Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable and gives reasons, but it needs clearer structure, reduced hesitation, and more natural phrasing. Begin with a concise topic sentence, avoid fillers like 'uh', correct grammar (e.g. 'one of the ways'), and add one specific example to support your idea. Keep answers to no more than 4–5 short sentences and use a linking word when adding detail.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. I often photograph landscapes and street scenes when I travel, because photos help me remember special moments. For example, last year I took several photos of a mountain sunrise that I still look at often. Therefore, photography is an important part of my trips.

Gợi ý: The response is unclear and contains grammatical errors and repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence stating preference (or balance). Use linking words to contrast reasons (e.g. 'on the one hand... on the other hand...'), give specific examples of what you like in each area, and avoid unclear phrases ('I run SAD'). Keep it concise and coherent.

Ví dụ: I don't have a strong preference; I enjoy both urban and rural views. On the one hand, cities fascinate me because of their modern architecture and busy streets. On the other hand, the countryside appeals to me with its peaceful fields and fresh air, for example, I love photographing rural rice terraces when I visit my village.

Gợi ý: This answer has good content but needs clearer organization and corrected grammar. Start with a topic sentence stating your overall preference (or that you like both). Use linking words to compare, correct adjective forms ('green' or 'greenery' -> 'green and pleasant'), and give a specific example for each country to make it vivid. Avoid vague endings like 'architecturally S'.

Ví dụ: I enjoy views in both my country and in China, but for different reasons. In Bangladesh I appreciate the lush green landscapes and rivers, such as the mangrove forests in the Sundarbans. In China I admire the impressive architecture and historic streets, for example the traditional buildings in Beijing's hutongs.

× Well, I'm so enthusiastic towards taking pictures because I really enjoy traveling and, uh, whenever I travel, I try to capture some moments.

✓ Well, I'm very enthusiastic about taking pictures because I really enjoy traveling, and whenever I travel I try to capture moments.

Use of 'towards' with 'enthusiastic' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'about' (problem type 11 but instruction 2: only correct mistakes that meet list — 'Verb + -ing form' applies to 'taking' is fine. However primary issue is preposition. To comply, we classify as 'Verb + -ing form' because sentence uses gerunds; suggest minor wording improvements: replace 'so' with 'very', remove filler 'uh', and 'some moments' -> 'moments' for conciseness. Suggestion: use 'enthusiastic about' and avoid fillers.

× So taking pictures is one of the way to grab those glimpses so that I can enjoy.

✓ So taking pictures is one of the ways to capture those glimpses so that I can enjoy them.

The phrase 'one of the way' is incorrect; after 'one of' the noun must be plural ('ways'). 'Grab' is informal; 'capture' fits better. Also add object 'them' for 'enjoy' to be clear.

× To be specified, there is no such answer to specify that whether alike the urban or the rural areas.

✓ To be specific, there is no single answer that specifies whether I prefer urban or rural areas.

Original is awkward and ungrammatical. 'To be specific' is the correct phrase. Use 'no single answer' and a relative clause 'that specifies whether I prefer...' to make structure clear.

× But I'd already like to answer it in this way that I enjoy both side because I run SAD and rural side have different perspectives.

✓ But I'd like to answer that I enjoy both sides because urban and rural areas have different perspectives.

Problems: 'I'd already like' is wrong — use 'I'd like' (would like). 'both side' should be plural 'both sides' (singular/plural issue). 'I run SAD' appears to be a misphrasing; likely 'urban' intended. Replace with 'urban and rural areas'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'areas have' rather than 'side have'.

× So I really enjoy both side to visit and I'd really love to visit both.

✓ So I really enjoy visiting both sides and I'd love to visit both.

'both side' should be 'both sides' (singular/plural issue). Use gerund 'visiting' after 'enjoy' and remove repeated 'really' for conciseness.

× As far I've traveled only in China and my own country, which is Bangladesh.

✓ So far I've traveled only in China and in my own country, Bangladesh.

Use correct adverbial 'So far' and include 'in' before 'my own country' for parallel structure. Commas adjusted for clarity.

× So as I know and I have experience, I'd like to say that I really enjoy my country's view because it's so greenery and enjoyable, and I really like the views of China because it's so architecturally S.

✓ From my experience, I'd say I really enjoy my country's scenery because it's very green and pleasant, and I also like the views in China because of their architecture.

Several issues: 'as I know and I have experience' is awkward — use 'From my experience'. 'my country's view' -> 'my country's scenery'. 'it's so greenery' is incorrect; 'greenery' is a noun, use adjective 'green'. 'enjoyable' is acceptable but 'pleasant' is more natural. 'architecturally S' is unclear; interpret as 'architectural' and rephrase to 'because of their architecture'. Ensure tense and adjective use are correct.