities in our Central Park, so I usually invited my friends to go there to have fun with each other.

✓ Actually, yes, because when I was young there were several kinds of entertainment facilities in our Central Park, so I usually invited my friends to go there to have fun together.

The sentence refers to past time 'when I was young' but uses present tense 'are'; this is a tense mismatch. Use past tense 'were'. Also 'have fun with each other' is wordy and unnatural; 'have fun together' is concise. Suggestion: keep past tense consistent and use natural collocations like 'have fun together'. Grammar Problem Type ID:6

× That is really good for me because that is a really good way to kill time in weekend.

✓ That was really good for me because it was a really good way to kill time on weekends.

The speaker refers to past experience so past tense 'was' is appropriate (related to present tense issue but primarily article/time expression). Also English uses 'on weekends' or 'at the weekend' not 'in weekend'. Replace 'that' with 'it' for natural reference. Suggestion: use 'on weekends' and match tense to context. Grammar Problem Type ID:22

× Actually no, because I'm older now and the entertainment facilities where dismantled in our Central Park so I think that is waste of time and I don't have enough time to go there to have fun.

✓ Actually no, because I'm older now and the entertainment facilities were dismantled in our Central Park, so I think it is a waste of time and I don't have enough time to go there to have fun.

'Where' is incorrect; the past passive form requires 'were' (verb 'to be' in past) plus past participle 'dismantled'. Also 'that is waste of time' needs article 'a' and 'that' replaced by 'it' for natural reference. Suggestion: use 'were dismantled' and 'it is a waste of time'. Grammar Problem Type ID:9

× Actually, yes, because that I think that is a really good for our city's appearance and also can help us to smell fragrance, flavor because of the flower and the tree and also that can help us to refresh the air that is really benefit for our public life.

✓ Actually, yes, because I think that it is really good for our city's appearance, and it can help us enjoy the fragrance of flowers and trees; it also helps refresh the air, which is really beneficial for public life.

Multiple issues: unnecessary 'that' and word order ('because that I think that is' should be 'because I think that it is'). 'Smell fragrance, flavor' is awkward; use 'enjoy the fragrance'. Plural nouns 'flowers and trees' required. 'That is really benefit' is ungrammatical; use 'which is really beneficial'. Also add commas and connectors for clarity. Suggestions: simplify clauses, use correct adjective 'beneficial', and plural nouns. Grammar Problem Type ID:26

× Actually, uh, in Macau, I see that the, umm, Crystal Park is really beautiful because of the facilities, uh, like uh, the central tour, I think that is really attractive for me because I want take photo with it.

✓ Actually, in Macau, I think Crystal Park is really beautiful because of the facilities, like the central tower; I find it really attractive because I want to take photos of it.

Remove filler hesitations. 'I see that the' is better as 'I think'. 'Central tour' is likely wrong noun; probably 'central tower' or 'central tour' needs clarification—use 'tower' here. 'I want take photo with it' is missing 'to' and uses wrong preposition; correct is 'want to take photos of it'. Also plural 'photos' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'want to take photos of it' and correct noun choice. Grammar Problem Type ID:11