Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors, some awkward phrasing and redundancy. Make a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (use gerunds properly and subject-verb agreement), and add one specific detail to support your opinion. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 3–4 sentences). Use a linking word if adding a reason.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because many landscapes are truly beautiful. For example, I often photograph coastlines at sunset since the light and colors change quickly, creating striking images.

Gợi ý: Your response answers the question but contains errors in word choice and grammar, and could be more concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (I don't prefer one over the other), then give one specific reason and an example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'however' for coherence, and correct nouns/plurals (urban areas, rural areas).

Ví dụ: I don't prefer urban or rural views in general because I choose locations based on how photogenic they are. For instance, I might photograph a bustling city skyline at night, but I also enjoy quiet countryside fields at sunrise because of the soft light.

Gợi ý: The answer is understandable but has repetition, grammar mistakes, and lacks specificity. Begin with a clear statement (I prefer views in my own country), then give a precise reason and a concrete example. Fix grammar (my country, looks good, taking pictures) and avoid repeating words. Keep to 2–3 sentences max.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I'm familiar with many beautiful spots and cultural scenes. For example, I often photograph riverside sunsets at a nearby park, where the light and reflections create peaceful, memorable photos.

× Yes, I really like to taking picture of different views because some views is very beautiful.

✓ Yes, I really like taking pictures of different views because some views are very beautiful.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund 'taking' rather than the infinitive 'to taking' (error type 8). 'Picture' needs plural 'pictures' to match 'different views' (singular/plural issue, ID 1). 'Some views is' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; the plural subject 'views' requires the plural verb 'are' (subject-verb agreement, ID 27). Combine corrections: use 'taking pictures' and 'are'. Suggested improvement: after verbs like 'like', use the gerund (like + -ing), and ensure nouns agree in number with the subject and verb.

× No, I do not have a prefer specific view for rural area or urban area.

✓ No, I do not have a preferred specific view for rural areas or urban areas.

The phrase 'have a prefer' is incorrect; 'prefer' is a verb, while the adjective 'preferred' or the verb 'prefer' with an object should be used (quantifier/word form issue, ID 14). Also 'rural area' and 'urban area' should be plural when speaking generally: 'rural areas' and 'urban areas' (singular and plural issue, ID 1). Suggested improvement: use 'preferred' as an adjective or restructure the sentence: 'I do not prefer a specific view in rural or urban areas.' Ensure consistent plural forms for general categories.

× It's according to my choice because where the view is very gorgeous, I can take pictures there.

✓ It depends on my choice: if the view is very gorgeous, I can take pictures there.

'It's according to my choice' is not natural English; use 'It depends on my choice' or 'It depends on where the view is beautiful' (sentence structure error, ID 26). The clause 'because where the view is very gorgeous' mixes conjunctions and relative clauses incorrectly; use a conditional or clearer subordinate clause: 'if the view is very gorgeous.' Suggested improvement: choose appropriate connective words ('depends on', 'if') and avoid stacking 'because' with 'where' in this context.

× I prefer to view in our own country because in our country many views are looking so good.

✓ I prefer to travel in my own country because many views there look very good.

'Prefer to view' is unnatural; use 'prefer to travel' or 'prefer sights in' depending on meaning (present tense/word choice issue, ID 6). 'In our country many views are looking so good' uses 'are looking' incorrectly; stative description should use simple present 'look' (present tense issue, ID 6). Also 'our' is acceptable but 'my own country' matches the speaker perspective. Suggested improvement: use simple present for general truths ('look') and choose verbs that convey intended action ('travel', 'see', 'visit').

× I I like to taking pictures of sunset Riverside photos.

✓ I like taking sunset riverside photos.

Again, 'like' should be followed by the gerund 'taking' rather than 'to taking' (verb + -ing issue, ID 8). The phrase 'sunset Riverside photos' is awkward: 'sunset riverside photos' or 'photos of the riverside at sunset' is natural. Also remove the repeated 'I'. Suggested improvement: avoid repeating pronouns, use gerund after 'like', and order nouns naturally: 'sunset riverside photos' or 'photos of the riverside at sunset.'