Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: حاول تحدث بصورة أكثر وضوحاً وترتيباً: ابدأ بجملة واضحة تُجيب مباشرةً على السؤال ثم أضف جملة أو جملتين تدعمان إجابتك بتفاصيل محددة. تجنب الترديد والتوقفات (uh) وكرر الكلمات. استخدم عبارات ربط بسيطة مثل “because” أو “for example” لتوضيح السبب أو ذكر مثال.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I like photographing wide, impressive scenes around me because they capture the atmosphere and details of a place. For example, I often photograph sunsets and busy streets to show colors and movement.

Gợi ý: اجب بشكل مباشر ثم وضح السبب بمثال محدد. تجنب التكرار والأخطاء في المفردات (مثل "fuse" بدلاً من "view"). استخدم أدوات الربط مثل "because" أو "so" لتسلسل الأفكار واجعل الجواب أقل من خمس جمل.

Ví dụ: I don’t mind either urban or rural views because I focus on interesting scenes. For example, I photograph urban skylines for their lights and rural fields for their peaceful colors.

Gợi ý: رد مباشرة ثم قدم سبباً واضحاً مع مثال. تجنب التقطُّعات والكلمات غير الصحيحة مثل "fuse" وعبارات غامضة مثل "the abroad thing". قل ما تقصده مثل "scenes from abroad" واذكر متى تختار كل خيار لتكون إجابتك محددة وطبيعية.

Ví dụ: It depends. If I want to promote my country, I photograph local landmarks and traditions because they show our culture. Otherwise, I take photos abroad to capture different architecture and landscapes.

× Of course. And I prefer the the picture, the whole, uh, astonishing thing from my environment. So yeah.

✓ Of course. I prefer the whole picture, the entire astonishing scene from my surroundings.

The sentence uses a repeated article 'the the' and an awkward order of noun phrases. Use a single definite article and natural collocations: 'the whole picture' and 'from my surroundings'. This corrects article duplication and improves word order and collocation. Suggestion: avoid repeating articles and choose common noun+modifier combinations. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× I didn't mind if it's, uh, urban areas or, uh, rural areas, rural areas.

✓ I don't mind whether it's urban or rural areas.

The original mixes tenses and repeats 'rural areas'. Use present simple 'don't mind' for general preference and pair 'urban' with 'rural areas' or use both plural consistently. Suggestion: use 'whether' to present two alternatives and keep number agreement. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× So, uh, if the fuse, it's wonderful and exquisite, I will picture it.

✓ So, if the scenery is wonderful and exquisite, I will photograph it.

'Fuse' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'scene' or 'scenery'. 'I will picture it' is unnatural; use 'photograph it'. Also adjust 'it's' to 'is' after 'if' clause for clarity. Suggestion: choose the correct noun (scenery) and use the verb 'photograph' for taking pictures. Grammar problem type ID: 10

× It depends on the situation. If I want to uh, uh, show the whole world my country, I will picture the fuse from my environment.

✓ It depends on the situation. If I want to show the whole world my country, I will photograph the scenery of my area.

Use 'photograph' instead of 'picture' as a verb. 'Fuse' is incorrect; use 'scenery' or 'landscape'. 'From my environment' is unnatural; use 'of my area' or 'in my country'. Tense 'will' is fine for future intention here. Suggestion: use natural collocations: 'photograph the scenery of my area.' Grammar problem type ID: 6

× If the opposite, I will picture it. The abroad thing, yeah.

✓ If it's the opposite, I will photograph things abroad.

Fragmented pronoun use: 'If the opposite' lacks a clear subject. 'The abroad thing' is ungrammatical; use 'things abroad' or 'foreign scenery'. Clarify subject with 'it's' and use plural noun. Suggestion: make conditional complete and use 'abroad' correctly as an adverb or 'abroad scenery' replaced by 'scenery abroad.' Grammar problem type ID: 12