Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Well, yes, I like taking pictures of different wheels. I think nature wheels are very legacy and they make good photos, so I often take photos when I go hiking. For example, last week I took many sea pictures and I shared them with my friends.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
Well, I prefer Rob areas because they are peaceful and the sandway is beautiful so I can like sleep. For example, I like working in the countryside and the taking photos of the field and the mountains
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
Well, I prefer wheels in my own country because they are more familiar and meaningful to me. For example, I like walking by the local mountains and rivers because they remind me of home and family and I go there quite often.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,再补充一个具体原因和经历。注意区分“views”(景色)和“wheels”(车轮);“legacy”不适合描述自然景色,可以用“beautiful”或“stunning”。“Sea pictures”可改为“photos of the sea”,并避免重复使用“take pictures/photos”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy photographing beautiful landscapes because they make memorable pictures. I often take photos when I go hiking; last week, I took some pictures of the sea and shared them with my friends.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 需要清楚说明你喜欢城市还是乡村景色。答案中的“Rob areas”和“sandway”意思不明确;如果你想说乡村,可使用“rural areas”“scenery”或“landscape”。补充具体理由时,可以提到乡村安静、空气清新,以及田野或山脉等景物;同时注意语法,如“taking photos of the fields and mountains”。
Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because they are peaceful and the scenery is beautiful. The open fields and mountains help me relax, and I enjoy taking photos of them when I visit the countryside.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答结构清楚,也提供了个人理由和例子。注意“wheels”应为“views”;“walking by the local mountains and rivers”不太自然,可以说“walking near the local mountains and rivers”。结尾可用连接词把熟悉的景色与家庭回忆联系起来,并避免句子过长。
Ví dụ: I prefer the views in my own country because they feel familiar and meaningful to me. For instance, I often walk near the local mountains and rivers, which remind me of home and my family.
× I think nature wheels are very legacy and they make good photos, so I often take photos when I go hiking.
✓ I think nature wheels are very beautiful and they make good photos, so I often take photos when I go hiking.
“Legacy”通常表示“遗产”或“传统”,不适合用来描述景色,也不能自然地与“very”搭配。这里应使用可以描述景色、且适合由“very”修饰的形容词,例如“beautiful”。
× For example, I like working in the countryside and the taking photos of the field and the mountains
✓ For example, I like working in the countryside and taking photos of the field and the mountains.
“the countryside”是常见固定表达,因此要保留“the”;但“taking photos”中的“taking”是与“working”并列的动名词,不应在前面加“the”。并列结构应保持一致:“working … and taking …”。