Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, ngắn gọn (không quá 5 câu), dùng cấu trúc chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Cụ thể: (1) Mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp trả lời “Yes” hoặc “No”. (2) Thêm một đến hai câu hỗ trợ nêu lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể. (3) Sử dụng liên từ đơn giản để nối ý và sửa lỗi chia động từ và danh từ số nhiều/đơn. Ví dụ nên thay “fields” bằng “scenes/views”, “make” thành “makes”, bỏ những cụm thừa như “everywhere we go” lặp lại.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me relax and appreciate my surroundings. For example, I like photographing coastal scenes and city skylines, which look very different and interesting. When I improve my camera skills, I can capture details like light and color more effectively.

Gợi ý: Cần câu trả lời trực tiếp và mạch lạc, tránh lặp từ và ngôn ngữ nói không chuẩn. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng câu khẳng định rõ ràng (“I prefer…” hoặc “I like both, but…”). (2) Giải thích lý do bằng một câu hỗ trợ cụ thể (ví dụ: quieter, cleaner air, nature). (3) Dùng linking words như “because” hoặc “because of” và chú ý ngữ pháp (plural/singular, avoid fillers).

Ví dụ: I like both urban and rural views, but I prefer rural areas because they are quieter and more peaceful. For instance, rural landscapes often have open fields and fresh air, which make photography more relaxing.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời mơ hồ, có nhiều tiếng lặp và filler (uh, OK), và sai ngữ pháp. Cần trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng: (1) Tránh dùng thành ngữ không phù hợp như “take a rain check” trong ngữ cảnh này. (2) Nêu rõ bạn thích cái gì và vì sao — ví dụ nêu một điểm mạnh của quê hương hoặc một điểm thú vị của nước khác. (3) Giữ tối đa 2–3 câu, dùng thì đúng (every country has, not had).

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I am familiar with the best spots and can capture local culture more easily. For example, I know coastal villages and mountain trails nearby that offer unique light and traditional scenes for photography.

× Of course, taking pictures of different fields make me feel so comfortable to enjoy the sceneries around everywhere we go.

✓ Of course, taking pictures of different fields makes me feel so comfortable enjoying the scenery everywhere we go.

Subject-verb agreement: 'taking pictures' is a singular gerund phrase acting as the subject, so the verb should be 'makes' not 'make'. Word choice and countability: 'scenery' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'sceneries'; use 'the scenery' or 'scenery'. Also 'to enjoy the scenery around everywhere we go' is awkward; use 'enjoying the scenery everywhere we go' for a natural gerund phrase. Suggestion: Use singular verb with gerund subjects and use 'scenery' (uncountable) rather than 'sceneries'.

× Especially when I have skills to take picture with different views, I can enjoy the scenery in every.

✓ Especially when I have the skills to take pictures from different viewpoints, I can enjoy the scenery everywhere.

Verb form and countability: 'take picture' should be 'take pictures' (plural) and 'skills to take' is better as 'the skills to take' or 'skills in taking' — here 'the skills to take pictures' is natural. 'Different views' can be 'different viewpoints'. The sentence ended with 'in every' which is incomplete; use 'everywhere' to mean in all places. Suggestion: Use 'the skills to take pictures' or 'skills in taking pictures', pluralize 'picture' to 'pictures', and replace 'in every' with 'everywhere'.

× Both are both are exquisite to express, but I would like to prefer rural area 'cause if give me peace.

✓ Both are exquisite to me, but I would prefer rural areas because they give me peace.

Pronoun and redundancy: The sentence repeats 'Both are' unnecessarily. 'I would like to prefer' is redundant; use 'I would prefer'. 'Rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' or 'the rural area' depending on meaning. 'Cause if give me peace' is ungrammatical: use 'because they give me peace' with a subject for the verb 'give'. Suggestion: Remove redundancy, use 'prefer' not 'would like to prefer', and ensure pronouns agree ('they give me peace') and pluralize 'rural areas' or use 'the rural area'.

× OK, uh, I would like to take a rain check because every country had its own beautiful scenery and I would like to refer my own countries.

✓ OK, uh, I would like to take a rain check because every country has its own beautiful scenery and I would like to refer to my own country.

Tense: Use present simple 'has' rather than past 'had' because the statement is a general truth. Preposition and number: 'refer my own countries' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'refer to my own country' (singular) if the speaker means their country. If they mean multiple countries, say 'my own countries' and adjust verb accordingly. Suggestion: Use present tense for general facts ('has'), include the preposition 'to' after 'refer', and match singular/plural ('country' vs 'countries') to intended meaning.