Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Of course, taking pictures can help me to record our daily life so that we can recall it. After that, it will give us many fascinating memories and also there are many beautiful signs in our country. And moreover, it's very convenient to record it using my.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I usually prefer the rural areas because in my opinion the rural areas have much more beautiful signs and what's more, we live in the city and we always see the metropolitans. However, the beautiful signs in the countryside is much more rare, so it's more fascinating.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
Oh, it's hard, very hard to compare. But if I had to make this comparison, I would like to say I prefer the signs in Europeans much more because the cultural in European is quite different from ours and the sign in European is very beautiful.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、简洁并注意句子完整性。避免重复和语法错误(如“using my”不完整),并使用更具体的细节来支持观点。可以先给出主题句,然后用一到两句具体例子或原因,并用连接词保持连贯。注意词汇准确(如把“signs”改为“scenes”或“landscapes”)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos because they help me preserve everyday moments and memories. For example, I often photograph sunsets by the river and family gatherings, which I later look back on to relive those moments. Taking pictures is also convenient now with my smartphone, so I can capture scenes whenever I see something beautiful.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答需更简洁并纠正语法与词汇错误(如“metropolitans”“signs”“is much more rare”)。给出明确的理由并使用连接词(because, however, therefore)。可以加入具体对比细节说明城市与乡村景观的不同。
Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because they offer quieter, more natural landscapes that I rarely see in the city. For instance, fields, winding country roads and traditional houses feel more peaceful, whereas urban areas are often busy and crowded. Therefore, I find the countryside more relaxing and visually appealing.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要避免模糊和不准确的表达(如“signs in Europeans”“the cultural in European”)。直接给出立场并提供具体原因或例子,使用正确的词汇(landscapes, architecture, culture)。保持句子简短且逻辑清晰。
Ví dụ: It's difficult to choose, but I would say I prefer views in some European countries because their architecture and historical landscapes are very different from what I'm used to. For example, I enjoyed the old town squares and medieval churches in Prague, which felt unique compared with modern scenes at home.
× Of course, taking pictures can help me to record our daily life so that we can recall it.
✓ Of course, taking pictures can help me record our daily life so that we can recall it.
原句中使用 “help me to record” 是可接受的,但在英式和美式英语中常省略不定式中的 to,使用 “help me record” 更自然和简洁。建议在口语和写作中采用更自然的表达:help + 人 + 动词原形。
× After that, it will give us many fascinating memories and also there are many beautiful signs in our country.
✓ After that, it will give us many fascinating memories, and there are also many beautiful scenes in our country.
原句中 'signs' 用词不当,应为表示风景的 'scenes'。另外 'also' 的位置更常见于连词之后或句中间,改为 'there are also' 更自然。这里归到冠词/用词类错误(列表中最接近的为 Article errors),但主要问题是词汇选择与副词位置。建议学习副词位置规则和常用搭配。
× And moreover, it's very convenient to record it using my.
✓ And moreover, it's very convenient to record them using my camera.
原句中缺少宾语 'camera',且代词 'my' 后应接名词。‘record it’ 与前文 'pictures' 或 'scenes' 的复数不一致,改为 'record them' 或直接 'record'。建议确保代词后跟名词并保持单复数一致。
× I usually prefer the rural areas because in my opinion the rural areas have much more beautiful signs and what's more, we live in the city and we always see the metropolitans.
✓ I usually prefer rural areas because, in my opinion, rural areas have many more beautiful scenes, and what's more, we live in the city and we always see metropolitan areas.
原句中 'much more beautiful signs' 用法不自然,'many more beautiful scenes' 更合适;'the metropolitans' 用法错误,应为 'metropolitan areas' 或 'cities' 表示大城市。量词和词搭配需注意,建议学习 'many/much' 与可数/不可数名词的搭配以及常见名词短语。
× However, the beautiful signs in the countryside is much more rare, so it's more fascinating.
✓ However, the beautiful scenes in the countryside are much rarer, so they're more fascinating.
主谓不一致:主语 'the beautiful scenes'(复数)应使用复数动词 'are';'much more rare' 也不自然,应改为比较级 'rarer'。此外 'fascinating' 指风景本身吸引人,前后主语要一致。建议复习主语与动词的一致及比较级用法。
× Oh, it's hard, very hard to compare.
✓ Oh, it's hard—very hard—to compare.
原句口语可以接受,但书面/正式口语中使用破折号或逗号更清晰。这里归类为句子结构问题,建议在停顿处使用适当标点以增强表达清晰度。
× But if I had to make this comparison, I would like to say I prefer the signs in Europeans much more because the cultural in European is quite different from ours and the sign in European is very beautiful.
✓ But if I had to make this comparison, I would say I prefer the scenery in Europe much more because European culture is quite different from ours and the scenery in Europe is very beautiful.
句中多处用词和搭配错误:'the signs in Europeans' 应为 'scenery in Europe' 或 'scenes in European countries';'the cultural in European' 应为 'European culture';'the sign in European' 应为 'the scenery in Europe'。还需注意 'Europe'(地名)与 'European'(形容词)区别。建议复习地名与形容词性形式的用法以及名词搭配(scenery, culture 等)。