Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your answer grammatically correct, concise and add a brief reason with a linking word. Use correct verb forms and avoid repetition (e.g., "I always take my phone"). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking pictures to record special moments, and I always carry my phone so I can capture anything I find interesting.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "while"). Correct awkward phrases (e.g., "a love of nature things" → "natural scenery"). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because they have natural scenery like flowers and trees, which I find relaxing, while urban areas often feel crowded and less attractive.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer, fix grammar ("my countries" → "my country", "old building" → "old buildings"), and provide a specific reason or example. Use one linking word (e.g., "because") and avoid repeating "I think." Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I find the architecture and scenery abroad more varied; for example, I enjoy modern cityscapes and coastal landscapes that I rarely see at home.

× Yes, a lot because I love to record my life and I always taking my phone to take a picture of whatever I like.

✓ Yes, a lot because I love to record my life and I always take my phone to take pictures of whatever I like.

The phrase 'I always taking' is incorrect because after subject plus adverb of frequency you need the base form or appropriate finite verb, not the -ing form. Change 'taking' to 'take'. Also 'a picture' is better as the plural 'pictures' to match 'whatever I like' which implies multiple instances. Suggestion: use 'I always take my phone' and 'take pictures'. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× I think I prefer rural areas because there are many flowers, trees and a love of nature things, but in urban areas it is just too cloudy and not very beautiful to me.

✓ I think I prefer rural areas because there are many flowers and trees and a love of nature, but in urban areas it is often too cloudy and not very beautiful to me.

The phrase 'a love of nature things' is ungrammatical: 'love' as a noun with 'a' plus 'things' is awkward. Use 'a love of nature' or 'natural things'. Also 'many flowers, trees and a love of nature things' had incorrect coordination. Additionally, 'it is just too cloudy' is acceptable but 'often' is more natural for frequency. Suggestion: simplify to 'many flowers and trees and a love of nature' or 'many natural things'. Grammar problem type ID: 14

× Actually I will choose other countries because I think in my countries there are too many old building and. I think that it's just not very beautiful.

✓ Actually I would choose other countries because I think in my country there are too many old buildings. I think that it's just not very beautiful.

Several issues: 'I will choose' is future but this preference is hypothetical or habitual, so 'I would choose' or 'I prefer' is better (present conditional). 'My countries' is incorrect plural for 'my country'. Use singular 'my country'. 'old building' needs plural 'old buildings'. Also there was an extraneous period after 'and.' Split into clear sentences. Suggestion: use 'I would choose other countries' and 'my country' and pluralize 'buildings'. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× I think I prefer rural areas because there are many flowers, trees and a love of nature things, but in urban areas it is just too cloudy and not very beautiful to me.

✓ I think I prefer rural areas because there are many flowers and trees and a love of nature, but in urban areas it is often too cloudy and not very beautiful to me.

The original mixes countable and uncountable nouns awkwardly: 'love of nature things' incorrectly combines singular 'love' with plural 'things'. Use 'a love of nature' (uncountable concept) or 'natural things' if countable. Also ensure parallel structure: 'many flowers and trees' is correct. Suggestion: choose either 'a love of nature' or 'many natural features'. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× ...but in urban areas it is just too cloudy and not very beautiful to me.

✓ ...but in urban areas it is often too cloudy and not very beautiful to me.

Using 'just' is not wrong but can be informal; 'often' more clearly indicates frequency. Also 'not very beautiful to me' is idiomatic but could be improved to 'I don't find them very beautiful.' Suggestion: consider 'I don't find urban areas very beautiful' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× Actually I will choose other countries because I think in my countries there are too many old building and. I think that it's just not very beautiful.

✓ Actually I would choose other countries because I think in my country there are too many old buildings; I think it's just not very beautiful.

The original contains a fragment 'and.' and poor sentence flow. Combine ideas clearly and fix pluralization and article issues. Use a semicolon or separate sentences to connect the related thoughts. Suggestion: restructure to one or two complete sentences for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 26