Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản (thì, danh động từ và số nhiều), câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn với câu chủ đề và chi tiết cụ thể, tránh lặp từ và thêm liên từ để mạch lạc. Ví dụ: dùng "taking pictures" (plural), "helps" (3rd singular), nói rõ nơi chụp và cảm xúc cụ thể, giới hạn trong tối đa 5 câu.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I often photograph mountains and rural areas because their peaceful scenery helps me relax. For example, I like capturing misty mornings on mountain trails and farmers working in quiet fields. These shots remind me to slow down and appreciate nature.

Gợi ý: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng (chủ yếu danh từ số nhiều và tính từ phù hợp), cấu trúc câu nên có câu chủ đề rõ ràng và giải thích cụ thể vì sao thích cảnh đô thị; dùng liên từ để nối ý, tránh chia câu thiếu hoàn chỉnh.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy modern architecture and lively streets. The variety of cafes, parks and skyline views makes me feel energized and comfortable. For instance, I like watching city lights at night because they create a vibrant atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Tránh nói lấp lửng ("maybe", tiếng ậm ừ) và lặp ý; cần câu chủ đề rõ ràng (I prefer views in other countries) rồi nêu lý do cụ thể với ví dụ. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và trật từ ("different cultures", "experience different cultures"). Giữ tối đa 5 câu.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they let me experience different cultures and landscapes. For example, I enjoy wandering through historic European towns and trying local foods, which gives me a deeper understanding of daily life there. Seeing unfamiliar architecture and traditions always broadens my perspective.

× Yes I do I like taking picture of different view because it help me feel comfortable and I often taking photo at mountain and a rural area so it help me feel like.

✓ Yes, I do. I like taking pictures of different views because they help me feel comfortable, and I often take photos in the mountains and in rural areas, so they help me relax.

The student used singular nouns where plural forms are required (picture -> pictures, view -> views, photo -> photos, mountain -> mountains, a rural area -> rural areas) and mismatched verbs (help -> they help). Use plural nouns when referring to general instances and match plural subjects with plural verbs. Also use correct verb forms (I often take). Suggestions: use plural for general categories, add articles/ prepositions (in the mountains, in rural areas), and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Yes I do I like taking picture of different view because it help me feel comfortable and I often taking photo at mountain and a rural area so it help me feel like.

✓ Yes, I do. I like taking pictures of different views because they help me feel comfortable, and I often take photos in the mountains and in rural areas, so they help me relax.

The sentence incorrectly uses the -ing form after 'often' ('often taking') where the simple present ('often take') is required. Use the base verb after adverbs of frequency. Suggestion: use 'I often take' instead of 'I often taking'.

× Yes I do I like taking picture of different view because it help me feel comfortable and I often taking photo at mountain and a rural area so it help me feel like.

✓ Yes, I do. I like taking pictures of different views because they help me feel comfortable, and I often take photos in the mountains and in rural areas, so they help me relax.

The verb 'help' does not agree with the singular subject 'it' and the intended plural subject. When referring to pictures/views/photos (plural), use 'they help'. Also change 'it help me feel like' to a clearer phrase like 'they help me relax'. Ensure subjects and verbs agree in number.

× I often taking photo at mountain and a rural area so it help me feel like.

✓ I often take photos in the mountains and in rural areas, so they help me relax.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect for general locations like mountains and rural areas. Use 'in' for areas/places ('in the mountains', 'in rural areas'). Also include articles where necessary ('the mountains'). Suggestion: use 'in' + plural for general locations.

× I prefer view in urban areas because there is modern and grounded so I can feel happy and. Comfortable when I stay in here.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because they are modern and grounded, so I feel happy and comfortable when I stay here.

The sentence mixes singular/plural and uses 'there is' with a plural idea. 'View' should be plural 'views' and for plural use 'they are' rather than 'there is'. Also 'stay in here' is incorrect; use 'stay here'. Suggestion: match plural noun with plural verb and use 'stay here'.

× I prefer view in urban areas because there is modern and grounded so I can feel happy and. Comfortable when I stay in here.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because they are modern and grounded, so I feel happy and comfortable when I stay here.

Use 'views' (plural) to refer generally, and match with 'they are'. 'There is' is used for singular existence and is incorrect here. Also remove unnecessary 'in' before 'here'.

× Maybe, but I refer you in other country because I can see many a different culture in in other countries and experience many cultural, uh, different culture, so I can.

✓ Maybe, but I prefer other countries because I can see many different cultures and experience various cultural practices.

Pronoun and word choices are incorrect: 'I refer you in other country' is ungrammatical. Likely intended 'I prefer other countries'. Also 'many a different culture' is wrong; use 'many different cultures'. Avoid repeating 'culture' and use plural for general meaning. Suggestion: use 'prefer' for preference and plural 'cultures'.

× Maybe, but I refer you in other country because I can see many a different culture in in other countries and experience many cultural, uh, different culture, so I can.

✓ Maybe, but I prefer other countries because I can see many different cultures and experience various cultural practices.

The original sentence is fragmented and repetitive, with unclear structure. 'so I can.' is incomplete. Combine ideas into a single clear sentence: state the preference, then the reasons. Remove filler words and repetition. Suggestion: plan sentence: subject + verb + object, then a clear clause explaining reasons.