Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more grammatical, concise and add a supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and use one specific memory as supporting detail. Keep it to 1–2 sentences and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I have a fond memory of visiting a park with my parents every Sunday, where we would feed the ducks and have a picnic under a large oak tree.

Gợi ý: Make sentences grammatically correct, use linking words and be specific about benefits. Use one topic sentence and one or two supporting details with clearer vocabulary and cohesion.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Walking in parks helps my mental health because the fresh air and green scenery relax me, so I go there whenever I feel tired or stressed.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and avoid vague phrasing. Use a linking word to contrast local and new parks, and give a specific reason why more parks would be good.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. I often use the park near my house, but I would welcome more parks in the city because they would give people more places to exercise and relax.

Gợi ý: Correct grammar and clarify meaning. Give one clear example of the type of park and why you want to visit it. Use linking words to make the answer coherent and limit length to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes. I would like to visit parks that have food stalls and cafés because I have never been to one and it would be convenient to spend a whole afternoon there without needing to leave for meals.

× One of my great memory when I was childhood is that I went to park with my parents.

✓ One of my great memories from my childhood is that I went to the park with my parents.

'One of' requires a plural noun, so 'memory' should be 'memories'. 'When I was childhood' is incorrect; use 'from my childhood'. 'Went to park' needs the definite article 'the' for a specific park. These changes fix number agreement, preposition use, and article use.

× Yes I do, going park is good for my mental health.

✓ Yes, I do. Going to the park is good for my mental health.

Add commas and split into sentences for clarity. 'Going park' requires the preposition 'to' and the definite article 'the' for a general activity of visiting parks. These correct article and preposition use and improve sentence structure.

× Walk in park makes me relax very much so when I feel something tired or stress I always go to parks to enjoy the beauty.

✓ A walk in the park helps me relax a lot, so when I feel tired or stressed I always go to parks to enjoy the beauty.

'Walk' should be a noun phrase 'A walk'. 'in park' needs 'in the park'. 'makes me relax very much' is unnatural; use 'helps me relax a lot'. 'feel something tired or stress' is incorrect: use 'feel tired or stressed'. This addresses noun formation, article use, adjective/adverb choice, and word choice.

× I usually go the park located near my house, but if I could have chance to visit somewhere far from my town, I would like to go there.

✓ I usually go to the park located near my house, but if I had the chance to visit somewhere far from my town, I would like to go there.

'go the park' requires the preposition 'to'. 'If I could have chance' is incorrect conditional form and missing article; use 'if I had the chance'. These fix preposition use and correct conditional tense and article.

× Yes, I heard some parks where have the facility eating facility in the park.

✓ Yes, I have heard of some parks that have eating facilities in them.

'heard some parks where have the facility eating facility in the park' is ungrammatical. Use 'have heard of' for hearing about places, 'parks that have eating facilities' to describe features, and 'in them' or omit repetition. This fixes pronoun/reference and sentence structure.

× I would never be in like that parks before.

✓ I have never been to parks like that before.

Use present perfect 'have never been' for life experience up to now. 'be in like that parks' is incorrect word order; use 'to parks like that'. 'that parks' should be 'parks like that'. This corrects tense, preposition, and word order.

× So when I get the chance to go like that parks definitely.

✓ So when I get the chance, I will definitely go to parks like that.

The original lacks a clear verb phrase. Use future 'I will definitely go' to indicate intention. Add 'to' before 'parks' and reorder 'like that' to 'parks like that'. Also include a comma after the subordinate clause. This fixes sentence structure and tense.