Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and organize your answer: give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrases (e.g., "park cars", "I also picture"). Use correct articles and verb forms.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, when I visit parks or shopping malls I often photograph unique features such as old decorative pieces or interesting event setups. Also, I try to capture unusual angles to make the photos more memorable.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear preference sentence, then give two specific reasons connected with linking words. Correct grammar (use 'prefer rural areas to urban areas', 'they show local culture', 'how rice is produced') and avoid unclear phrasing.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas to those in urban areas. Firstly, rural landscapes often reflect local culture and traditional lifestyles, so you can see how people live. Secondly, you can observe farming activities, for example how rice is grown and harvested, which is very interesting to me.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then give specific examples and avoid vague or incorrect words ("force our country"). Use correct grammar and article use ("the views are"). Mention two brief specific examples with linking words.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country. As a Pakistani, I love visiting the northern areas where the scenery is stunning; for example, the snow-capped peaks and rocky mountains offer beautiful photo opportunities.

× Yes, I like taking pictures like when I went to park cars, shopping malls, then I take a pictures of unique things like some old decoration piece like where some events organized and I also take pictures of that and I also picture.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures. For example, when I go to parking lots or shopping malls, I take pictures of unique things, such as old decorative pieces used at events.

Multiple errors include incorrect verb forms and awkward phrase structures. 'When I went' should be 'when I go' to match habitual present (present tense for likes/habits). 'Park cars' is incorrect; use 'parking lots'. 'I take a pictures' has an article/number mismatch; use 'take pictures' (no article) or 'a picture'. 'Some old decoration piece' should be plural or rephrased: 'old decorative pieces'. Also remove redundant 'I also take pictures of that and I also picture.' Suggestions: use consistent present tense for habits, correct countable noun forms, and simplify to clear clauses.

× I prefer you in the rural area rather than urban area because in rural area will they show our culture, who will live and how we live to meet our culture like they were.

✓ I prefer the rural areas to urban areas because rural areas show our culture, how people live, and traditional ways of life.

Pronoun and reference errors: 'I prefer you' is wrong; use 'I prefer' with the object 'rural areas'. Use plural 'areas' for general preference. 'Will they show' is incorrect in this context; use present simple 'show' for general truths. 'Who will live and how we live to meet our culture like they were' is ungrammatical—replace with 'how people live, and traditional ways of life.' Suggestions: use correct pronouns/subjects, present simple for general statements, and clear phrasing for living and cultural practices.

× And they also show how to to produce the rice.

✓ They also show how rice is produced.

Preposition and verb form issues: 'how to to produce the rice' is incorrect and redundant 'to to' appears. Native phrasing is passive: 'how rice is produced' or active 'how people produce rice.' Also drop the definite article 'the' before 'rice' when speaking generally. Suggest using passive voice for processes or active with a general agent: 'how people produce rice.'

× I always prefer the views in our country because as a Pakistani, I always force our country like, uh, when we go northern, the view are very beautiful, like White Mountains, like uh, Rocky Mountains.

✓ I always prefer the views in our country because as a Pakistani I love my country. For example, when we go to the north, the views are very beautiful, such as the White Mountains and the Rocky Mountains.

Tense and word choice errors: 'I always force our country' is incorrect—likely 'I always favor' or 'I love my country'; use 'love' or 'prefer' for clarity. 'When we go northern' should be 'when we go to the north'. Subject-verb agreement: 'the view are' should be 'the views are'. Use 'such as' or 'for example' and include articles 'the' for named mountain ranges. Suggestions: use correct verbs for feelings ('prefer', 'love', 'favor'), proper prepositions ('to the north'), and match plural subjects with plural verbs.