Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, fluency and clarity. Begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, umm), and keep to 2–4 concise sentences. Use correct verb forms and specific reasons (e.g., memories, sharing, creativity). Add one concrete example of a photo you took and what it reminds you of. Use linking words like because, so, and for example to make the answer coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because photos help me remember places and moments. For example, I once photographed a seaside sunset which reminds me of a family holiday. I often print my favorite photos so I can display them at home and share them with friends.

Gợi ý: Clarify the preference and give specific reasons with correct vocabulary. Start with a direct topic sentence stating your preference (urban or rural), then provide 1–2 supporting reasons using linking words (because, for example, so). Avoid unrelated words like ‘pay for bills’ and reduce hesitations. Mention a concrete urban or rural feature (parks, skyline, fields) to be more precise.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because they are peaceful and less crowded. For example, wide green fields and quiet trails help me relax after a busy week, and I enjoy photographing nature scenes without the noise of traffic.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, grammatical topic sentence and specific supporting details. Correct vocabulary mistakes (use ‘views’ instead of ‘wheels’). Explain why being near family matters and add an example of a place at home you would visit. Use linking words like because and so, and limit to 2–3 sentences for clarity.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I can visit beautiful places with my family. For example, we often go to the lakeside nearby, which is scenic and convenient for a day trip, so we can spend quality time together.

× Yes, I really love to taking a picture with different views because, uh, when I go to another view, I can record what I have to see.

✓ Yes, I really love taking pictures of different views because when I go to a new place, I can record what I see.

The verb 'love' should be followed by the -ing form without 'to' (love taking). 'A picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match 'different views'. 'Another view' is awkward; 'a new place' or 'a different view' is clearer. 'Record what I have to see' is incorrect tense/word choice; use 'record what I see' to express capturing sights in the present general sense. Suggestion: Use 'love' + gerund, pluralize when appropriate, and simplify the clause to 'record what I see'.

× I can umm, print in the future was I need to go uh, going more to get the lilacs.

✓ I can print them in the future when I need to go again to get the lilacs.

The original sentence misuses verb forms and word order. 'Print in the future was I need to go' is ungrammatical. Use 'can print them in the future' and 'when I need to go again' for time reference. 'Going more' should be 'go again' to indicate returning. Ensure pronouns refer clearly ('them' refers to pictures).

× Yes, I pay for bills in the urban because, umm, a lot of the people in urban, they would like umm, to get more clean space because, uh, when they finish work, have a lot of stairs, they can go to, uh, relax there.

✓ Yes, I live in the city because many people in urban areas want cleaner spaces; after they finish work and climb many stairs, they can go there to relax.

'Pay for bills in the urban' is incorrect meaning; likely 'live in the city'. 'A lot of the people in urban' should be 'many people in urban areas'. 'Get more clean space' should be 'want cleaner spaces' (adjective order and word choice). The clause 'when they finish work, have a lot of stairs' lacks a subject and verb; rewrite as 'after they finish work and climb many stairs'. Use clearer quantifiers ('many' not 'a lot of the' in this context).

× Well, I prefer wheels in my own country because my own country is near my family.

✓ Well, I prefer to travel within my own country because it is close to my family.

'Prefer wheels' is unclear and likely wrong word choice; replace with 'prefer to travel within my own country'. Use the pronoun 'it' to refer back to 'my own country' instead of repeating the noun. 'Near my family' is better as 'close to my family'.

× I can bring my family go with me to see wheels.

✓ I can bring my family with me to see the sights.

The structure 'bring my family go with me' is incorrect. Use 'bring my family with me' or 'take my family with me'. 'See wheels' is incorrect vocabulary; likely 'see the sights' or 'see the views'. Adjust verb phrase and noun choice for clarity.

× Uh, how beautiful they are.

✓ They are so beautiful.

The original interjection 'Uh, how beautiful they are' is a fragment and more natural as a full sentence: 'They are so beautiful.' This places the adjective 'beautiful' correctly and forms a complete clause.

× Uh, I would like to share with my family and spend time with them.

✓ I would like to share these experiences with my family and spend time with them.

Add the object 'these experiences' (or 'these views') to clarify what 'share' refers to. The rest is fine, but specifying the object improves clarity and sentence completeness.