Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more grammatical, concise and fluent. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), use correct verb forms and give one or two specific supporting details. Link ideas with a short connector if needed.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I loved going to parks as a child because they were fun places to play. For example, my parents often took me to the playground and sometimes bought me small treats, which made those visits special.

Gợi ý: Make your answer clearer and grammatically correct. Use one topic sentence, then give specific reasons with linking words. Avoid vague fragments and correct subject-verb agreement.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I still enjoy parks because they offer many activities, such as playgrounds where children play together. Also, the air is much fresher there, which makes walking or reading outdoors more relaxing.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and organize ideas: state your opinion, then give two clear, specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'and'. Remove repetition and filler words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide quiet places to study in the fresh air and good spots to meet friends. In addition, more parks would improve the local environment by increasing greenery.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and complete sentences. Begin with a clear response, then give specific details about which park and why. Mention timing and one clear reason to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I want to visit a new park that has been under construction since 2024. It is near my house and looks very attractive, so I would like to go there to take photos and relax.

× Yes, I did as a child, I enjoyed go to the parks, uh, because, uh, there was fun, fun and, uh, my parents always, uh, brought me, uh, small gifts and.

✓ Yes, I did. As a child, I enjoyed going to the parks because they were fun, and my parents always brought me small gifts.

Errors: 'enjoyed go' uses base verb after past verb; correct form is gerund 'going' (Grammar Problem Type ID 8 also applies but primary is Past tense issue). 'there was fun, fun' is awkward and wrong tense/structure; use 'they were fun' to refer to parks. Run-on sentence: split into two sentences and remove filler words. Suggestion: Use past simple consistently for past habits and use gerund after verbs like 'enjoy'.

× Yes I do. I enjoy going to parks because they have lots of fun things like there are always children plays with each other and.

✓ Yes, I do. I enjoy going to parks because there are lots of fun things, and children always play with each other.

Errors: 'they have lots of fun things like there are always children plays with each other' mixes clauses and uses incorrect verb form 'plays' with plural subject 'children' (subject-verb agreement, ID 27). Also word order is awkward. Correction: use 'there are' then 'children always play' with base verb for plural subject. Suggestion: Keep clauses concise and match verb number to subject.

× Their the air is so fresh because they have many.

✓ The air there is so fresh because there are many trees.

Errors: 'Their' is incorrect homophone for 'there' and 'they have many' lacks an object. Use 'the air there' for location and specify what 'many' refers to (trees). Suggestion: Use 'there' for location, and include the noun after quantifiers like 'many'.

× Yes, I would say many parks in my hometown because I, I want to go to there for studying in fresh air or meet with my closest friends or acquaintances and uh, it would be better for our nature.

✓ Yes, I would like more parks in my hometown because I want to go there to study in the fresh air or meet my closest friends and it would be better for the environment.

Errors: 'I would say many parks' is awkward; use 'I would like more parks'. 'go to there' is incorrect word order; use 'go there'. 'for studying in fresh air' should be 'to study in the fresh air' (infinitive). 'meet with' can be 'meet', and 'better for our nature' is unnatural—use 'better for the environment'. Suggestion: Use natural collocations (like 'like more parks', 'go there', 'study in the fresh air').

× Yes, I want to go to parks which has. Been constructing since 2024 because it's located near my house and it looks so beautiful to take a photo.

✓ Yes, I want to go to the parks which have been under construction since 2024 because they are located near my house and they look very beautiful for taking photos.

Errors: 'which has. Been constructing' fragments and misuses tense. Use present perfect passive 'have been under construction'. 'parks' is plural so use 'have' not 'has' (subject-verb agreement, ID 27). 'it' should be 'they' to match plural 'parks'. 'to take a photo' -> 'for taking photos' or 'to take photos'. Suggestion: Use correct passive forms ('have been under construction') and match verb number to subject.