Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and add a brief specific example to make the answer more vivid. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason and an example using a linking word (e.g., "for example"). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures because they help me preserve memories. For example, when I visited a seaside town last year, I photographed the sunrise to remember the colours and atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and remove filler words. Use linking words to explain the reason and give a specific detail or contrast. Avoid vague phrases and pronunciation hesitations.

Ví dụ: It depends, but when I travel I usually prefer rural areas because they offer unique natural scenes. For instance, I like photographing old country roads and fields, which give more variety than typical cityscapes.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer (prefer both) then explain briefly with a specific reason and an example. Avoid repetition and be precise about what attracts you to domestic vs. foreign views.

Ví dụ: I prefer both. At home I can capture familiar cultural scenes, but I also enjoy photographing foreign landscapes because they offer unfamiliar architecture and colours — for example, I loved taking photos of narrow streets and markets when I visited Spain.

× Yes, I do like taking pictures. It helps me to capture all the beautiful places and the views to make memories.

✓ Yes, I do like taking pictures. They help me capture beautiful places and views and make memories.

Errors: mixed singular/plural reference and wordiness. 'It helps me to capture all the beautiful places and the views to make memories' uses singular 'It' to refer to plural 'pictures' and repeats articles unnecessarily. Correction: use plural pronoun 'They' to agree with 'pictures' (subject-verb agreement / reference), remove unnecessary 'to' after 'help', drop redundant articles 'the' before general nouns, and join coordinated verbs with 'and' to make the sentence clearer and grammatically correct. Suggestions: Use consistent subject-pronoun agreement, avoid unnecessary articles, and keep verb forms simple (help + base verb).

× Well it depends because if I travel then I would prefer a rural area where I can take diff new duly pictures and newly places uh exploring.

✓ Well, it depends. If I travel, I would prefer a rural area where I can take different new pictures and explore new places.

Errors: run-on sentence, missing commas, informal/incorrect words ('diff', 'duly', 'newly'), incorrect word order and gerund use at the end ('places exploring'). Corrections: split into two sentences for clarity, add commas after introductory phrases, replace informal/incorrect words with 'different' and 'new', use 'explore' (base verb) rather than awkward 'places exploring', and keep parallel structure 'take pictures and explore places.' Suggestions: avoid slang abbreviations, maintain parallel verb constructions, and place modifiers (new, different) before nouns. This correction maps to: 26 Sentence structure errors and 8 Verb + -ing form issues because the gerund/verb forms were misused and sentence flow was incorrect.

× I prefer both of it. If I don't know any northern new place then obviously I would like to explore the new the new places to take pictures and views of it.

✓ I prefer both. If I don't know any northern place, I would like to explore new places and take pictures of them.

Errors: incorrect pronoun 'it' for plural reference, redundant phrase 'the new the new', awkward word order 'northern new place', and unnecessary 'any' before a specific noun phrase. Corrections: 'I prefer both' is natural; use plural pronoun 'them' to refer to 'places'; place adjectives in correct order ('northern' before 'place' is fine but 'northern new place' is awkward — use 'any northern places' or 'a northern place'); remove duplicate words and simplify 'take pictures of them.' Suggestions: ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents, avoid duplicate words, and order adjectives naturally (opinion-size-age-shape-color-origin-material-purpose + noun).