Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and reduce filler words (umm, uh). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Mention a specific memory or activity to make the answer more vivid.

Ví dụ: Yes — I loved going to parks as a child. For example, I went on many school trips to local parks where we played games and had picnics, and because my city is mountainous, the parks often had great views which made the trips memorable.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and unnecessary pauses. Give a clear main idea and one or two concrete reasons or examples, using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they help me relax and take a break from work or study. For instance, I often sit on a bench to read or take a short walk to clear my mind.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and support it with a specific reason and one example of benefit. Reduce hesitations and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to organise your response.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like more parks because our mountain city attracts many visitors, especially in summer, and additional parks would provide better recreation and viewing areas. For example, new parks near viewpoints could reduce crowding and improve tourists' experiences.

Gợi ý: Clarify which park you mean and explain why you want to visit it with specific details. Avoid vague storytelling and improve grammar (e.g., 'a park in New York' and 'lots of trees'). Use 2–3 clear sentences with linking words like 'because' and 'for example'.

Ví dụ: Yes — my teacher recently told me about a park in New York that I want to visit because it has many mature trees and interesting history. For example, when developers planned new buildings there, they preserved the trees, which makes the park feel very green and peaceful.

× I used to go to the park with my friends, specially with the school trips.

✓ I used to go to the park with my friends, especially on school trips.

'Specially' is incorrect here; use 'especially'. Also the preposition for events is 'on school trips' not 'with the school trips'. Use the gerund/phrase 'on school trips' to indicate occasions.

× I also went to several parks at my city.

✓ I also went to several parks in my city.

Use the preposition 'in' for locations within a city. 'At' is used for specific points, not to indicate being inside a city.

× Actually it is a mountain city, so there's a lot of parks.

✓ Actually it is a mountain city, so there are a lot of parks.

Use plural verb 'are' with plural noun 'parks' ('there are a lot of parks'). Also 'a mountain city' is acceptable; primary error was subject-verb agreement with 'there' construction.

× I still, uh, like going to the park, uh, especially when I want to, uh, take a break of my uh, job or uh, my student life, umm, I like to go to the park to relax and uh, to have uh, a good time with myself.

✓ I still like going to the park, especially when I want to take a break from my job or my student life. I like to go to the park to relax and spend some time by myself.

Incorrect preposition 'take a break of' should be 'take a break from'. 'Have a good time with myself' is unnatural; use 'spend some time by myself'. Also remove filler words and split into two sentences for clarity.

× I really want to see more parks in my city, especially because my city, uh, is located in the top mountain in Palestine, so there is a lot of visitors every, uh, every year, especially in umm in summer time.

✓ I really want to see more parks in my city, especially because my city is located on a mountain in Palestine, so there are a lot of visitors every year, especially in summer.

Use 'on a mountain' or 'in the mountains' rather than 'in the top mountain'. Use 'there are' for plural 'visitors'. 'Every year' is correct without extra words; 'summer time' should be 'summer'.

× Three days ago, my teacher explained them a park, that is located in New York, cause it has a lot of tree, especially, the story is when they want to build a new building, they, uh, they grow at, so it's beautiful.

✓ Three days ago, my teacher told us about a park that is located in New York because it has a lot of trees. The story is that when they wanted to build a new building, they preserved the trees, so it's beautiful.

Multiple issues: 'explained them a park' is incorrect—use 'told us about a park' (Incorrect use of pronouns and verb structure). 'Cause' should be 'because'. 'Tree' should be plural 'trees'. Sequence of events requires past tense: 'wanted' and 'preserved' to match 'three days ago'. Clarify 'they grow at' to a natural phrasing like 'they preserved the trees'.