Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer grammatically correct, more concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and give one or two specific details about the park (features or activities). Use linking words if you add details.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. There was a famous park near my hometown called Umm Yaito Park, located in the center of the island. It had large playgrounds and shady trees where we played football and picnicked, so I spent many happy afternoons there.

Gợi ý: Make your answer clearer and grammatically correct. Give a direct topic sentence about current habit, then add a linked reason and one specific example. Avoid repetition and incomplete phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, especially with close friends. Since I graduated and have more free time, I often spend afternoons walking in the park or sitting on benches to talk and relax with friends.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give specific reasons and examples of improvements you want. Use correct grammar and linking words (for example, because, such as). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more diverse parks in my city because most existing ones are just open grass areas with few facilities. For example, I would like parks with playgrounds, exercise equipment and small cafés so different age groups can enjoy them.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and correct tense usage. State why you want to revisit with specific details about what you enjoy there. Keep it concise and avoid redundant phrases.

Ví dụ: I would love to visit Central Park in New York City again because it is one of the largest urban parks in the world. I visited once before and enjoyed the lakes, wide trails and street performers, so I would like to return to experience it more fully.

× Yes, I love to going to park when I was young.

✓ Yes, I loved going to parks when I was young.

The original sentence mixes 'love to going' which is ungrammatical. After a verb like 'love' use either 'to' + base verb or the gerund, but not both. Also tense should match 'when I was young' (past), so use 'loved'. Use plural 'parks' or 'the park' for general meaning. Suggestion: 'I loved going to parks when I was young.'

× There's a really famous park near my hometown called Umm Yaito Park.

✓ There's a really famous park near my hometown called Umm Yaito Park.

This sentence is acceptable, but ensure 'There's' contracts 'There is' which suits 'a park'. No change needed. (Included to show no article error.)

× It is it is made.

✓ It was built.

'It is it is made' is repetitive and ungrammatical. To describe how the park was constructed, use passive past 'was built'. Also avoid repetition.

× It is located in the island, the center center of the city island.

✓ It is located on the island in the center of the city.

Use 'on the island' rather than 'in the island'. Remove duplicated words and place modifiers in correct order: 'in the center of the city' describes location. Also avoid repeating 'island' unnecessarily.

× Yes, I'm still love to go to park these days, especially with my close friend after I graduate I have I have a lot of leisure time so every almost every day hang hang out with my friend going on a bar, park or even.

✓ Yes, I still like to go to parks these days, especially with my close friends. After I graduated I had a lot of free time, so almost every day I hung out with my friends, going to bars or parks.

Multiple errors: 'I'm still love' mixes present tense and verb form; use 'still like' for present habit. 'to go to park' needs article or plural: 'go to parks' or 'go to the park'. Tense consistency requires past for 'after I graduate' if referring to past—use 'graduated' and 'had'. Remove repetitions and order words correctly: 'almost every day I hung out' and 'bars or parks'.

× Yes, I would like to see more various park in the city because I only can see the park just grass and nothing facility in that.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more varied parks in the city because I can only see parks with just grass and no facilities.

'More various park' is incorrect; use 'more varied parks' or 'more parks with variety'. 'I only can see' should be 'I can only see'. 'Just grass and nothing facility' is ungrammatical; use 'just grass and no facilities'. Maintain plural consistency.

× So I would like to see park that have more modern buildings.

✓ So I would like to see parks that have more modern facilities.

'See park' needs plural or article: 'see parks' or 'see a park'. 'More modern buildings' may be acceptable, but 'facilities' is more natural for parks. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'parks that have'.

× I really want to go on a Central Park in New York City because it's one of the biggest park in the world and I've been there actually, and it was a such a good memory to me, so I wanted to visit there again.

✓ I really want to go to Central Park in New York City because it's one of the biggest parks in the world. I've been there before and it was such a good memory for me, so I want to visit it again.

Use 'go to Central Park' not 'go on'. Do not use 'a' before a proper name. 'One of the biggest park' needs plural 'parks'. 'I've been there actually' is better as 'I've been there before'. 'It was a such a good memory to me' is ungrammatical; use 'it was such a good memory for me' or 'I have such good memories of it'. Maintain consistent tense: use present desire 'I want to visit it again'.