Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarify and tighten your response: begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and filler words (uh, I I), correct basic grammar (store them, I was born/grew up -> store them). Add one specific supporting detail and use a linking word to connect reasons. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me remember my trips. For example, I store scenic shots on my phone and look at them when I return home. However, sometimes I forget to photograph places because I prefer to watch the view with my own eyes.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct topic sentence and correct tense and phrasing (I was born and grew up). Combine related ideas with linking phrases (for example, because, and also) and give a specific example of what you like about urban views. Avoid short fragments like 'Yeah' in formal test speech.

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I was born and grew up in Ho Chi Minh City, so they feel familiar to me. For example, I enjoy the sight of tall buildings lit up at night, and I find the city lights and skyline especially attractive.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and separate ideas with linking words (however, also). Remove fillers and grammatical errors (beaches, if I have the opportunity). Add one concrete detail about a view at home and one expectation about foreign views to make the answer more specific and coherent.

Ví dụ: I like both views at home and abroad. In my country I enjoy beaches and mountain landscapes, such as the long sandy coasts in summer, while when I travel overseas I hope to see different cityscapes and cultural landmarks that I can't find locally.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views and storage them and when I go back home I can uh, see them and remember about my trips.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views and storing them, and when I go back home I can see them and remember my trips.

The verb 'storage' is a noun; the correct verb form is the gerund 'storing' after 'and'. Also 'remember about my trips' is unnatural: 'remember my trips' or 'remember the trips' is correct. Use commas to separate clauses. Suggestion: after verbs like 'like' use verb+ing; use 'remember' without 'about' when recalling experiences.

× But to be honest I always forget to take photos because I I spend so much time to see by my eyes.

✓ But to be honest I always forget to take photos because I spend so much time looking with my eyes.

The phrase 'spend so much time to see by my eyes' is ungrammatical. After 'spend time' use verb+ing ('looking'). 'See by my eyes' is redundant; use 'looking' or 'watching'. Remove duplicate 'I'. Suggestion: use 'spend time doing something' and avoid redundant phrases.

× In my talk, I prefer views in urban areas because I was born and grow up in urban areas in Ho Chi Minh City, and it will be familiar for me.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because I was born and grew up in Ho Chi Minh City, and they are familiar to me.

The sequence describes past events: 'grow up' should be past 'grew up' to match 'was born'. Also 'it will be familiar for me' is incorrect: use plural 'they are familiar to me' or 'it is familiar to me' depending on subject. Use 'familiar to someone' not 'for'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent (past for past events) and match subject number.

× And I really like the view of tall buildings.

✓ And I really like the view of tall buildings.

This sentence is acceptable, but depending on meaning you can say 'the view of tall buildings' or 'views of tall buildings'. No grammatical change required; included for completeness.

× Yeah, with a lot of light in the evenings.

✓ Yes, with a lot of lights in the evenings.

This fragment is informal. 'A lot of light' is acceptable when referring to general illumination, but if meaning many lights on buildings use 'a lot of lights'. Also start with 'Yes' rather than 'Yeah' in formal speech. Suggestion: decide whether meaning 'illumination' (light) or 'many lights' (lights).

× Actually I like both, In my country there are a lot of beautiful uh, views of mountains or beach and if I have opportunity I would like to go abroad and experience their views.

✓ Actually I like both. In my country there are a lot of beautiful views of mountains and beaches, and if I have the opportunity I would like to go abroad and experience views there.

Several issues: 'beach' should be plural 'beaches' to match 'mountains' (parallelism). 'If I have opportunity' needs the article 'the opportunity'. 'Experience their views' is unclear; 'experience views there' or 'see views abroad' is clearer. Also punctuation: split into sentences. Suggestion: use parallel noun forms and include necessary articles.