Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. Avoid repetition and grammatical slips.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me feel calm. For example, when I photograph a sunset over the sea, I focus on colors and composition to express my creative side.

Gợi ý: Clarify the preference and correct grammar and vocabulary mistakes. Give a direct answer (preference or both) followed by a reason and a specific example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'however' to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I prefer both urban and rural views because each offers different subjects to photograph. For instance, urban scenes give me interesting architecture and street life, whereas rural landscapes offer peace and natural patterns.

Gợi ý: Give a clearer structure: a topic sentence stating your preference, then a specific reason and an example. Fix grammar and avoid short, broken sentences. Mention what you enjoy about foreign views (culture, architecture, colors) to add detail.

Ví dụ: I enjoy views both at home and abroad because each provides unique perspectives. For example, in Japan I loved photographing traditional temples and busy streets, which contrasted nicely with the familiar landscapes I shoot in my own country.

× I would like to take pictures of different views as it makes me calm and can show my creative side.

✓ I would like to take pictures of different views because they make me feel calm and can show my creative side.

The original sentence mixes singular verb 'makes' with plural noun 'pictures' and uses 'as' awkwardly. 'Pictures' is plural, so use 'make'. Also use 'feel calm' for natural phrasing and 'because' is a clearer conjunction than 'as' here. Replace 'it' with 'they' to match plural antecedent.

× I like boots and I'm quite glad to see both views on this areas as it helps me to. Call my mind.

✓ I like both, and I'm quite glad to see views in both areas, as it helps to clear my mind.

Multiple issues: 'boots' seems incorrect contextually—likely intended 'both'; pronoun/phrase 'this areas' should be 'these areas' or 'both areas'; 'it helps me to. Call my mind.' is fragmented and ungrammatical. Use 'as it helps to clear my mind' for a coherent idea. Also ensure subject-verb agreement and correct pronoun/determiner forms (these/both).

× I actually like both. I have been to another country like Japan and I like to see both areas as I enjoy. It in the in another culture.

✓ I actually like both. I have been to other countries like Japan, and I like seeing both areas because I enjoy being in another culture.

Use 'other countries' (plural) when giving example 'like Japan' and to match general experience. 'I have been to' is correct but pair with plural for generality. Replace 'I like to see both areas' with 'I like seeing both areas' for natural gerund use. Fix extra fragments 'I enjoy. It in the in another culture' to 'because I enjoy being in another culture' to create a complete, grammatical sentence and correct preposition use.