Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and sentence structure: use correct verb forms and articles, avoid filler words (uh), and make sentences concise. Add one clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details using linking words. Be specific about what you capture and why it relaxes you.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy traveling and taking photographs of new places because I love capturing unique scenes, such as waterfalls or quiet landscapes. For example, I often photograph waterfalls where the flowing water and green surroundings make me feel calm and relaxed.

Gợi ý: Focus on clarity and coherence: state your preference clearly in one sentence, then give specific reasons with linking words. Use correct vocabulary (village, peaceful surroundings, natural water, organic food) and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views in villages because they are peaceful and surrounded by nature. For instance, villages often have clear streams and fields where people grow organic food, which creates a healthy and relaxing environment.

Gợi ý: Clarify your meaning and answer directly: begin with a clear statement (Yes/No/I prefer...), then explain with specific reasons. Avoid unrelated or unclear details. Correct grammar and remove fillers. If you mean you haven't traveled abroad, say so and explain why (e.g., finances, opportunities).

Ví dụ: I haven't had the chance to see views in other countries yet, so I usually enjoy views in my own country. My city is mid-sized and has some nice spots, but I hope to travel abroad in the future to experience different landscapes and cultures.

× And I also going outside and traveling.

✓ And I also go outside and travel.

The original uses 'going' without an auxiliary verb, which is incorrect. According to the 'Verb + -ing form' rule, the -ing form must be used with an appropriate auxiliary (e.g., 'am going') or replaced by the base form for simple present. Here the student is stating habitual actions, so use simple present 'go' and 'travel'. Suggestion: use simple present for routines: 'I go outside and travel.'

× I love traveling and capturing some new think and new view for me.

✓ I love traveling and capturing new things and new views for me.

The word 'think' is a verb; the intended noun is 'thing'. Also 'view' should be plural 'views' when referring to multiple scenes. This falls under incorrect use of words affecting adjective/noun form. Use correct noun forms and pluralization: 'new things' and 'new views.'

× And I will also taking uh such a unique view, such a waterfall and peaceful, uh, I think it's uh, relaxing for me.

✓ And I will also take such unique views, such as a waterfall, which are peaceful; I think they're relaxing for me.

After 'will' the base verb form is required, not the -ing form. Replace 'taking' with 'take'. Also 'such a unique view, such a waterfall' is awkward; use 'such as a waterfall.' Ensure number agreement ('views' and 'they're'). Suggestion: use future simple 'will take' plus clearer clauses.

× I love the uh view of uh village because uh, there are very peaceful and making good surrounding and there was nature come to uh, natural water and uh natural, uh food from uh grow grow up for organ.

✓ I love the views of villages because they are very peaceful and have pleasant surroundings, with natural water and organically grown food.

Multiple issues: pronoun agreement ('there are' wrongly used with 'view of village'), sentence structure and word choice. Change 'the view of village' to 'views of villages' and use 'they are' to agree in number. 'Making good surrounding' is incorrect; use 'have pleasant surroundings.' 'There was nature come to natural water' is ungrammatical; clarify as 'with natural water.' 'Organ' likely means 'organic'; use 'organically grown food.' This corrects pronoun and noun usage and improves clarity.

× No, not yet because, uh, my country has uh, definitely side of the India and I will not see uh, another country of the view, uh, when I uh, my city is of uh, middle type of a city and when I was not a singer.

✓ No, not yet, because my country is definitely in India, and I have not seen views in other countries. My city is a medium-sized city, and I have not traveled abroad.

The original mixes tenses and contains unclear phrases. Use present simple 'is' for facts ('my country is in India') and present perfect 'have not seen' to indicate experiences up to now. 'Middle type of a city' is better expressed as 'a medium-sized city.' The phrase 'when I was not a singer' is irrelevant and unclear; replaced with 'I have not traveled abroad' to match context. Suggestions: use present/simple perfect appropriately for experiences and state facts clearly.