Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문장 구조와 시제 사용에 주의하세요. 현재형과 과거형이 혼용되어 혼란을 주고 반복(예: “I liked I liked”)이 있습니다. 주제문을 명확히 하고 과거 시제를 일관되게 사용하세요. 또한 불필요한 중복을 제거하고 한두 개의 구체적 세부사항(예: 어떤 활동을 했는지)을 덧붙이면 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I used to go to the park every morning with my mother when I was a child, and we often fed the ducks and played on the swings.

Gợi ý: 응답은 비교적 명확하지만 관사 사용과 동사 어형(예: "go to the park", "go running")을 다듬어 자연스럽게 만드세요. 링크어(예: “because”)는 잘 사용했지만 문장을 더 간결하게 하고 구체적 빈도나 이유를 추가하면 더 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to the park. I usually go running there every morning because the fresh air and quiet atmosphere make me feel refreshed and ready for the day.

Gợi ý: 의도를 전달하려 했으나 어휘 선택과 문장 완성이 부정확합니다(예: "I want to various"는 의미 불명). 명확한 이유와 구체적 기대(예: 큰 잔디밭, 놀이시설)를 제시하고 연결어를 사용해 논리적으로 말하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. There are only two small parks near my house, so I would like to see more and larger parks with open lawns and playgrounds where families can relax and children can play.

Gợi ý: 어휘와 발음 문제로 의미 전달이 어렵습니다(예: "intercourse"는 부적절한 단어 선택). 어떤 시설을 원하시는지(수영장, 운동시설, 테니스장 등)를 정확한 단어로 바꾸고 문장을 간결하게 구성하세요. 또한 이유를 명확히 제시하세요.

Ví dụ: In the future, I would like to visit a park that has a swimming pool, a gym, and tennis courts because I enjoy exercising and these facilities would let me do different workouts.

× Yes, I like, yes I did. I liked I liked to going to park when I was young.

✓ Yes, I did. I liked going to the park when I was young.

The student mixes present and past tenses and uses an incorrect verb form. Use past tense 'did' and past 'liked' consistently, and use the gerund 'going' after 'liked'. Also include the definite article 'the' with 'park' when referring to a specific park. Suggestion: say 'I liked going to the park when I was young.'

× So my mom take me to the park every morning.

✓ So my mom took me to the park every morning.

The sentence refers to a past habitual action, so the verb should be in past simple 'took' not present 'take'. Also keep 'the park' for a specific place. Suggestion: use past tense for past routines: 'my mom took me'.

× Yes, I like to go to the park, so usually I go to park to do running in the morning because it makes me feel refreshed.

✓ Yes, I like to go to the park, so usually I go to the park to run in the morning because it makes me feel refreshed.

Missing definite article before the second 'park' and incorrect verb form 'to do running'. Use 'to run' or 'go running'. Use 'the park' when referring to a specific park. Suggestion: 'I go to the park to run' or 'I go running in the park.'

× Yes, I like to see more parks and because umm in my town there are two parks near my house but the parks are very small so I want to various.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks because in my town there are only two small parks near my house, and they are very small, so I want more variety.

The original mixes conjunctions ('and because') incorrectly and has unclear phrase 'I want to various'. Use 'would like' for preference, remove redundant conjunctions, and replace 'various' with 'more variety' or 'more parks'. Suggestion: separate ideas clearly and use appropriate nouns: 'I want more variety' or 'I want more parks.'

× MMM I want to go to park in the future that compo uh are compo consists of swimming and better intercourse and tennis courts.

✓ I want to go to a park in the future that has a swimming pool, a better indoor area, and tennis courts.

Missing article before 'park' and many word choices are incorrect or unclear: 'compo' and 'intercourse' are wrong. Use 'a park' for a non-specific park and 'has' to describe facilities. Replace 'swimming' with 'swimming pool' and correct 'tennis courts'. If you meant an indoor recreational area, use 'indoor area' or 'recreation center'. Suggestion: 'a park that has a swimming pool, an indoor recreation area, and tennis courts.'

× I want to this park because I one I love to exercise.

✓ I want to go to this park because I love to exercise.

Unnecessary words 'I one' and missing verb 'go'. Use 'want to go to this park' and follow with the reason 'because I love to exercise.' Suggestion: keep sentences concise: 'I want to go to this park because I love to exercise.'