Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng sai, tránh câu thừa. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó nêu 1–2 lý do cụ thể và kết thúc bằng một ví dụ ngắn gọn. Chú ý: 'in social media' → 'on social media'; 'when I visit to Data' và 'take photos in writing' là sai nghĩa — cần nói tên địa điểm rõ ràng hoặc thay bằng 'when I travel' và mô tả hành động chụp ảnh phong cảnh.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking landscape photos because they help me remember places and special moments. I often post my favourite shots on social media to share them with friends. For example, when I travel to the mountains I take pictures of sunrise scenes to remind me of the view.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời hơi lặp và có lỗi phát âm/viết lặp ('city city'). Cần cấu trúc rõ: chủ đề + hai ý so sánh ngắn gọn với liên từ phù hợp. Thêm từ vựng cụ thể (e.g., 'skylines', 'architecture', 'open fields') và sửa ngữ pháp: 'I will take photos of modern buildings and cityscapes.'

Ví dụ: It depends on my mood. If I visit the countryside, I prefer open fields and fresh air for peaceful landscape photos, whereas in cities I focus on architecture and vibrant skylines to capture urban life.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng, nhiều lỗi từ vựng ('wheels' không đúng) và ý không mạch lạc. Nên trả lời trực tiếp ('I prefer views in my own country') rồi nêu 1–2 lý do cụ thể, tránh tiếng lắp và từ không chính xác. Ví dụ lý do: familiarity, cultural significance, ease of travel, undiscovered places. Tránh mơ hồ như 'less good where I haven't visited yet.'

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because the landscapes are familiar and culturally meaningful to me, and I can easily revisit favourite spots. However, I also enjoy visiting other countries to discover new scenery and different architectural styles.

× Yes, I definitely like taking photos with scenery views because it helps me remember places and moments.

✓ Yes, I definitely like taking photos of scenic views because they help me remember places and moments.

Relevant issues: use of incorrect preposition and adjective form, and singular/plural agreement. Change 'with' to 'of' for photos of something; 'scenery views' is incorrect—use adjective 'scenic' + 'views'; change 'it helps' to 'they help' to agree with plural 'photos' or 'views'. Suggestion: say 'photos of scenic views' and match verb number to subject.

× I also share it in social media with my friends.

✓ I also share them on social media with my friends.

Incorrect preposition and pronoun agreement. Use 'on social media' not 'in social media'. 'It' refers to plural 'photos', so use 'them'. Suggestion: use 'share them on social media'.

× For example, when I visit to Data, I take photos in writing.

✓ For example, when I visit Da Lat, I take photos while writing down notes.

Sentence structure and word choice errors. 'Visit to' is incorrect; use 'visit' + place. 'Data' appears to be a place name error—likely 'Da Lat'. 'Take photos in writing' is unclear; if meaning take photos and write notes, say 'take photos while writing down notes'. Suggestion: clarify intended meaning and use correct place name and structure.

× If I go to the countryside I will go for a walk to enjoy greenfields and fresh air and if I travel to a city I will take photos in a a modern building and city city.

✓ If I go to the countryside, I will go for a walk to enjoy green fields and fresh air; if I travel to a city, I will take photos of modern buildings and the city.

Multiple tense and plurality issues and repetition. Keep future 'will' consistent. 'Greenfields' should be two words 'green fields'. 'Take photos in a a modern building and city city' has article and repetition errors—use 'photos of modern buildings and the city'. Suggestion: separate clauses with commas/semicolons and correct nouns to plural when appropriate.

× I prefer wheels in my own country because it's very beautiful and breathtaking and I want to travel, uh, less good where I haven't visited yet.

✓ I prefer traveling in my own country because it is very beautiful and breathtaking, and I want to travel to places I have not visited yet.

Incorrect word choice and pronoun/verb form. 'Wheels' is incorrect—likely meant 'travel' or 'tourism'; replace with 'traveling'. 'It's' is fine but expand to 'it is' for formality. 'Less good where I haven't visited yet' is ungrammatical—use 'places I have not visited yet'. Also use present perfect 'have not visited' for unspecified past experiences. Suggestion: use correct vocabulary ('traveling') and proper clause order 'travel to places I have not visited yet'.