Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and avoid repetition (e.g., “small and tiny” redundant).

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Because I have a busy job, I often take photos during my commute to relax. For example, I like capturing close-ups of leaves and butterflies, which helps me notice small details I would otherwise miss.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct statement and avoid vague or incorrect phrases. Use correct tense and subject-verb agreement, and support your preference with one or two concrete reasons connected by linking words (for example, “because” or “and”). Avoid overgeneralised phrases like “high culture.”

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I grew up in a modern city. For instance, I enjoy the skyline of skyscrapers and the lively streets, since they remind me of the convenience and cultural activities available nearby.

Gợi ý: Make the answer grammatically correct and clearer. Give a direct stance, then explain with specific reasons and linkers. Avoid unclear phrases like “Quarters were fantastic” and fix singular/plural errors. If you haven’t travelled, say so and compare with concrete domestic examples.

Ví dụ: I would like to see views in other countries, but I haven't travelled abroad yet. Therefore, I appreciate the variety in my own country — for example, China has mountains, rivers and modern cities, so I can enjoy many different landscapes at home.

× I really love to do that actually, because I have a busy job and the only break I could enjoy is my commuting journey.

✓ I really love doing that actually, because I have a busy job and the only break I can enjoy is my commute.

Use of verb + -ing after 'love' is standard: 'love doing' not 'love to do' in this context (both possible but -ing is more natural). 'Could enjoy' implies past or conditional; present ability requires 'can enjoy'. 'Commuting journey' is unnatural; use 'commute' to mean the regular trip to work. Suggestion: say 'I really love doing that because I have a busy job and the only break I can enjoy is my commute.'

× I could take photos with some small leaves and even I can capture some small and tiny moments.

✓ I can take photos of small leaves and even capture little moments.

'Take photos with' is incorrect preposition; use 'take photos of' (preposition error). The sentence mixes 'could' and 'can' awkwardly; present ability uses 'can'. 'Small and tiny' is redundant; use 'little moments.' Also remove unnecessary 'I' before 'can capture' for conciseness. Suggestion: 'I can take photos of small leaves and even capture little moments.'

× For the small animals flying, like butterfly flying, that's amazing.

✓ Seeing small animals flying, like butterflies, is amazing.

Original phrasing is awkward and ungrammatical. Use a gerund phrase 'Seeing small animals flying' or 'Watching butterflies fly'. 'Butterfly flying' is incorrect; plural 'butterflies' and verb 'fly' or gerund 'flying' after noun. Suggestion: 'Seeing small animals flying, like butterflies, is amazing.'

× Actually, I prefer the urban views because I was born in a modern urban.

✓ Actually, I prefer urban views because I was born in a modern city.

'The urban views' is acceptable but 'urban views' is more natural. 'A modern urban' is wrong: 'urban' is an adjective; use the noun 'city'. Use present/past correctly: 'I was born in a modern city.' Suggestion: 'Actually, I prefer urban views because I was born in a modern city.'

× I get used to the busy streets, the busy traffic and skyscrapers and it will makes me so proud of my city.

✓ I am used to the busy streets, the heavy traffic and skyscrapers, and they make me so proud of my city.

Use 'be used to' rather than 'get used to' for a general state. 'The busy traffic' is better as 'heavy traffic'. Subject-verb agreement: 'it will makes' is incorrect—'it will make' or better 'they make' to refer to 'streets, traffic and skyscrapers' (plural). Also tense/modal unnecessary; use simple present 'they make'. Suggestion: 'I am used to the busy streets, the heavy traffic and skyscrapers, and they make me so proud of my city.'

× And modern life means convenience and high culture.

✓ Modern life means convenience and a rich culture.

'High culture' is awkward here; 'a rich culture' or 'a high level of culture' would be clearer. Also starting with 'And' is informal; omission improves formality. No article before 'modern life' is needed. Suggestion: 'Modern life means convenience and a rich culture.'

× I'd love to see the views in other countries, but unfortunately I've never been abroad before so I don't know whether the views in another country is.

✓ I'd love to see the views in other countries, but unfortunately I've never been abroad, so I don't know what the views in another country are like.

'I've never been abroad before' is redundant; 'before' can be omitted. The clause 'I don't know whether the views in another country is' has subject-verb agreement error: 'views' is plural so use 'are', and sentence needs 'what...are like' to ask about appearance. Also 'whether' less natural than 'what...are like.' Suggestion: 'I'd love to see the views in other countries, but unfortunately I've never been abroad, so I don't know what the views in another country are like.'

× Quarters were fantastic, but I think my country, China, has a variety of different landscapes.

✓ Other places might be fantastic, but I think my country, China, has a variety of landscapes.

'Quarters were fantastic' is unclear and ungrammatical; likely intended 'other quarters' or 'other places'. Use 'other places might be fantastic' for contrast. 'A variety of different landscapes' is redundant; 'a variety of landscapes' is concise. Suggestion: 'Other places might be fantastic, but I think my country, China, has a variety of landscapes.'

× It's gorgeous and enough for me to view.

✓ It's gorgeous and enough for me to enjoy.

'Enough for me to view' is unnatural: 'view' means to look at; better verb is 'enjoy' or 'satisfy me.' 'Enough' with 'to' usually pairs with verbs expressing ability or satisfaction: 'enough for me to enjoy' works. Suggestion: 'It's gorgeous and enough for me to enjoy.'