Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do. I like taking pictures of different ways because it's uh, when I, when I'm take pictures, uh, of umm, A1 dimensional ways, it's just boring and something like that. But when I, uh, take pictures of different ways, it's more of a fascinating curiosity and I have a lot of memories.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
Actually it's it doesn't spends on Orban or ruler array areas. It depends on beautiful or not. So is the way the Wiz are are starting I'd I'd take a picture but it but if it's doesn't, I don't I don't take.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
Actually I perform more umm with in another countries speak, uh, in another countries because for me it's more uh, curious Canadian than in my own country because I already solved the a lot of pictures in my own country, so it's boring for me sometimes.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: Сосредоточьтесь на чётком и связном ответе: начните с простой темы (Yes, I do), затем дайте одно–два конкретных объяснения без повторов и заполнителей («uh», «umm»). Используйте подходящие слова (views, scenes, landscapes) вместо ошибочных (ways) и избегайте неясных выражений («A1 dimensional»). Попробуйте связки (because, so, for example) для логики и ограничьте ответ 2–4 предложениями.
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because each scene tells a new story and brings back memories. For example, I like capturing city skylines at sunset and quiet rural fields in the morning because the light and mood are very different.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 46.0Gợi ý: Говорите яснее и используйте правильную лексику: вместо «spends on» и «Orban/ruler array» используйте depends on, urban, rural. Начните с прямого ответа (It depends), затем дайте конкретный критерий (if the view is beautiful) и пример. Уберите повторения и паузы, используйте связки (if, when, because). Держите 2–3 коротких предложения.
Ví dụ: It depends on the scene. If the view is beautiful or interesting, I will photograph it whether it is in the city or the countryside. For instance, I often take photos of striking architecture in towns and peaceful landscapes in villages.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Выражайте предпочтение ясно и корректно: используйте I prefer views in other countries или I prefer my own country. Объясняйте причину конкретно (new places, different culture, variety) вместо неясных фраз («curious Canadian», «solved the a lot of pictures»). Избегайте заполнителей и ошибок грамматики (in other countries, in my country). 2–3 лаконичных предложения достаточно.
Ví dụ: I prefer photographing views in other countries because I enjoy discovering new places and cultures. For example, I like to capture architecture and landscapes abroad because they often look very different from what I have at home.
× when I, when I'm take pictures
✓ when I take pictures
The phrase 'when I'm take pictures' incorrectly mixes auxiliary 'am' with base verb 'take'. Use simple present 'take' for habitual actions. Suggestion: use 'when I take pictures' or 'when I'm taking pictures' if emphasizing simultaneous action.
× A1 dimensional ways
✓ one-dimensional views
'A1' is unclear and 'ways' is the wrong noun; 'one-dimensional' is an adjective modifying 'views'. Use 'one-dimensional views' for clarity.
× it's just boring and something like that
✓ it's just boring and similar
The phrase 'and something like that' is vague and informal. Replace with a concise adjective or phrase like 'and similar' or 'and uninteresting' to improve sentence structure.
× when I, uh, take pictures of different ways, it's more of a fascinating curiosity and I have a lot of memories
✓ when I take pictures of different views, it's more fascinating and I make a lot of memories
Use 'take pictures of different views' (correct noun) and 'more fascinating' (adjective) rather than 'more of a fascinating curiosity'. 'I have a lot of memories' can be improved to 'I make a lot of memories' or 'I have many memories' depending on intended meaning.
× Actually it's it doesn't spends on Orban or ruler array areas
✓ Actually it doesn't depend on urban or rural areas
The verb 'spends' is incorrect; the impersonal expression is 'it doesn't depend on'. Also 'Orban' and 'ruler array' are misspellings of 'urban' and 'rural'. Correct subject-verb agreement: 'doesn't depend'.
× It depends on beautiful or not
✓ It depends on whether it's beautiful or not
Missing conjunction 'whether' to introduce the clause and missing subject 'it'. Use 'It depends on whether it is beautiful or not' for grammatical completeness.
× So is the way the Wiz are are starting I'd I'd take a picture but it but if it's doesn't, I don't I don't take
✓ So if the view is interesting, I'd take a picture, but if it isn't, I won't
Original sentence is jumbled and contains repetitions and unclear words ('Wiz'). Rephrase with conditional structure: 'If the view is interesting, I'd take a picture; if it isn't, I won't.' This fixes tense and structure.
× I perform more umm with in another countries speak
✓ I take more pictures in other countries
'Perform' is the wrong verb and 'with in' is incorrect. Use 'take pictures in other countries'. Also use 'other countries' rather than 'another countries' (plural).
× in another countries because for me it's more uh, curious Canadian than in my own country
✓ in other countries because for me it's more curious there than in my own country
Incorrect word 'Canadian' likely meant 'interesting/curious there'. Use 'more curious there' or better 'more interesting' and correct plural: 'other countries'.
× because I already solved the a lot of pictures in my own country
✓ because I have already taken a lot of pictures in my own country
'Solved' is incorrect verb; use 'taken' for photos. Present perfect 'have already taken' is appropriate to describe past actions with present relevance. Remove extra article 'the' before 'a lot'.
× so it's boring for me sometimes
✓ so it is sometimes boring for me
Reorder to 'sometimes boring for me' or 'it is sometimes boring for me' for natural English. Both are acceptable; keep 'it is' contraction optional.