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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Yes, I do. I like taking pictures of different ways because it's uh, when I, when I'm take pictures, uh, of umm, A1 dimensional ways, it's just boring and something like that. But when I, uh, take pictures of different ways, it's more of a fascinating curiosity and I have a lot of memories.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

Actually it's it doesn't spends on Orban or ruler array areas. It depends on beautiful or not. So is the way the Wiz are are starting I'd I'd take a picture but it but if it's doesn't, I don't I don't take.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

Actually I perform more umm with in another countries speak, uh, in another countries because for me it's more uh, curious Canadian than in my own country because I already solved the a lot of pictures in my own country, so it's boring for me sometimes.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: Сосредоточьтесь на чётком и связном ответе: начните с простой темы (Yes, I do), затем дайте одно–два конкретных объяснения без повторов и заполнителей («uh», «umm»). Используйте подходящие слова (views, scenes, landscapes) вместо ошибочных (ways) и избегайте неясных выражений («A1 dimensional»). Попробуйте связки (because, so, for example) для логики и ограничьте ответ 2–4 предложениями.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because each scene tells a new story and brings back memories. For example, I like capturing city skylines at sunset and quiet rural fields in the morning because the light and mood are very different.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 46.0

Gợi ý: Говорите яснее и используйте правильную лексику: вместо «spends on» и «Orban/ruler array» используйте depends on, urban, rural. Начните с прямого ответа (It depends), затем дайте конкретный критерий (if the view is beautiful) и пример. Уберите повторения и паузы, используйте связки (if, when, because). Держите 2–3 коротких предложения.

Ví dụ: It depends on the scene. If the view is beautiful or interesting, I will photograph it whether it is in the city or the countryside. For instance, I often take photos of striking architecture in towns and peaceful landscapes in villages.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Выражайте предпочтение ясно и корректно: используйте I prefer views in other countries или I prefer my own country. Объясняйте причину конкретно (new places, different culture, variety) вместо неясных фраз («curious Canadian», «solved the a lot of pictures»). Избегайте заполнителей и ошибок грамматики (in other countries, in my country). 2–3 лаконичных предложения достаточно.

Ví dụ: I prefer photographing views in other countries because I enjoy discovering new places and cultures. For example, I like to capture architecture and landscapes abroad because they often look very different from what I have at home.

Ngữ pháp

Verb in the present participle form

× when I, when I'm take pictures

when I take pictures

The phrase 'when I'm take pictures' incorrectly mixes auxiliary 'am' with base verb 'take'. Use simple present 'take' for habitual actions. Suggestion: use 'when I take pictures' or 'when I'm taking pictures' if emphasizing simultaneous action.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× A1 dimensional ways

one-dimensional views

'A1' is unclear and 'ways' is the wrong noun; 'one-dimensional' is an adjective modifying 'views'. Use 'one-dimensional views' for clarity.

Sentence structure errors

× it's just boring and something like that

it's just boring and similar

The phrase 'and something like that' is vague and informal. Replace with a concise adjective or phrase like 'and similar' or 'and uninteresting' to improve sentence structure.

Verb in the present participle form

× when I, uh, take pictures of different ways, it's more of a fascinating curiosity and I have a lot of memories

when I take pictures of different views, it's more fascinating and I make a lot of memories

Use 'take pictures of different views' (correct noun) and 'more fascinating' (adjective) rather than 'more of a fascinating curiosity'. 'I have a lot of memories' can be improved to 'I make a lot of memories' or 'I have many memories' depending on intended meaning.

Subject-verb agreement errors

× Actually it's it doesn't spends on Orban or ruler array areas

Actually it doesn't depend on urban or rural areas

The verb 'spends' is incorrect; the impersonal expression is 'it doesn't depend on'. Also 'Orban' and 'ruler array' are misspellings of 'urban' and 'rural'. Correct subject-verb agreement: 'doesn't depend'.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× It depends on beautiful or not

It depends on whether it's beautiful or not

Missing conjunction 'whether' to introduce the clause and missing subject 'it'. Use 'It depends on whether it is beautiful or not' for grammatical completeness.

Sentence structure errors

× So is the way the Wiz are are starting I'd I'd take a picture but it but if it's doesn't, I don't I don't take

So if the view is interesting, I'd take a picture, but if it isn't, I won't

Original sentence is jumbled and contains repetitions and unclear words ('Wiz'). Rephrase with conditional structure: 'If the view is interesting, I'd take a picture; if it isn't, I won't.' This fixes tense and structure.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I perform more umm with in another countries speak

I take more pictures in other countries

'Perform' is the wrong verb and 'with in' is incorrect. Use 'take pictures in other countries'. Also use 'other countries' rather than 'another countries' (plural).

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× in another countries because for me it's more uh, curious Canadian than in my own country

in other countries because for me it's more curious there than in my own country

Incorrect word 'Canadian' likely meant 'interesting/curious there'. Use 'more curious there' or better 'more interesting' and correct plural: 'other countries'.

Past tense issue

× because I already solved the a lot of pictures in my own country

because I have already taken a lot of pictures in my own country

'Solved' is incorrect verb; use 'taken' for photos. Present perfect 'have already taken' is appropriate to describe past actions with present relevance. Remove extra article 'the' before 'a lot'.

Sentence structure errors

× so it's boring for me sometimes

so it is sometimes boring for me

Reorder to 'sometimes boring for me' or 'it is sometimes boring for me' for natural English. Both are acceptable; keep 'it is' contraction optional.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BeautifulAttractive
BoringTedious
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
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