Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one brief reason with a linking word. Correct grammar (use 'take pictures', 'places', 'share pictures with'). Keep to 2–3 sentences and avoid filler words like 'like' and repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I often take photos when I visit new places because I like to share interesting scenes with my friends and family.

Gợi ý: Good structure and relevant details. Improve by correcting minor grammar (use 'rural areas' and 'grew up in a suburban area' -> specify 'a suburban area' is fine) and add a linking phrase to make the answer slightly more coherent. Keep it within three sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because I grew up in a suburban area and am used to being close to nature. As a result, I enjoy the peace and fresh air there, which helps me relax when I go for walks in the countryside.

Gợi ý: Clarify and complete your response. Begin with a direct topic sentence stating your experience, then give one reason with clear language. Avoid filler words and unfinished thoughts. Correct vocabulary (e.g. 'foreign country', 'see a country's nature in person', remove 'car'). Limit to 2–3 complete sentences.

Ví dụ: I haven't been to any foreign country, so I can't say for sure. However, I think I would prefer seeing natural views abroad because you can experience a country's landscapes in person, which is more informative and peaceful than just seeing photos online.

× Yes, of course I like to picture when I go to like upload or different place, because I usually like to share picture for to my friends or family.

✓ Yes, of course I like taking pictures when I go to new places or when I want to upload them, because I usually like to share pictures with my friends and family.

The sentence misuses the base verb 'picture' instead of the gerund 'taking pictures' (error type 8). Use gerund after 'like' to describe a hobby or habitual action. Also 'upload or different place' is unclear; replace with 'when I go to new places or when I want to upload them'. Preposition and article errors were corrected: 'share picture for to my friends or family' should be 'share pictures with my friends and family' (use plural 'pictures' and preposition 'with'). Suggestions: use 'like + -ing' for habits (I like taking photos), use plural for countable nouns when referring generally, and use 'share ... with' to indicate recipients.

× That's why I think you I take a picture.

✓ That's why I think I take pictures.

The original has extra words 'you' and mixes singular/plural. The intended meaning is habitual action, so use plural 'pictures'. This corrects singular/plural issue (type 1) and removes extraneous pronoun. Suggestion: keep sentence concise and use plural for repeated actions.

× I prefer rural area because I grew up in a suburban area and really get to experience nature.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I grew up in a suburban area and really got to experience nature.

'Rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' when speaking generally (type 1). Also tense consistency: 'grew up' is past, so 'really got to experience' fits past experience. Suggestion: use plural forms for general preferences and maintain consistent past tense for past experiences.

× I enjoy the peace and the fresh air there, and it helps me relax when I go for walks in the countryside.

✓ I enjoy the peace and fresh air there, and it helps me relax when I go for walks in the countryside.

Minor article and adjective use: 'the fresh air' can be 'fresh air' without 'the' for general statement (type 6). The structure and tense are otherwise correct. Suggestion: omit unnecessary definite articles when making general statements.

× Actually, I have never been to any foreign country, so I I cannot compare.

✓ Actually, I have never been to any foreign country, so I cannot compare.

There is a duplicated 'I' and the present perfect 'have never been' is correctly used to show life experience (type 6). Remove the extra pronoun. Suggestion: proofread to remove repeated words.

× But maybe I prefer visiting another country's nature because I can't know about this car nature in another country through social media.

✓ But maybe I would prefer visiting nature in another country because I cannot really know what it is like through social media.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear (type 26). 'Prefer visiting another country's nature' is awkward; rephrase to 'prefer visiting nature in another country'. 'I can't know about this car nature' seems to be incorrect words—likely 'the real nature' or 'what it is like'. Also change 'can't' to 'cannot really know' for nuance. Suggestion: restructure the sentence to 'I would prefer visiting nature in another country because I cannot really know what it is like through social media.'

× Yeah, it's really peaceful and.

✓ Yeah, it's really peaceful.

The sentence fragment 'and.' leaves the sentence incomplete (type 26). Remove the trailing 'and' or add a full clause. Suggestion: finish the comparison or stop at 'peaceful'.