Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar (tense and article use), use a clear topic sentence, limit length to 3–4 concise sentences, and add a specific detail or brief example. Use past tense consistently when talking about childhood and avoid unnecessary words.

Ví dụ: Yes. I often went to the park with a friend when I was a child. We played football and rode our bikes around the path, which was wide and shaded by trees. Those quiet afternoons helped me relax and have fun.

Gợi ý: Make the response more natural by removing contradictory connectors (don’t use both 'just' and 'but' together) and start with a direct topic sentence. Keep it concise and include a specific routine or example to support the claim.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still do. Even though I am busy with my job, I usually spend about 30 minutes in a nearby park after work, because the peaceful atmosphere helps me relax and reduces my stress.

Gợi ý: Use correct nouns and phrases (e.g. 'green spaces' or 'public green areas'), avoid awkward sentence endings, and provide one clear specific reason or example. Keep it within 2–4 sentences and use linking words if adding details.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. I think the city needs more green spaces where people can exercise and relax. For example, families could have picnics and children could play safely in those parks.

Gợi ý: Use correct verb forms for wishes and past experiences ('seen on television', 'I hope I can go next year'). Combine short sentences to sound natural and add a brief reason why you want to visit to strengthen the answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would love to visit Central Park in New York. I have seen it many times on television and it looks huge and beautiful, with lakes and wide lawns. I hope I can go there next year to walk around and take photos.

× Yes, I am usually went to the park with a friend when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I usually went to the park with a friend when I was a child.

The sentence incorrectly mixes present auxiliary 'am' with past tense 'went'. Remove 'am' to form the simple past 'I usually went' which matches the time reference 'when I was a child'. Suggestion: Use consistent tense markers; for habitual past actions use 'usually' + past tense verb (usually went).

× We played a sports, rode a bike around the path.

✓ We played a sport and rode our bikes around the path.

'a sports' is incorrect because 'sports' is plural and the indefinite article 'a' requires a singular noun. Also the original sentence lacks a conjunction and has unclear number for 'bike'. Correct to 'a sport' (singular) or 'sports' without 'a'. Add 'and' to join actions and adjust 'bike' to 'bikes' if both rode. Suggestion: Match articles to noun number and join clauses with a conjunction.

× The peaceful atmosphere helps us relax and have fun.

✓ The peaceful atmosphere helped us relax and have fun.

The context is childhood (past). Using present tense 'helps' conflicts with past time reference 'when I was a child'. Change to past tense 'helped' to maintain temporal consistency. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent with the time frame of the narrative.

× Just even though I'm really busy with my job, but I always spend 30 minutes at the park because the peaceful atmosphere helps me relax and reduce stress after work.

✓ Even though I'm really busy with my job, I always spend 30 minutes at the park because the peaceful atmosphere helps me relax and reduce stress after work.

The original contains redundant connectors 'Just', 'even though' and 'but' together, causing incorrect sentence structure. Remove 'Just' and 'but' so the subordinate clause 'Even though...' correctly links to the main clause. Suggestion: Use a single subordinating conjunction and ensure clauses connect logically.

× Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because parks are public green when people can exercise and relax.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because parks are public green spaces where people can exercise and relax.

'public green' is not a correct noun phrase; 'green space' or 'green spaces' is appropriate. Also 'when' should be 'where' to refer to places. Suggestion: Use the correct noun 'green space(s)' and the relative adverb 'where' for locations.

× For example, we can picnic with my a friend in the park on.

✓ For example, we can have a picnic with a friend in the park.

The phrase 'with my a friend' mixes possessive 'my' and indefinite article 'a'; choose one ('a friend' or 'my friend'). 'Picnic' is usually used as a verb or noun; 'have a picnic' is idiomatic. The trailing 'on' is extraneous. Suggestion: Use 'have a picnic with a friend in the park.'

× I have seen it many times through the television.

✓ I have seen it many times on television.

'Through the television' is not idiomatic; use the preposition 'on' with 'television'. The present perfect 'I have seen' is acceptable to indicate experience up to now. Suggestion: Use 'on television' for media exposure.

× I wish I can go there in the next year.

✓ I wish I could go there next year.

After 'I wish' to express a desire contrary to current reality or uncertainty, use the past modal form 'could' rather than 'can'. Also 'in the next year' is awkward; 'next year' is more natural. Suggestion: Use 'I wish I could' for hypothetical wishes and 'next year' for time reference.