Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid redundancy and fix errors (e.g., 'a beautiful pictures', 'in the HD version').

Ví dụ: I don't usually take photos of views; I prefer to enjoy them with my eyes. Also, I don't own a good camera, so I haven't tried photographing landscapes in high quality.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and complete your idea. Use singular/plural correctly and add a linking phrase to support your opinion. Provide a brief specific detail about why urban views appeal to you.

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views to rural ones because modern skyscrapers and bridges show interesting architectural details. For example, I enjoy how glass facades reflect light and create dramatic cityscapes at night.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and provide specific reasons with correct tense and phrasing. Use linking words to connect ideas and one concrete example of what you want to see abroad.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new scenery and cultural differences. For instance, after living in the Philippines for over twenty years, I would love to photograph European old towns with their historic streets and unique architecture.

× I don't like taking pictures of different views, I would just like to see it for my eyes and I really don't have a camera or device that would allow me to capture a beautiful pictures in an HD version, so I didn't really try to take one.

✓ I don't like taking pictures of different views; I would just like to see them with my own eyes, and I really don't have a camera or device that would allow me to capture beautiful pictures in HD, so I didn't really try to take any.

Errors: incorrect article use ('a beautiful pictures' should be 'beautiful pictures' or 'a beautiful picture'); wrong pronoun number ('it' referring to 'views' should be 'them'); awkward phrase 'for my eyes' better as 'with my own eyes'; 'in an HD version' is unnatural — use 'in HD'; 'one' ambiguous, use 'any' with plural 'pictures'. Suggestion: match singular/plural pronouns to nouns, remove unnecessary articles before uncountable or plural nouns, and use natural collocations (e.g., 'in HD', 'with my own eyes').

× I would prefer to take a nice view of an urban areas than rural ones, because I think a skyscraper is much more fascinating in sense of architectural and.

✓ I would prefer to see a nice view of urban areas rather than rural ones, because I think skyscrapers are much more fascinating in terms of architecture.

Errors: 'a urban areas' mixes singular article with plural noun — use 'urban areas' without 'a' or use singular 'an urban area'; 'take a nice view' is unnatural — use 'see' or 'view'; 'a skyscraper is much more fascinating in sense of architectural and' has subject-verb and article issues and incomplete phrase. Use plural 'skyscrapers are' to match general statement and 'in terms of architecture' for correct expression. Suggestion: ensure articles match count (a/an for singular), use plural verbs for general plural subjects, and complete comparative phrases ('in terms of').

× I would like to take a view of different countries because it is new in the eye and I have been living in the Philippines for more than two decades now, so I seen a lot and it's time to view another country and explore their beauties.

✓ I would like to see views of different countries because they would be new to me, and I have been living in the Philippines for more than two decades now, so I have seen a lot and it's time to visit another country and explore its beauties.

Errors: 'take a view' is unnatural — use 'see views' or 'visit'; 'it is new in the eye' incorrect pronoun and expression; use plural 'they' for 'views' or 'countries' and 'new to me'; 'so I seen a lot' uses wrong verb form — correct is 'I have seen a lot' (present perfect); 'explore their beauties' should match singular 'another country' with 'its beauties' or change to plural. Suggestion: use correct present perfect for experiences, match pronouns to their antecedents, and choose natural collocations ('visit a country', 'see views').