Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix tense/number errors (e.g., 'there are many beautiful places', 'a mountain or a beach').

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph mountains at sunrise and beaches at sunset because the light in those moments creates dramatic colors and reflections.

Gợi ý: Improve sentence structure and grammar, use linking words and give one concrete example. Correct singular/plural and word order (e.g., 'many green spaces', 'I often take pictures'). Keep to 2–3 sentences maximum.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because there are many green spaces and the scenery feels more natural. For instance, when I visit the countryside I often take pictures of rolling hills and small farms, and the fresh air helps me relax.

Gợi ý: Clarify your main point and correct grammar. Use one clear reason with linking words (e.g., 'because', 'so') and a specific example. Avoid unclear phrases like 'secondary at home' and fix word choices (e.g., 'traveling abroad gives me new experiences').

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because traveling abroad gives me new experiences and lets me learn about different cultures. For example, visiting a coastal town in Japan showed me coastal fishing traditions I had never seen at home, which I found exciting.

× I like taking pictures of different views because they are so many beautiful place to capture I would like to say and mountain or at a beach is really the great place to take a picture.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views because there are so many beautiful places to capture, I would like to say a mountain or a beach is really a great place to take a picture.

The sentence mixes singular and plural nouns incorrectly: 'so many beautiful place' should be 'so many beautiful places' (plural). Also 'and mountain or at a beach is' is ungrammatical; it should be 'a mountain or a beach is'. Use articles 'a' before singular countable nouns and match noun number to determiners. Suggestion: pluralize 'place' to 'places' when using 'so many', and add 'a' before singular nouns like 'mountain' and 'beach'.

× I prefer view in rural areas because there are so many greenery and the scenery feels more natural.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because there is so much greenery and the scenery feels more natural.

'I prefer view' should be 'I prefer views' (plural) or 'the view' depending on meaning. 'So many greenery' is incorrect because 'greenery' is an uncountable noun and requires 'so much' not 'so many'. Use 'is' with uncountable nouns: 'there is so much greenery'.

× When I'm in the country, shy Ioffer take picture every day.

✓ When I'm in the country, I often take pictures every day.

The original contains typos and incorrect word order ('shy Ioffer'). Correct structure is subject 'I' + adverb 'often' + verb 'take' + plural 'pictures'. Use 'often' to indicate frequency and plural 'pictures' for multiple photos. Fix typos and place adverb before the main verb for natural word order.

× Seeing the landscape of beautiful and the fresh air make me feel relaxed.

✓ Seeing the beautiful landscape and the fresh air makes me feel relaxed.

Adjective placement: 'landscape of beautiful' is incorrect; the adjective 'beautiful' should come before the noun: 'beautiful landscape'. Subject-verb agreement: compound subject 'Seeing the beautiful landscape and the fresh air' is treated as a singular experience here, so use 'makes' rather than 'make'. Ensure correct adjective position and verb agreement.

× But I will say I prefer rural areas.

✓ But I will say I prefer rural areas.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable; no third person singular error. It is included here to show no correction needed.

× I prefer views in other country because it's secondary at home, becomes familiar after saying it.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because places at home become familiar after a while.

'Other country' should be plural 'other countries' when speaking generally. 'It's secondary at home' is unclear; likely intended meaning is that views at home become familiar, so use 'places at home become familiar'. Use 'after a while' for natural phrasing. Also match plural/singular forms.

× Everyday traveling a boy give me new experience and the chance to learn about different culture which I find exciting and refreshing and is more attractive to my opinion.

✓ Traveling every day gives me new experiences and the chance to learn about different cultures, which I find exciting and refreshing and more attractive in my opinion.

Multiple issues: 'Everyday' (adjective) should be 'Traveling every day' or 'Every day, traveling' for correct adverbial use. Subject-verb agreement: singular subject 'Traveling' requires 'gives' not 'give'. 'A boy' is irrelevant and likely a mistake; removed. 'New experience' should be plural 'new experiences' when general. 'Different culture' should be plural 'different cultures'. Relative clause needs commas and 'more attractive in my opinion' is clearer than 'to my opinion'. Suggestions: fix word order, ensure subject-verb agreement, pluralize countable nouns when general, and use correct prepositional phrase 'in my opinion'.