Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid contradictory connectors like “but however,” and give one or two specific reasons or an example. Keep it to no more than 3–4 short sentences and use linking words correctly (for example, “although” or “but”).

Ví dụ: I don’t take photos very often, but I do enjoy photographing landscapes on special occasions. For example, when I visit a scenic mountain, I like to take a few shots to remember the view and share them with family.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear preference and then support it with specific reasons. Correct vocabulary mistakes (“rural”) and avoid repeating contradictory words. Use linking words such as “because” or “so” to connect your reason.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views to urban ones because the countryside feels peaceful and the scenery is more natural. For instance, I enjoy wide fields and mountain vistas where I can relax and take clearer photographs.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence stating your preference and add one or two specific supporting details about why your country’s views appeal to you. Use correct phrasing (e.g., “I’m from Nepal”) and avoid colloquial fillers like “yeah.”

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because Nepal has dramatic Himalayan landscapes that are hard to find elsewhere. For example, the mountain scenery and traditional villages offer unique photo opportunities and a strong sense of place.

× Usually I'm not that big fan of taking pictures, but however, yes.

✓ Usually I'm not that big a fan of taking pictures, but I do sometimes.

The phrase 'that big fan' requires the article 'a' before 'fan' (article error). Also 'but however' is redundant—use either 'but' or 'however'. The corrected sentence adds 'a' and replaces the awkward 'but however, yes' with 'but I do sometimes' to clearly indicate occasional interest. Suggestion: insert the indefinite article 'a' with 'fan' and avoid using both 'but' and 'however' together.

× However, it depends on the area, but I would prefer ruler more than urban areas.

✓ It depends on the area, but I would prefer rural areas to urban ones.

The word 'ruler' is a spelling error for 'rural' (lexical error related to adjective choice). Also using 'prefer X more than Y' is acceptable but more natural is 'prefer X to Y'. Additionally, 'urban areas' can be replaced by the pronoun 'urban ones' to avoid repetition. Suggestion: correct spelling to 'rural' and use 'prefer X to Y' or 'prefer X over Y' for clarity.

× I belong from the Himalayan country, so yeah, I prefer Nepal over any other countries.

✓ I come from a Himalayan country, so I prefer Nepal over any other country.

The verb 'belong' is incorrectly used with 'from' here; the correct verb is 'come' or 'am from' (use of verb and preposition). Also 'Himalayan country' should be preceded by an indefinite article 'a'. Finally, 'any other countries' should be singular 'any other country' after 'over'. Suggestion: use 'I come from' or 'I am from', include 'a' before 'Himalayan country', and use 'country' in singular after 'any other'.