Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문법과 시제 사용을 고쳐야 합니다. 과거에 대한 질문에는 과거 시제를 사용하고, 동사 형태와 관사를 정확히 쓰세요. 또한 답변은 주제 문장(예: Yes/No + 이유)으로 시작하고, 연결어를 사용해 세부사항을 덧붙이세요. 문장이 반복되거나 불필요한 말(예: “going to going”, “And nowadays?”)은 줄이세요. 구체적인 예(예: 부모님과 놀았던 활동, 좋아했던 장소)를 하나 추가하면 더 자연스럽습니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I often went to the local park near my house because my parents used to take me there every weekend. I enjoyed playing on the swings and having picnics, so those visits always made me feel happy and energetic.

Gợi ý: 좋은 시작입니다. 현재에 대한 말이므로 현재 시제를 사용한 것은 옳지만, 불필요한 중복(예: 'to to', 'walk walk, walk')을 피하고 형용사·부사 구문을 더 자연스럽게 표현하세요. 주제문 다음에 이유를 연결어(For example, Because, As a result 등)로 이어 구체적인 활동(예: 조깅, 책읽기, 산책로 풍경 묘사)을 한두 문장 덧붙이세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I still enjoy going to parks because walking there helps me relax and clear my mind. For example, I often take a quiet walk along the tree-lined paths and sometimes read a book on a bench, which makes me feel refreshed.

Gợi ý: 질문은 의향을 묻고 있으므로 'Would you like...'에는 'Yes, I would'가 더 자연스럽습니다. 문장을 명확하게 만들려면 하나의 주제 문장으로 시작하고, 이유를 논리적으로 제시하세요. 지명이나 비교(예: Seoul parks) 등을 언급할 때는 구체적으로 어떤 점이 좋은지 설명하세요. 문법(관사, 복수/단수)과 어순을 바로잡으세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. I would like to see more parks in my city because parks like those in Seoul have beautiful landscaping and many flowers. More parks would provide residents with nicer places to relax and enjoy nature.

Gợi ý: 미래 계획을 말할 때는 'I would like to visit' 또는 'I plan to visit'와 같은 표현이 더 자연스럽습니다. 이유를 구체적으로 제시하고, 어떤 시설(예: playgrounds, cafés, walking trails) 때문에 가고 싶은지 설명하세요. 불필요한 반복을 피하고 문장 수를 2~3문장으로 간결하게 유지하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I plan to visit a large botanical park next year because it has many flower gardens and recreational facilities. For instance, I want to see the seasonal blooms and try the park's outdoor café and walking trails.

× In my childhood, I often go to the parks because I like to going.

✓ In my childhood, I often went to the park because I liked going.

The student mixed present tense with a past time expression (in my childhood). Use past tense 'went' and 'liked'. Also 'to the parks' should be 'to the park' (article and singular/plural context) and 'to going' is incorrect; use gerund without 'to' or change structure. Suggestion: match verb tense to time frame and use correct gerund form: 'I often went to the park because I liked going.'

× I like going to park and this is because it made me feel happy.

✓ I liked going to the park because it made me feel happy.

With a general noun like 'park' in this context, use the definite article 'the' or make noun plural: 'the park' or 'parks'. Also tense must match past ('made' already past) so change 'like' to 'liked'. Suggestion: use 'the park' and past tense: 'I liked going to the park because it made me feel happy.'

× And nowadays?

✓ And what about nowadays?

Asking 'And nowadays?' is informal and lacks a verb or clear structure. Add a phrase to form a proper question: 'And what about nowadays?' or 'How about nowadays?' Suggestion: use 'What about nowadays?' to prompt current habits.

× Yes I do. I still like going to to park now.

✓ Yes, I do. I still like going to the park now.

Redundant 'to' and missing article 'the' before 'park'. Also punctuation after 'Yes' improves clarity. Suggestion: remove duplicate preposition and add 'the'.

× This is because it makes me feel happy when I walk walk, walk in the park.

✓ This is because it makes me feel happy when I walk in the park.

Repeating 'walk' is a speech disfluency; grammatically only one verb is needed. 'Walk' is correct in present simple for habitual action. Suggestion: omit repetitions: 'when I walk in the park.'

× I feel relaxing.

✓ I feel relaxed.

'Relaxing' is an adjective describing something that causes relaxation; 'relaxed' describes a person’s state. Use 'relaxed' to express how you feel. Suggestion: say 'I feel relaxed.'

× Yes I will. They are so beautiful parks such as Seoul parks, there are so many flower so I want to go this park.

✓ Yes, I would. There are many beautiful parks in Seoul. There are so many flowers, so I want to visit this park.

Multiple errors: 'Yes I will' is not a natural reply to 'Would you like...' Use 'Yes, I would' or 'Yes, I would like to.' 'They are so beautiful parks' has incorrect word order and article usage; say 'There are many beautiful parks.' 'Seoul parks' should be 'parks in Seoul.' 'so many flower' needs plural 'flowers.' 'go this park' requires 'visit' or 'go to this park.' Suggestions: use polite conditional for preferences and correct noun phrases: 'Yes, I would. There are many beautiful parks in Seoul. There are so many flowers, so I want to visit this park.'

× Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

✓ Are there any parks you would like to go to in the future?

Original sentence is grammatical but sounds informal given exam context; adding 'would like to' fits polite preference questions. Also no article error strictly, but adjusting to match conversation tone. Suggestion: use 'would like to' for polite future preferences.

× Yes, I will go to some park.

✓ Yes, I will go to a park.

Use the indefinite article 'a' with singular countable noun 'park'. 'Some park' is unnatural in this context. Suggestion: say 'I will go to a park' or 'I will visit some parks.'

× This is because there are so many flowers and so many entertainment facility.

✓ This is because there are so many flowers and so many entertainment facilities.

'Facility' must be plural 'facilities' to agree with 'so many'. Also 'so many' requires a plural noun. Suggestion: use plural 'facilities' or rephrase: 'many entertainment facilities.'

× In the future, I will go for some park.

✓ In the future, I will go to some parks.

Preposition 'for' is incorrect with 'go' plus destination; use 'go to.' Also 'some park' should be plural or 'a park.' Better: 'go to some parks' or 'go to a park.' Suggestion: 'In the future, I will go to some parks.'