Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer communicates the main idea but has repetition, minor grammatical errors, and unclear phrases (e.g. “Sonic camera”, repeated "I also like", “cap”). To improve: 1) Begin with a clear topic sentence. 2) Remove repetition and avoid filler words. 3) Use one or two specific supporting details (what kinds of views, why they matter). 4) Keep it within 3–4 concise sentences. Also correct small grammar issues (e.g. “capturing the moment” not “capturing the moment and keeping it as a memory to look back to” is fine but tighten).

Ví dụ: I enjoy taking photos of different scenes, especially with a compact camera I bought for my birthday. I like capturing moments because they preserve memories of places I visited. For example, I often photograph sunsets and street scenes because they remind me of how a place felt at that time.

Gợi ý: Your response is relevant but repetitive and a bit wordy. To improve: 1) Start with a direct statement of preference (or neutrality). 2) Use linking words to connect reason (e.g. “because”, “so”). 3) Add one specific example to make it concrete. 4) Avoid repeating phrases like “doesn't matter” twice. Keep to 2–3 sentences for clarity.

Ví dụ: I don’t have a strong preference between urban and rural views because I photograph anything that catches my eye. For example, I shoot city architecture when I travel for work, but I take landscape photos on weekend hikes because they feel peaceful and timeless.

Gợi ý: Your answer conveys the idea but has hesitations, repetitions, and some awkward phrasing. To improve: 1) Give a clear topic sentence (e.g. “I don’t mind where I take photos”). 2) Remove filler words and repeated fragments. 3) Add a specific reason and a brief example (how photos from abroad differ emotionally or visually). 4) Use linking words like “because” or “so” to connect ideas and keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I don’t mind whether I’m photographing in my own country or abroad because I focus on images that move me. For instance, a street market abroad might offer vibrant colors, while a local festival gives me meaningful cultural memories, so I photograph both.

× I like taking pictures of different pictures using my Sonic camera, which I bought myself for my birthday.

✓ I like taking pictures of different scenes using my Sonic camera, which I bought myself for my birthday.

The original sentence repeats 'pictures' redundantly and uses an incorrect noun choice. Replace the second 'pictures' with a countable noun like 'scenes' and keep the article usage consistent. Also 'my Sonic camera' is fine; no article change needed. Suggestion: avoid repetition and choose the correct noun to match meaning.

× I like the idea of capturing the moment and keeping it as a memory to look back to.

✓ I like the idea of capturing the moment and keeping it as a memory to look back on.

The phrasal verb should be 'look back on' or 'look back at' rather than 'look back to'. This is a prepositional choice affecting sentence structure. Use 'look back on' for idiomatic English.

× I I also like to cap. I also like.

✓ I also like to capture moments.

Original contains repetition and fragment 'to cap.' which is incomplete. This is a sentence structure error; replace the fragments with a complete verb phrase 'to capture moments' to convey meaning clearly.

× It doesn't matter if either urban or rural areas, as long as anything that captures my interest and my idea, I take pictures of it.

✓ It doesn't matter whether they are urban or rural areas; as long as something captures my interest, I take pictures of it.

Use 'whether' to present alternatives and 'they are urban or rural' to refer to 'areas' (plural). 'Anything that captures my interest and my idea' is awkward; 'something captures my interest' is clearer. Adjust pronoun agreement and sentence connectors for correct present tense usage.

× It's like keeping a memory that is valuable and at the same time memorable so that I can go back to in the future.

✓ It's like keeping a memory that is valuable and memorable so that I can look back on it in the future.

The verb 'go back to' needs an object and is less appropriate here; 'look back on' + object is idiomatic. Also include the object 'it'. This corrects the preposition and completes the phrasal verb.

× It doesn't really matter if if from another country or in my own country, as long as it captures my interest and it is very pleasing to my eye, to my eyes.

✓ It doesn't really matter whether it's from another country or my own country, as long as it captures my interest and is pleasing to my eyes.

Use 'whether' for alternatives and contract 'it is' to 'it's' or keep 'it is' consistently; remove duplicate 'if'. Use 'from another country or my own country' for parallel structure. 'Pleasing to my eyes' is the correct plural noun; avoid repeating 'to my eye, to my eyes.'

× I also like to preserve the feeling during the moment that I captured the pictures.

✓ I also like to preserve the feeling of the moment when I take pictures.

Maintain present tense 'take pictures' to match habitual action. 'During the moment that I captured the pictures' is awkward; 'the feeling of the moment when I take pictures' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× So doesn't really matter if it's in our in our.

✓ So it doesn't really matter if it's in our country or elsewhere.

Original is a fragment with repetition. Add subject 'it' and complete the clause. Use 'our country or elsewhere' to complete the thought and keep present-tense habit description.