Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like taking pictures of different views. When I meet some beautiful views, I may picture photo, it will be by my phone and we will and I will appear it after these days.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I prefer views in urban areas because in urban there are many scenery contact by personal per personal and natural scanner.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer views in other countries because other countries I never went to. So I want to see I so I want to have a try to enjoy other countries gallery maybe it's very beautiful.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然且更精确。先用一句主题句直接回答,然后用一两句具体细节说明拍照的方式和原因,避免重复和语法错误。可练习使用简单的时态(现在时)和常用短语(take photos, with my phone, save them)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I usually take pictures with my phone when I see something beautiful, and then I save them so I can look back at them later.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答要有明确的主题句并给出具体原因。使用连词(because, so)连接原因,提供一两个具体例子(skyscrapers, street life)来支持观点,避免无意义的词汇。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in urban areas because cities have interesting architecture and lively streets. For example, I like photographing tall buildings and colorful markets because they have a lot of details and energy.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答要流畅并提供具体理由。先直接回答偏好,再说明原因(curiosity, different culture, new scenery),並加入一個具體的例子或期待,避免重复和语法错误。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I have not visited them yet and I am curious about different landscapes and cultures. For instance, I would love to photograph historic streets in Europe or tropical beaches in Southeast Asia.
× When I meet some beautiful views, I may picture photo, it will be by my phone and we will and I will appear it after these days.
✓ When I see a beautiful view, I may take a photo with my phone and look at it later.
句子结构混乱:原句中有多个并列且不完整的短语("may picture photo", "it will be by my phone", "we will and I will appear it"),使句意不明确。建议将想表达的动作拆成逻辑清晰的短句并用正确动词搭配,如把“picture photo”改为“take a photo”,并使用“with my phone”表示工具,最后用“look at it later”表示过后会查看。
× I prefer views in urban areas because in urban there are many scenery contact by personal per personal and natural scanner.
✓ I prefer views in urban areas because there are many sights and more human-made and natural scenery.
介词使用和词语搭配错误:原句中“in urban”应为“in urban areas”或“in cities”;“scenery contact by personal per personal and natural scanner”是错误的搭配和词汇。应使用“sights”或“scenery”,并用“human-made and natural”来区分人造与自然景观。建议学习常见搭配:in urban areas / in cities, human-made scenery, natural scenery。
× I prefer views in other countries because other countries I never went to.
✓ I prefer views in other countries because I have never been to those countries.
句子结构与时态问题:原句中“other countries I never went to”是非标准语序且时态不准确。应使用完成时“have never been to”来表示到目前为止未去过,并把主语与从句顺序调整为更自然的英语表达。
× So I want to see I so I want to have a try to enjoy other countries gallery maybe it's very beautiful.
✓ So I want to see them. I want to try visiting other countries' sights because they might be very beautiful.
句子冗长且结构混乱,重复“so I want”。原句“have a try to enjoy other countries gallery”搭配错误,应改为“try visiting other countries' sights”或“try to visit other countries’ attractions”。使用“might be”表示可能性更恰当。建议拆分为两句,避免重复。