Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you like going to parks as a child?
Thí sinh
Umm, yes, when I was a child I really like going to pubs but actually I'm not doing that often because umm, my parents didn't drive me to the park.
Giám khảo
Do you still like going to parks now?
Thí sinh
Yes, I still like going to the park now and umm lately I'm usually go to the park because umm after after school I need to go to park to relax and eat something.
Giám khảo
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
Thí sinh
Umm yes, because I really want to see beautiful scenes in different park and also I think it is easy for people to like go to the park if there are more park in my city.
Giám khảo
Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
Thí sinh
Umm, actually I've, I think I've got many parks before and I think it's enough for me. But if there are new parks in the future, I, I think I still go and try.
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Part 1
Did you like going to parks as a child?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Sửa lỗi phát âm và từ dùng (ví dụ 'pubs' -> 'parks'), rút gọn tiếng ồn (umm) và sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ loại hoạt động bạn làm ở công viên) và nối ý bằng từ liên kết để mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, I liked going to parks as a child. I often played on swings and fed ducks in the pond, which made the visits very enjoyable. However, my parents couldn't drive me there very often, so I only went on weekends.
Do you still like going to parks now?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Giảm tiếng ngập ngừng ('umm'), sửa ngữ pháp ("I'm usually go" -> "I usually go"), dùng liên từ để nối lý do và kết quả. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể về hoạt động bạn làm khi ở công viên.
Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to the park. I usually go there after school to relax and have a snack, and sometimes I read a book or meet friends, which helps me unwind.
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: Tránh lặp từ và sửa ngữ pháp ("different park" -> "different parks", "more park" -> "more parks"). Dùng cụm từ phong phú hơn (e.g., 'green spaces', 'accessible') và nêu lý do cụ thể, kèm liên từ để mạch lạc.
Ví dụ: Yes, I would. More parks would provide varied green spaces and pleasant scenery, and they would make it easier for people to access outdoor areas for exercise and relaxation.
Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: Loại bỏ lặp và ngập ngừng, cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn. Nên đưa ra ý kiến cụ thể (ví dụ loại công viên bạn muốn thử) và sử dụng liên từ để giải thích điều kiện và ý định.
Ví dụ: I don't have a specific park in mind because there are already many I like, but if a new park opened I would definitely visit, especially if it had interesting features such as a botanical garden or a lakeside walking path.
Ngữ pháp
× Umm, yes, when I was a child I really like going to pubs but actually I'm not doing that often because umm, my parents didn't drive me to the park.
✓ Umm, yes, when I was a child I really liked going to parks but actually I didn't do that often because umm, my parents didn't drive me to the park.
The student is describing past habitual actions, so the past simple tense should be used ('liked', 'didn't do') instead of present simple ('like', 'I'm not doing'). Also 'pubs' is likely a word choice error for 'parks'; ensure correct noun. Suggestion: use past simple for actions in the past and check noun choice.' '},{
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