Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, clarity and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and plurals, and use linking words to add detail. Be specific about what you like and how you take photos. Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, especially sunsets. I love sunsets because the sky changes color dramatically, creating a peaceful atmosphere. For this reason, I often try to capture them from a high viewpoint or with interesting foregrounds to add depth. Sometimes I adjust the exposure to preserve the vivid colors.

Gợi ý: Correct vocabulary and grammar, and be specific about contrasts. Use linking words (because, for example, and therefore) and avoid unclear words like 'technical' or 'Fazer.' Provide one or two concrete reasons and an example. Keep sentence count limited and coherent.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because the countryside is quieter and the air feels fresher than in the city. For example, when I visit my hometown, I enjoy walking through open fields and breathing clean air, which helps me relax and clear my mind. Also, the wide landscapes give me better photo opportunities.

Gợi ý: Fix grammar and choose accurate vocabulary. Begin with a direct statement, then add a specific reason and an example. Replace unclear phrases like 'local pub' and 'listening to the bar' with precise descriptions. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because they feel more familiar and comforting. For instance, I often sit under a tree in a nearby park after a busy day and listen to birds and distant conversations, which helps me unwind. These simple, familiar scenes make me feel at home.

× Yes, I enjoy taking picture of a different views, especially sunset.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially sunsets.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match 'different views' (plural). 'A different views' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun; remove 'a'. 'sunset' should be plural 'sunsets' to match general preference. Use plural forms for general statements about hobbies.

× I love them because they being the sky which everyone color and create a one serenity atmosphere.

✓ I love them because they show the sky, which everyone colors and creates a serene atmosphere.

The verb 'being' is incorrect here; use 'show' to indicate that views display the sky. 'Everyone color' needs third-person singular agreement 'colors' (see Type 2), and 'create' should be 'creates'. 'A one serenity atmosphere' is ungrammatical: use adjective 'serene' before 'atmosphere' and remove 'a one'. This corrects word choice and agreement.

× I love them because they being the sky which everyone color and create a one serenity atmosphere.

✓ I love them because they show the sky, which everyone colors and creates a serene atmosphere.

Subjects 'everyone' and 'which' require singular verbs 'colors' and 'creates'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'everyone' is singular, so verbs must be third-person singular. Also replace 'being' with an appropriate verb 'show' for clarity.

× So I often try to capture them a bit or from a high viewpoint.

✓ So I often try to capture them from a close angle or from a high viewpoint.

The original 'capture them a bit or from a high viewpoint' is unclear and structurally incorrect. 'A bit' is vague; use 'from a close angle' to contrast with 'from a high viewpoint'. Reorder phrase for clarity: 'capture them from X or from Y'.

× I prefer a rural area because the surrounding are more technical and weather is usually cooler and Fazer.

✓ I prefer rural areas because the surroundings are quieter and the weather is usually cooler and fresher.

Use plural 'rural areas' for a general preference. 'the surrounding' should be plural 'the surroundings'. 'more technical' is incorrect in this context; likely 'quieter' is intended. 'Fazer' is incorrect; use 'fresher'. Also add 'the' before 'weather' for specificity.

× I prefer a rural area because the surrounding are more technical and weather is usually cooler and Fazer.

✓ I prefer rural areas because the surroundings are quieter and the weather is usually cooler and fresher.

Subject 'surroundings' is plural, so use plural verb 'are'. Add article 'the' before 'weather' and ensure adjectives agree in context. Correct word choices improve meaning.

× For example, when I visit my countryside, I enjoy walking through open field and breathing clean air, which help me relax and clear my mind.

✓ For example, when I visit the countryside, I enjoy walking through open fields and breathing clean air, which helps me relax and clear my mind.

Use 'the countryside' for the general rural area. 'open field' should be plural 'open fields' for general activities. 'which help me' should be 'which helps me' because the noun phrase 'breathing clean air' is singular gerund phrase acting as subject of 'helps'.

× For example, when I visit my countryside, I enjoy walking through open field and breathing clean air, which help me relax and clear my mind.

✓ For example, when I visit the countryside, I enjoy walking through open fields and breathing clean air, which helps me relax and clear my mind.

Maintain simple present tense for habitual actions: 'visit', 'enjoy', 'walking'. Ensure verbs in relative clauses agree with their subjects; 'helps' matches the singular gerund phrase 'breathing clean air'.

× I prefer a view on my country because this generally feels more familiar and peaceful and it's help me relax.

✓ I prefer views in my country because they generally feel more familiar and peaceful and they help me relax.

Use plural 'views' for general preference. 'on my country' is incorrect preposition; use 'in my country' (preposition issue but fits article correction). 'this' should be 'they' to match plural 'views'; 'it's help' must be 'they help'.

× I prefer a view on my country because this generally feels more familiar and peaceful and it's help me relax.

✓ I prefer views in my country because they generally feel more familiar and peaceful and they help me relax.

Use preposition 'in' with 'country' to indicate location. 'on my country' is incorrect. Also align pronouns with plural noun 'views'.

× For example, I enjoy sitting under a tree in my local pub and listening to the bar after a busy day.

✓ For example, I enjoy sitting under a tree in my local park and listening to the birds after a busy day.

The original sentence uses 'local pub' and 'listening to the bar', which are illogical; likely intended 'park' and 'birds'. 'the bar' is a count noun meaning a place or sound; 'birds' fits listening in nature. Correct pronouns not needed but content corrected for coherence.