Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details linked logically. Correct minor grammar (e.g., remove stutter "I I've") and replace vague phrases with concrete examples (what views, which social media). Aim for 2–4 sentences with linking words like "because" or "so".

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I often photograph landscapes and forests because I love nature, and I enjoy capturing light and composition. I usually post the best shots on Instagram to share them with friends and family.

Gợi ý: Use precise vocabulary and elaborate one clear reason with a brief example. Avoid vague word forms like "the freshers"; say "fresh air". Add a linking word to connect reason and example. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I love being surrounded by nature and fresh air. For example, I enjoy hiking in quiet valleys where I can see mountains and streams without city noise.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, direct answer and support it with a specific reason or example. Fix grammar and phrasing (e.g., "if I have to love what mine is" is unclear; "its landscape is amazing" is better). Avoid filler words and repetition. Use 2–3 sentences with a linking word like "because" or "for example".

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I feel connected to its landscapes. For example, Ethiopia's diverse scenery — from highlands to valleys — feels special to me and I enjoy photographing those places.

× I usually take pictures of the view that I am in, basically because I I've said that I love nature.

✓ I usually take pictures of the view I am in, basically because I have said that I love nature.

Original has redundant 'that' and contraction 'I've said' is awkward in context; use present perfect 'have said' correctly and omit unnecessary 'that'. Suggest: remove redundant words for clarity and use correct present perfect form for something you have said before.

× So I usually take pictures and I also like to share with my friends and also with family.

✓ So I usually take pictures and I also like to share them with my friends and my family.

Missing object pronoun 'them' after 'share' causes ambiguity. Also use consistent 'my friends and my family' to show possession. Suggest always include the object after 'share' when referring to previously mentioned items.

× So I'll post it on my socials.

✓ So I post them on my social media.

Informal contraction 'I'll' (will) suggests future but context describes habitual action, so simple present 'I post' is correct. 'My socials' is informal; use 'my social media'. Also 'them' refers to 'pictures'. Suggest use simple present for habitual actions and clearer noun.

× I enjoy the views of the rural areas because I love nature and I love the freshers.

✓ I enjoy the views of rural areas because I love nature and I love the fresh air.

'Freshers' is incorrect; intended meaning is 'fresh air'. Also 'the rural areas' can be simplified to 'rural areas'. Suggest use correct noun 'fresh air' to convey natural atmosphere.

× I enjoy my country's view because I have a strong belief that if I have to love what mine is, I would love others too.

✓ I enjoy my country's views because I strongly believe that if I love what is mine, I will appreciate others too.

Original has awkward singular/plural and conditional tense. 'View' plural 'views' fits general preference. Phrase 'what mine is' is ungrammatical; use 'what is mine'. For general belief, use present simple 'I strongly believe' and 'I will' (or 'I would' depending on hypothetical). Suggest rephrase for natural English and correct noun forms.

× So I enjoy Ethiopian view because it's it's land. Escape is amazing, yeah.

✓ So I enjoy Ethiopia's scenery because its landscape is amazing.

Original is ungrammatical: 'Ethiopian view' awkward, repeated 'it's it's', and 'land. Escape is amazing' unclear. Use 'Ethiopia's scenery' or 'Ethiopian scenery' and 'its landscape is amazing' to convey meaning. Suggest avoid repetition and use clear nouns like 'scenery' or 'landscape'.