Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Correct verb forms and pluralization (e.g., "I liked going to parks" or "I used to like going to parks") and avoid repetition. Use a linking phrase if you add a reason (e.g., "because" or "as").

Ví dụ: I liked going to parks as a child because I loved being surrounded by trees and flowers. For example, I enjoyed looking at roses and climbing small hills with my family, which made our outings relaxing and fun.

Gợi ý: Give a concise direct answer and avoid filler words and repetition. Use correct verb forms ("I love playing" not "I love to playing"). Mention one or two specific activities and briefly explain why you enjoy them, using a linking word like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks with my husband and family because it is a great place to exercise and relax. For instance, I often play badminton and throw a ball with my cousins, and I also like walking among the trees and admiring the flowers.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear, well-structured reason and avoid hesitations. Use accurate collocations ("more parks" and "clean air"), and keep sentences brief. Give one specific benefit of more parks and link it with "because" or "so".

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide space for exercise. For example, more greenery would reduce pollution and give people places to walk, relax, and stay healthy.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and avoid confusing negatives and repetition. If you mean you have no specific future plans, say so clearly ("I don't have any particular park in mind"). Provide a brief reason and, if possible, add a short positive comment about nearby parks.

Ví dụ: I don't have any particular park I want to visit in the future because there are several parks near my home that I already enjoy. I usually go to the nearby park with my family since it has good walking paths and playgrounds.

× Yeah, I like to go fast cause of I love nature and green tree trees.

✓ Yeah, I liked going to parks because I loved nature and green trees.

The student is referring to childhood, so past tense should be used. 'Cause of' is informal and incorrect here; use 'because'. 'Green tree trees' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'green trees'. Use past tense verbs 'liked' and 'loved' to match 'as a child'. Suggestion: Use 'liked'/'loved' for past habits and say 'green trees' rather than repeating words.

× I love plants like rose, White Rose and many more and I love to go there with my family as.

✓ I loved plants like roses, white roses and many others, and I loved going there with my family.

Plural form 'rose' should be 'roses' when speaking generally. Adjective 'White' should be lowercase 'white'. 'Many more' is awkward; use 'many others'. 'I love to go there with my family as' is ungrammatical and should be 'I loved going there with my family'. Maintain past tense for childhood. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements and ensure adjectives are lowercase unless proper nouns.

× Yes, I still like going to parks with my husband and family members.

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks with my husband and other family members.

This sentence is mostly correct but 'family members' sounds distant; add 'other' for clarity. 'Still like' correctly uses present tense for current habit. Suggestion: add 'other' to indicate additional relatives.

× Uh, I love to playing with, I love to play there with my, I love to play there with my cousins, like uh, games, etcetera, like bad ball and badminton.

✓ I love to play there with my cousins, playing games like ball games and badminton.

Remove fragmented pronoun phrases and incorrect 'to playing' (should be 'to play' or 'playing'). 'Bad ball' is unclear; use 'ball games' or specify the game. Combine fragments into a single clear sentence. Suggestion: choose either 'I love to play' or 'I enjoy playing' and avoid repetition.

× And I also love the nature trees and flowers.

✓ I also love the trees and flowers in nature.

Phrase 'nature trees' is incorrect; 'trees and flowers in nature' or 'natural trees and flowers' is better. Reorder for natural English. Suggestion: say 'trees and flowers' or 'nature's trees and flowers'.

× Yes, I like to see more parks in my city because nature is the part of our life.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because nature is part of our lives.

Use 'would like' to express desire. 'The part of our life' is unidiomatic; use 'part of our lives'. Suggestion: use 'would like' for polite preferences and plural 'lives' for general human experience.

× Greenery and green trees are I love and due to uh, green trees in around us, uh, atmosphere will be very clean and our health will be fine.

✓ I love greenery and green trees, and because of the trees around us the air will be much cleaner and our health will be better.

Sentence has word order and article errors. 'Greenery and green trees are I love' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'I love greenery and green trees'. 'Due to ... in around us' is incorrect; use 'because of the trees around us'. 'Atmosphere' used for 'air' here; 'air' is more natural. Use comparative 'cleaner' and 'better' for health. Suggestion: simplify and use 'because of' plus correct noun choices.

× No, as such not any part that I want to go in the future because there is there are many paths around my house and I love that parks and I don't think so that in future I love to go in their park.

✓ No, there is no particular park I want to go to in the future because there are many parks near my house that I already love, so I don't think I will want to visit others.

Multiple structural and agreement errors: 'as such not any part' should be 'there is no particular park'; 'there is there are' is redundant; 'I love that parks' has agreement errors and wrong pronoun; 'in future I love to go in their park' is ungrammatical. Use consistent tense and subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: simplify to a clear sentence stating there is no specific park desired because nearby parks are sufficient.