Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答要注意时态一致和语法准确，避免重复信息并使用连接词使句子更流畅。可以把主题句放在开头，随后用一到两句具体细节支持。注意替换重复词（如 always）并改正短语（close to nature）。

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I used to visit a small park near my home with my parents for picnics, hiking and running, which helped me stay close to nature and keep fit.

Gợi ý: 回答要简洁并纠正语法和词汇搭配问题（例如：most of the time, have extra time, go running）。使用连接词（however, although）让句子更自然，同时减少冗余。

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy parks, but I rarely go because I am usually busy with work and studies. However, when I have free time I often go for a run or a picnic to relax.

Gợi ý: 回答要表达清晰的观点并提供合理原因，避免直译导致的生硬表达（measurements, exchange the environment）。可用更地道的词汇如 government policies, improve the urban environment，注意语法（there are more parks being built）。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. In recent years many new parks have been built near my home because government policies aim to improve the urban environment and provide more green spaces for residents.

Gợi ý: 句子结构需要清晰，避免断裂和冗余（e.g. "the great it is necessary"). 明确指出具体公园或地点，并给出理由和细节。使用正确的介词和从句（I have never been to…; my friends told me it is amazing）。

Ví dụ: There are several parks in Beijing I want to visit, such as the Summer Palace and Beihai Park. My friends say they are beautiful and historically interesting, so I think it's necessary for me to visit them in the future to enjoy the scenery and learn about local culture.

× When I was young I always go to the park with my parents.

✓ When I was young I always went to the park with my parents.

该句描述过去经常发生的动作，应使用一般过去时。原句使用一般现在时“go”与时间状语“when I was young”不一致。建议将动词改为过去式“went”。 (Grammar problem type ID: 6)

× We always have a picnic and hiking and running at the small park near my home.

✓ We always had picnics, went hiking and ran at the small park near my home.

句中动作是过去经常发生，应使用过去时；并且名词和动词形式需要并列一致。原句混用了名词和动名词且时态错误。将表达改为‘had picnics, went hiking and ran’更自然。 (Grammar problem type ID: 17)

× It can help me to close to the nature and do exercise regularly.

✓ It helped me get close to nature and exercise regularly.

‘close to’后不接不定式，应与动词短语连用；另外‘the nature’在此处不加定冠词，且时态应与上下文一致（过去）。将结构改为‘get close to nature’并使用过去时。 (Grammar problem type ID: 11)

× From my perspective, I still like to but the most of time I have a lot of things to finish so I don't have enough time to go to the park to relax my body and mood.

✓ From my perspective, I still like to, but most of the time I have a lot of things to finish so I don't have enough time to go to the park to relax my body and mind.

‘the most of time’不正确，应为‘most of the time’或‘most times’；‘mood’用在此处不如‘mind’自然。整体时态为现在，与原句一致。建议改正短语顺序并修正名词。 (Grammar problem type ID: 6)

× But when I am have extra times I really go to the park to have a picnic or running alone.

✓ But when I have extra time, I usually go to the park to have a picnic or run alone.

‘I am have’是结构错误，应为‘I have’；‘extra times’应为不可数名词短语‘extra time’；并列动词形式应统一，使用不定式‘to run’或动词原形‘run’。同时用‘usually’更符合频率副词位置和语义。 (Grammar problem type ID: 26)

× Yes, through these decades I found there are more and more parks were built near my home in the city.

✓ Yes, over the past decades I have found that more and more parks have been built near my home in the city.

原句时态混乱，‘through these decades I found there are... were built’不通顺。应使用现在完成时表示到现在为止的变化：‘have been built’；并在引导名词性从句时加that。建议改为‘I have found that more and more parks have been built’。 (Grammar problem type ID: 17)

× I think it is related to the measurements or from the government to exchange the environment for the civilian.

✓ I think it is related to measures taken by the government to improve the environment for residents.

‘related to the measurements or from the government to exchange the environment for the civilian’表达不自然且介词使用错误。应使用‘related to measures taken by the government’并用‘improve the environment for residents’更准确。‘civilian’用法不当，改为‘residents’或‘citizens’。 (Grammar problem type ID: 11)

× Park I have never been for Beijing.

✓ There are parks in Beijing that I have never been to.

原句语序混乱且缺少介词‘to’。正确表达应使用关系从句或‘I have never been to certain parks in Beijing’。这里使用There are ... that ... 更自然。 (Grammar problem type ID: 26)

× I think it is very beautiful and my friends tell me it is very amazing and the great it is necessary for me to to go there in the future.

✓ I think it is very beautiful; my friends tell me it's amazing, and I definitely need to go there in the future.

原句重复使用程度副词且句子结构混乱。‘the great it is necessary’不合语法，应改为‘I definitely need to go there’或‘it's necessary for me to go there’。同时删除重复的‘very’或调整为更自然的副词搭配。 (Grammar problem type ID: 13)